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Nathan Cox
I tried minimal techno
Dylan Baker
btw ur shit is peaking fix that
Tyler Torres
I do harsh noise regularly, but recently I collaborated with my techno friend and made some "noise techno" (Technoise)
what do you guys think?
here's some of my own regular tracks also:
David Flores
page 7 bump
Michael Jones
clyp.it
I'm trying to make my high voice better
Is this shit
I really really loved this, it should be on soundcloud or smth
This is good just work a bit on the mastering
Technoise, that's an interesting concept I would totally listen to on a daily basis. Keep it up
Ryan Davis
It's just my opinion doh, I'm a sucker for noise. Other people might find it a bit odd
Grayson Clark
hey i have some stuff for this just found out about clyp
definitely needs mixing
clyp.it
still need to add vocals
clyp.it
last one here, ive updated the mix but yea
clyp.it
lemme know how you feel
Kayden Bailey
shit forgot to add genre
lofi/slowcore/anti-folk (for the last one)
Kayden Nguyen
clyp.it
>tfw come up with melody only to realize its really fucking similar to another song
fml, is it noticeable guys?
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Kayden Richardson
enjoying this overall, can't get into the kick though - and I suppose that's what techno's about.
will do, thanks
like your voice, seems a little strained - like your trying too hard. becomes a bit grating after a while. guitar work's great though.
don't post many songs, especially without critiquing anybody at all. shame on you.
got some sour notes going on here in the beginning - cool if that's your thing and intentional. you're quite safe in terms of that melody, imo.
Evan Parker
Why is my singing so shit?
Easton Jenkins
there's definately a good idea in there, but it needs to be more fleshed out/ better drum samples
Leo Sanchez
decent enough idea, mastering isn't too good (clipping), you guitar rhythm is a bit off which takes away from the tempo change near the end
Logan Gomez
i posted last two replies
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>Gorillaz - plastic beach inspired kindof
>vocals
>live instrumentation
>programmed beats
Jackson Gutierrez
Daniel Long
clyp.it
a beat I just started working on about an hour ago, just first loop idea for main groove and shit
>trap/experimental/whatever you wanna call it
Feedback would be cool. (I know it needs to be mixed better, add lots of parts etc. this is just a sample clip)
Anthony Murphy
>clyp.it
this is pretty chill. i dig it
Joshua Hernandez
i dont mean to be an ass, but that was really bad.
Charles Watson
thanks for the constructive feedback bro
Tyler Reed
I wouldn't listen to this at all (barely touch any electronic music), but it sounds cool. You're obviously trying to make something that's atonal and odd - so it won't ever resonate with most of us. I don't think it's bad, for what it is.
Elijah Mitchell
Here's a track that's going towards an album I'm writing
It's one of the only ambient-ish tracks on their.
It's not bad, though I don't really know how to make good music with a daw. Lose the silence at the end though
Nice. I actually like this a lot
Luis Torres
made somting with a buddy
Aiden Sanchez
yeah the silence at the end isn't part of it lol this is just the first idea for a beat, not a complete song
Christopher Martinez
>clyp.it
a lot of nice sounds and textures and stuff, but seems to lack direction. I mean, I know it's ambient and all that, but at times it just kind of sounds like some little ents in a magical forest found some instruments and started playing random open strings on these guitars and shit and chilling in the magical forest
yeah idk im pretty high right now but this is cool just maybe add something more melodic to grab the attention more. or not. ents from the magical forest can be cool too, i guess
Levi Gutierrez
thanks man, means a lot
Adrian Cruz
Mason Edwards
I had some cool ideas for guitar things
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Pls don't steal
Jose Thompson
dude im stealing all ur ideas.
Jack Turner
That's a pretty cool description. Thanks man
it is pretty directionless, but it's just an interlude, and most of the other songs I'm writing are more dynamic in terms if songwriting.
It was actually meant to be an intro to a song, but by the time I was done, I didn't really know what to do with it, so I added a little bit of piano and thought it was kind of cool so I kept it
Isaiah Jackson
i hear ya. yeah, in context im sure it sounds better
Adam Wood
thoughts on this?
Robert Allen
>got some sour notes going on here in the beginning - cool if that's your thing and intentional. you're quite safe in terms of that melody, imo.
ya i just came up with it this morning and the hand positions+picking pattern are pretty awkward, still trying to get them down. and thats cool you think the melody is safe, theres def some differences but im afraid that descending line might be a little too similar
neat, but ya i agree with the other guy needs some kind of melody tying it all together imo, even if its subtle
i liked the guitar tone and the glittery synths were nice but the airy synth line should be changed because it got kind slightly grating imo after so many repititions. some kind of development throughout the track would be good too
Jackson Price
>clyp.it
dope sounds like early chillwave stuff in a good way
Hudson Harris
My bad. I forgot to mention it was just and idea that hasnt really gotten anywhere yet
Jeremiah Hall
Thanks man. I was going for more synthwave but that's cool too. I got a few more if you wanna hear them.
Evan Bell
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guitar stuff, some improv over something i made earlier today, i think its pretty cute desu
Isaiah Thompson
post em user
ya i figured as much and i think its a pretty solid foundation
Angel Reed
>ya i figured as much and i think its a pretty solid foundation
quoted wrong person
Colton Sanchez
my shits all fucked up im drunk
Asher Cruz
>clyp.it
This one's really muddy and not mixed very well but it's still at WIP. I'll fix it later.
>clyp.it
Fucked up the panning on some of the tom fills. Once again, I'll fix it later.
Adam Reed
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Woops, forgot one.
Hudson Martin
last thing I made
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Grayson Flores
Here's a shitty phone recording of this really neat riff I came up with
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Josiah Rogers
could I get some feedback on this track? I think the drums are kinda lacking and I wanna get my drummer to do another take, but IDK if it's worth.
thoughts?
James Young
Have you tried recording a second layer of vocals so that it is two tracks playing at the same time?
William Hughes
its p neat. def needs some accompaniment, tho
Alexander Baker
I actually really like this user. I like how your voiced is strained. Are you playing with fingers? I think it would give your guitar more heft with a pick, but I'd like to hear more.
Caleb Flores
does this count as an ep?
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Eli Rivera
>singing is shit
Have you heard Weezer, Carseat Headrest, Interpol, Surfer Blood or other bands where the vocalist just kinda does his own weird thing?
I don't think your singing is shit but it sounds like you're talking in pitches instead of really moving air with force and projecting. Its much easier said than done but I like it. I'd listen to more.
Levi Morales
The name of the song is Evergreen
I need advice on my strumming rhythm and vocals.
Luke Sullivan
>vocaroo.com
Not bad user.
For strumming advice, do it more.
Go to ultimate-guitar.com and look up songs you like. Play along while listening and it'll help out both hands.
Singing is a lot tougher imo. You sound like you're talking in notes as opposed to really pushing air and trying to hit notes.
Mason Miller
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That's an acoustic song
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And this is a wip intro to a song that I'm working on
That's pretty good. And you're singing is good too, I think, but the other guy is right, you could try to project you're voice with some more power
Ryan Wright
I couldn't exactly record vocals the way I wanted to as the rest of the family was home
Luke Perez
I also forgot to normalize the Vox recording
Carson Moore
Which is always tough. But I liked it. Vocals are weird cause you can't always help how you sound.
I'd definitely like to listen to more though.
Jonathan Sullivan
p7 senpai
Levi Foster
Connor Wood
feels sorta dead overall - not necessarily the drums that are the problem. solo guitar tone's sorta weak too.
this is decent bedroom pop otherwise.
Robert Bennett
>clyp.it
This is great annon. Your voice really gives me the Damon Albarn vibe ^^
Cooper Walker
Any thoughts on this mix, or the arrangement?
Isaac Gomez
yee, it def needs to be mixed. I just feel like the drums could stand to be more syncopated.
Charles Jones
I've no problems w/ the mix. I feel like that super busy pad in the background is a bit overwhelming, though. Like it's not bad in and of itself, but because the track is so repetitive, that tone over and over fatigues my ears.
Luke Wright
OK thanks, what do you think I should do to change it, just lower the volume or do you think it should have some envelope movement or something?
Elijah Wood
Anyone wanna rap on this?
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Hudson Cooper
I'm working on a full length of this stuff, it's pretty extreme and I made it all with fl studio
Jaxon Watson
It give me memories of flying in a primitive cgi landscape of geometric shapes
This is probably Satans thought patterns
I didn't listen too it because you uploaded it on voceroo and disobeyed OP
sounds like claymation diarrhea
a passing thought throughout the day, a sip of kombucha
Ayden Harris
Cheers, do you make music yourself?
Robert Richardson
this is me
Levi Bennett
This is pretty intense man, is it all software synths?
Christian Ward
Yep straight off fl studio stock plugins
Julian Lopez
you ARE extreme
Julian Diaz
A track I've been working on for about 6 months on and off
>pop
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nice sound, got a nice real estate tone, you have great voice keep it up
you have a nice voice, you're just not pushing for those notes, express yourself, let go
the drum arrangement is nice, very either/or sounding, maybe just a bit of boost on the high end would do them a bit more justice, your guitars sound a little untuned though
some interesting ideas, just a little to idiosyncratic, needs structure
favourite from the thread, lovely drums, love the EQ sweeps very nice, keep going
Jason Stewart
First time recording, thoughts?
Asher Lopez
i'll listen to this thread later...
clyp.it
shoegaze without guitars ;)
Anthony Torres
This is kind of sad but it's like musical irony or something but I like it
Jonathan Wood
I came up with this. Is it a good enough motif to build a piece around it?
Joshua Long
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Ariana Grande harsh noise
Samuel Barnes
bump
Hudson Sanchez
so, what's interesting about the noise here? sounds like utter shit to me
didn't pull my heart strings particularly, but the rhythm of it is sorta cool, and with a better tone it might be more impactful. I say go for it - flesh it out.