Hey which version do you guys like better?
vocaroo.com
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Liam Morris
William Jenkins
Why not have one of them be the main groove and then add one section where it changes?
Gabriel Reed
second one. how long have you been producing?
can i get an opinion on this btw (its not finished) clyp.it
Nicholas Jackson
Is it supposed to be instrumental or do you see it as a beat to be rapped over? Anyway I really like the synth pattern in the intro, but when it starts playing a melody it could be better to use a different sound to separate them more. I'd also sort of think of that whole bit with the "solo" as a build up. Making thing lounder over time, adding a riser e.t.c.
The drums might need some work too. The clap has some potential you could bring out with some layering. Like in this vid youtube.com
Christian Young
That's actually not a bad idea.
I might do a version like that
almost 14 years now
and your link, it doesn't seem to work for me.
Brandon Cox
soundcloud.com
I've decided this one is done, but would love some feedback.
Xavier Barnes
instrumental. yeah, ive thought about that, but i can't really think of a sound that would sound good with that melody. it is a build up haha. i'm still trying to just finish music, been only doing this for 5 months, when i get into mixing, mastering and all that technical stuff i'll def come back to this tune and do that
damn, 14 yrs?!
William Scott
OP here. Okay nvm i got it to work.So far it's good tho i dont notice any odd frequencies or peaks. i think you need a deeper slightly punchier kick. A bit of reverb to that clap and a riser and it so
Lincoln Peterson
Yeah since i was in middle school. I was like 13 i think when i first downloaded fl studio.
I'm 25 now, about to be 26 soon.
Levi Bennett
pretty good, really digging these vibes. how long have you been producing?
Jordan Gray
ok ty
aah ok
Joseph Fisher
A more glide-y and less pluck-y synth would work.
That's a good attitude. Finishing track is definitely the most important thing imo. If that's where you're at I suggest making some sort of drop after that build up, get another breakdown and build up to a variation on that drop make an outro and call it done. Move on to the next one and apply what you learned.
Jace Price
Hey i dig this tune man. Keep it up!
Henry Ramirez
Thanks dude.
Got into electronic music about 5 years ago when I was 18. Had been doing some basic rock stuff and audio work for 4 years before that tho.
Blake Gonzalez
Yeah man check out one of my newer sound cloud
tracks.
soundcloud.com
Nice man I just recently got into playing rock and stuff too. I'm trying to start a punk band and upload our music on my other soundcloud.
Jonathan Allen
thank you. does this synth work? clyp.it
Parker Harris
it's good but i'm not feeling it desu
Jason Walker
Kevin Reyes
was expecting future bass with that intro lol. i don't really like the arpeggios and the note rise and fall, plus the ending doesn't fit, but everything else is pretty good, nice chill vibes.
Brandon Morgan
does anyone know how to achieve the robotic effect of a vocoder without assigning it to a particular note or set of notes?
I'm trying to put a vocoder on a rap verse to achieve a metallic effect, but I want all of the tonal inflexions in the vocal line to stay - I don't want the vocal to be all on one note or a chord like usual with vocoders.
I'm using Orange Vocoder. Any tips?
Dominic Brooks
Please check catalog before making generals, there is already one up
Lucas Martin
Well, consider this a fresh one.