be me

> be me
> summer before junior year in high school
> live in your typical mid western town
> classic downtown full of home grown businesses and bars next to a river, a nearby college campus engulfing the downtown with shit faced drunk college kids from 8pm to 3 am every night
> other than that, just the vast open deserts of corn land and nothing ness
> my name is Jake
> had always thought that i could be popular if i really, really tried to
> i had the looks and the charisma for it
> but it just seemed like so much work
> as if you were some kind of politician trying to keep everyone happy
> maybe i was just looking at it wrong but it still just seemed dumb having to always watch what you say
> summer was coming to an end in a month and football season was starting in 3 days
> always been pretty average at football, at best a second stringer
> eat half a beef quesadilla before practice
> ride my bike to the football field listening to a motivational playlist
> last year when the season was over a couple people said i was a pussy out in the field
> i wont disagree with them though
> but this year i was determined to fuck people up
> anyways, make a new friend there
> we were rivals from day one at practice
> every drill we would make sure we went against each other
> but the score would always be even, if i got him down he'd get me down next time and vise versa
> we were like the soviet union and the united states
> our rivalry only making us better and better
> coach puts us at left and right linebackers
> it felt like half the reason anyone showed at practice was to watch us face off in drills
> we started hanging out after practice
> we both hated the typical popular kids at school
> that's how we clicked so easily

cont?

and no we are not gay

Fuck off, no one looked at your first story they arent gonna look again

This could be good

>cont?
no

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> we always had this sort of "us against them" mentality when it came to it
> not going to continue about all this foot ball stuff because this is Sup Forums after all and nobody here cares about that
> anyways he showed me this new thing called a cringe compilation
> damn did we watch the hell out of those things
> we enjoyed strategist on how to get random girls nudes sometimes
> we liked to climb buildings
> we managed to get to the top of the gym at our high school
> school eventually started
> we both bullshitted our way through a lot of classes
> Reece was more of a BMX bike and tyler the creator type person
> i was more of a political and "gym 4 times a week" person
> school dance was coming up
> we decided it was time we start some kind of group
> have a glorious idea
> we are both sitting in the library at study hall, overlooking the room from where we sat at a table
> "If we both find a date to the dance, we can start dating them."
> "Yeah? And?" He says as he surveyed the room
> "We start dating them, their friends start hanging out with all of us. We find out some guys who like their friends and get them hooked up with them. There you go, friend group."
> "Huh. Smart."
> "I know right?"
> "Who are you asking?" he says
> "Ronnah. You?"
> "Hannah is a fine piece of ass, don't you agree?"
> "I guess, but we need to be in these long term so you gotta like more than just her ass."
> "I can manage that." he says, seemingly scouting the room for hannah's "fine piece of ass"
> "Good luck."
> we split for our next class
> Ronnah seemed like a good choice

> not only was she hot, but also not your typical dumb high school girl
> she was actually smart
> i had thought this over carefully and this seemed to be the best option for me
> go over reece's choice in my head
> yeah, Hannah seemed like a good girl for him
> anyways, time for the prowl
> getting to know Ronnah more every day
> reece and i would report our progress each couple of nights
> yes, i know it sounds dumb that we are treating it like some kind of business, but that's just how we had fun with it
> doing well with Ronnah
> reece has to try for a while to get Hannah to like him though
> fast forward to the dance
> its a formal dance
> Reece and i walk in to the school
> to our left the gym has some kind of fog rolling on the floor so you cant see past anyone's ankles
> we have a good time and shit
> we both dance with our own and eachothers girl
> dance doesn't matter to us though, we're going to make an impact at the after party
> we have been preparing for this
> we have 3 large kegs of beer waiting
> we live in a college town, and college kids will do anything for some cash so they bought us a shit ton of beer
> party is on, made sure narks don't know about it
> party is at my house, parents are divorced and mom is out of town
> house is decent sized, my mom had a good job working for a law firm
> music blasting
> babes everywhere

Bump

> friend doesn't know i've never actually drank before, so my first time getting drunk
> we don't let our definition of "assholes" in
> here comes an asshole with his "friends"
> "Ayyyy jake my man what up dude!"
> wanted to bash his stereotypical dumb face in
> "Party's not for cucks, shit box" (we watched a lot of cringe videos and actually used these insults un-ironically)
> his name is Robert
> Robert and i have always hated each other
> i turn my head back to see if reece is nearby
> body shoved into the house, luckily kept my balance
> "This is fucking IT you loser!" he says as he charged at me again
> drunk people still dressed for the dance all move out of the way like heards of sheep to watch
> we both land on a folding table
> combined weight breaks the table in half, Robert jabs a fist into my nose
> he raises his fist for another blow, but reece takes hold of his fist while its in the air, leaving his face wide open for a hard kick right in the jaw
> he collapses holding his bloody jaw
> their alpha is down, so his friends are backing off
> they gtfo
> 3/4ths of the party moves outside with us while we drag the unconscious Robert through the yard
> everyone is laughing at him
> robert was at the time probably considered the most popular kid in school
> now everyone is laughing at him in my yard
> he will be crushed by this
> reece makes it with hannah that night
> still haven't made it with ronnah but my mission must be accomplished
> reece and i meet up the following day
> "We just dethroned the most popular piece of shit at school."
> "I feel like we have risen into the popular category" he says, stuffing his face with cheez-its at my house while we clean up all traces of party
> "Yeah, and now we can remake the stereotype in our image."
> "Nice."
> i was starting to become decent at BMX biking
> was actually making air when i went up the ramps
> doing cool tricks and shit

> everything is a competition for us, so reece brags about making it with hannah before i made it with ronnah
> "It'll happen by this weekend you dirty whore. I promise"
> "Yeah i bet, kike."
> insult each other at least once per couple sentences
> nothing really happened how we had expected
> instead of us turning into the new popular kids, the whole school seemed to just stop looking for new ones
> everyone still liked us though
> not as many people getting triggered by offensive jokes now
> like i had predicted, our new friend group started forming as our girls friends were joining our double dates
> every day after school we would all go to burger king and chill/eat
> two seniors that had always liked reece and i started hanging out with us
> about these two, quick little story
> one of them, cody, had met this girl at a camp ground near the missisipi named Moriah
> she was also a senior, but they started to talk alot over texting and snapchat
> eventually, the other senior named zach had also started talking to her
> she had told both of them that she liked them
> reece and i thought they were dumb because they were being played
> told them this
> they ignore us
> anyways, back to modern day
> zach sets up this big ruse with his parents and moriah's parents
> he was going to drive to Wisconsin to get her and bring her back here for the weekend
> we all gave him alot of shit, most of it containing the words "road head" and "sloppy seconds"
> this girl was smoking hot so we all just assumed that she already had a boyfriend and was just having fun playing these two
> friday
> the whole downtown is barricaded by the police
> the river is reaching dangerously high levels and flooding is imminent

dont stop now you fag

> reece and i don't want to be at school so we volunteer
> bus takes us down there
> hundreds of people stacking sand bags on top of each other
> the river current is so strong that it looks like it could be sucking the river bed right from under it
> they even had to park a couple trains on top of the railway bridge for extra weight
> we stack sandbags all day
> go back to the school and then to our homes
> another school dance tonight so we prepare for that
> school dance is same as before, dance with our girls and stuff
> we hear that zach had actually started driving to Wisconsin
> all of us are surprised, thinking hes just going to get rejected
> as the night goes on its getting more and more believable that she is coming to our town
> after the dance half of the school piles into buffalo wild wings to eat shitty food
> order cheesy fries like usual
> some shit goes down with this other kid and his family that we have beef with
> just some really long dispute that doesn't matter to this story, but if you want me to tell it i will
> there is lots of cops everywhere because state of emergency
> there is this kind of tension in the air
> everyone just acts like its a normal dance but it does not feel right
> zach calls and tells cody that him and the girl are outside
> cody is a retard when it comes to talking to girls or anyone to that matter
> by the way, i really dont like cody that much but i put up with him because he buys us shit

poor cody

...

definitely gay

really fucking gay
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fuck you, legitimately into this. If more, please continue. none of our opinions matter anyway, keep going.

> whole table had heard about it by now and they all also come outside
> the girl is wearing these really short shorts
> yup, shes a whore."
> she is hot as fuck though
> cody here within 5 minutes of talking grabs her ass all awkwardly and shit
> i guess he was trying to be smooth
> we go to the local gerocery store
> cody still acting like a retard
> i already hated him when he acted like himself, but when he acts like a completely different person and acts all bad ass around a girl i'm having fucking burning hatred for this faggot
> compress it because i had always had this idea that i was "high on life" and couldn't waste my time being worried and mad about shit
> we go home and try out mixing vodka with orange juice
> it taste like ass but we drink a whole bottle of french vodka that i found in the back of my fridge, pretty much forgotten
> cody and reece stay over, and the girl because she has no where to stay
> she is kind of a bitch, i dont like her
> dont care though because ive got the girl i love ronnah
> if you almost forgot, remember zach?
> you know, the guy who literally went out of his way to go get her and brought her here
> cody and moriah make out
> god i hate both of them so much
> tell them to fuck off because its my house
> they probably did more of that shit when i slept but whatever
> zach hears about this
> it is Saturday now

Long story, but continue

> cody is a retard when it comes to talking to girls or anyone to that matter
> by the way, i really dont like cody that much but i put up with him because he buys us shit
> we all walk around
> even though i dont like moriah, its in my nature to woo her
> its easy because shes a whore
> just doing it because it makes cody mad
> remember zach?
> yeah, he is cussing out cody and moriah on text
> he doesn't get off work till 3 so we dont worry
> ronnah and hannah eventually show up
> its around 230 now
> we decide to go downtown to stay away from zach
> we remain oblivious to how much rage is burning within him
> near the river there is this big open field with a 3 story playground in the middle
> about 5 ft of water covering it
> we go swimming to the middle of it
> fuck around until about 7
> its dark out now
> decide we are going to sneak past the barricades and cops
> ditch and lock up our bikes a couple blocks from downtown
> first obstacle
> just a big orange barricade and 2 officers talking
> its really easy to get downtown i guess
> just go really far around it
> lmao
> downtown is full of family owned businesses and such
> all with sandbags in front of their doors and windows
> its weird because the central downtown is a ghost town but everywhere surrounding it is bustling with activity
> sandbag walls still being built
> industrial sized flood lights on the bridge that lights up the entire river as if it were day
> convoy of trucks full of dirt driving towards the river
> people barking orders back and fourth
> feels like the soviets in Stalingrad
> tension is heavy in the air
> zach has gone silent

> we know he is looking for us but we dont give a shit because he would't check here, right?
> right?
> just then it felt like the voices and yelling got alot louder
> trucks were retreating from the river and people were quickly evacuating
> we get closer to the river
> the sirens start going off
> water is pouring over the sandbag walls and going into the street
> police officers are running around with mega-phones telling people to evacuate
> before this, moriah had pretty much told zach to fuck off because she likes cody more
> zach must have crossed the line right then
> there he was, walking towards us as mega phone voices echo through the ghost town
> "Fuck, its zach." i say
> similar things are being murmured by everyone there
> "Shut the fuck up Jake. YOU let them MAKE OUT in YOUR basement you fucker!"
> "And YOU Moriah! I fucking drove ALL THE WAY to Wisconsin for you!"
> "Then you just go off with this IDIOT cody? FUCK you you stupid dirty whore!"
> "And FUCK all the rest of you!"
> thinking how the hell he knew exactly where we were
> "She likes me dumbass!" cody chimes in
> "She just fucking USED you to get here, to get me! She doesn't even like you, DUMBASS."
> "That's not fucking true! FUCK YOU!!"
> zach pulls out a knife and charges at cody

> a stream of water hits our shoes
> hannah, ronnah, and moriah scream
> reece and i run up to defend cody
> the knife plunges into reece's chest
> reece collapses into the rushing water quickly spreading through the downtown
> hannah screams bloody murder
> zach runs towards the girls weilding the knife infront of him
> before i can tackle him, he shanks moriah and ronnah
> i tackle zach into the water covered street
> about 3 inches of rushing water
> i feel a sharp burning sensation go into my armpit while i have my hands grasping zachs neck
> the knife downs itself into my flesh, entering through my armpit
> i can hear a mix of "WHY?" and crying/screaming from all of the girls
> remember how i bundle up rage because im "high on life"?
> it all comes out at this moment
> i start thrashing zachs head onto the water drenched cement
> banging it against the concrete
> full of adrenaline and rage i pull the knife out of my armpit
> shove it up against zachs neck, making it bleed a little
> breathing hard now, knife up against his neck
> all of the girls are crying and screaming at me to stop
> i can hear ronnah wimpering
> but all i can see is pure unadulterated rage
> not my dead best friend and wounded girlfriend behind me
> they had told me later that when i slit his throat, i was screaming
> it was a swift swipe, like a credit card
> and he was dead.

uhu, keep going

> i dropped the knife into the water
> after it was done, i turn around still on all fours
> i see the motionless reece laying on the ground
> im shaking uncontrollably as i quickly crawl through the bloody water towards ronnah
> she is bleeding from somewhere in her chest
> i just wrap my arms around her, both out backs against a brick wall
> she is crying uncontrollably
> the only good part about this whole night was that she did not hate me
> she let me embrace her
> moriah is just stabbed in the arm
> blood is still coming out of reece, and moving on down the street with the flow
> zach is dead, half on the sidewalk and half on the street
> i never saw the police men running up to us
> all i could think about was reece
> my best friend, lifeless on the cement, rusing water going over his body
> and the love of my life scarred forever
> will she even love me after this?
> can i even live a normal life after this?
> we were all brought into questioning
> it was an odd case because most of the crime scene happened in a water current
> the knife was gone for good, and i was lucky to get off on self defense because of the lack of evidence and we had all agreed to make it seem more like self defense
> to leave off in a good note though, me and ronnah were closer than ever after the incident
> the school counselors had even said that if it weren't for having each other, we would have never moved on from this
> they got some stuff off of zach's phone in his truck, he had found us with the find friends app
> moriah went back to Wisconsin and we never heard from her again until about a month after the incident
> she had felt that this entire thing was her fault and the weight was too much
> she hung herself in her room
> i never told ronnah because i knew it would be too much for her to handle
> ronnah and i plan to be together until the end of time
> but i will never forget reece
> cody moved away, never heard from him either

end

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JESUS FUCKING CHRIST. FROM TODAY, HOW LONG AGO WAS THIS?

are you still with her?

yes

crazy story . if you made this up props. if not thats some crazy shit and im gonna need to see some proof