Thoughts on this song I made?
Thoughts on this song I made?
Benjamin Jones
Easton Rogers
Bumpp
Nicholas Garcia
props for not buttoning the top button of your flannel
Adrian Morgan
i admire the effort and energy but work on the vocals. pitchy dawg
Hunter Davis
the vocals are fine for the instrumentals but i do recommend rolling up your sleeves in a different fashion
John Cooper
Post in the SoundCloud/Bandcamp/Production threads next time buddy
Logan Anderson
Lmao how should I roll them up next time?
Lucas Torres
your voice has a raspiness that comes out very linkin park/emo-ish in this song that sometimes sounds really good
the piano is too simple, the chord progression sounds boring
I see what you are trying to do and it works but I personally dont like it
I dont like the style, it sounds like mainstream indie pop
but it sounds good
Brayden Nelson
straight up and then one twist
Aiden Morales
thanks for the tip bro :-)
Jaxon Phillips
B U M P
Jordan Lewis
BUMP
Anthony Clark
I like it man. Reminds me a bit of LCD Soundsystem, or the Unicorns. Your voice has a good rasp to it when you belt it. If you're going for that over-the-top, outrageous sound, let it slip and expose itself as much as you did in this song.
If you're going for a serious song, don't let it slip as much. Keep your voice smooth.
Henry Johnson
What are your influences, OP? I agree with the other poster saying it sounds a bit Unicorns-inspired. You're off pitch sometimes, but the rasp in your voice is nice.
Not a bad song, by the way. Keep at it.
David Thompson
augh pissed someone pointed out the sleeves now it's bugging me so much
Samuel Mitchell
My biggest influences are Bob Dylan, Neutral Milk Hotel, The Mountain Goats, The Beatles, and Bright Eyes
Luke Johnson
Thnx btw ^^
Jack Price
Mostly this desu OP.
Juan Rodriguez
Bump
Thansk guys for all the feedback
Jaxson Long
I can definitely hear the Wiggles influence in your music. Nice!
Ryan Sanchez
Yessss I was hoping someone would finally notice!
Asher Ross
STOP TRYING TO MAKE THIS A MEME JESUS FUCKING CHRIST
Daniel Fisher
Would you bang Dorothy the dinosaur?
Joseph Williams
I don't see whats wrong with them. Maybe its cause I roll them like that too but is it just over rolling or what? Whats wrong with showing some forearm?
Justin Sanders
disliked but didnt watch tho
Brayden Adams
*le sigh*
Kayden Clark
I like your style mane
I don't listen to this kind of shit usually, but I see what you're doing and it's working for ya. I can hear the intensity in your voice.
I gave you a THUMBS UP
YOU'RE WELCOME YA BIG DUMB CUNT
Jose Campbell
:^)
thanks, cunt
Sebastian Mitchell
I liked it
keep at it
Jayden James
Wow, I've seen you shill on here a lot, OP.
Brayden Smith
yeah I want ppl to hear me music. Is that a problem?