Bad idea but

Here are my death metal lyrics.

Do I kill myself?

It's for an experimental/progressive (shit) garage death metal band.

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Time for the Smith & Wesson retirement plan bud.

why was this transcribed onto an ancient scroll

Cringe

Give me your riff. That's more important. If you legit came up with a lyric before the riff that's just hopeless.

just do slam tier growls and no on will be able to tell that you're saying anyway

if it doesn't carry any meaning then anything work really as long as it sounds cool
if its coming from your pains or some shit then I feel like you could put more into it. im not saying be more original but im sure you can arrange something better

dark edginess ;_(

I wish I was fucking joking.

How do I get better? What is an example of a good death metal lyric?

or is it not actually possible?

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Enjoy nerd

If I deliver it tounge-in-cheek like Wednesday 13 or Rob Zombie, would it not be cringey?

>chained
>sweating
>throbbing
>crying

Check out Death Spiritual Healing

Does it matter?
The audience isn't gonna be able to tell what you're singing anyway.

Depends on how he sings it man

these are more like Black Metal lyrics than Death desu
Death Metal lyrics go more along the lines of
>KNIFE IN ASS
>FUCKED TO DEATH
>EAT THE BRAIN
>FEEL THE PAIN
>OOOOOOUGUHUGHUGUGHGUHUGHUGHUHGUHGUHUGHUGH
while black metal is more like what you wrote + some autistic screeching thrown in for muh atmosphere and in Norwegian even if the band is from mexico or some shit

shrieking>growling anyhow

fuck. I didn't realise that

lol great don't tell me I'm a faggot as well as a shit writer. What a day it's been.

It's nothing like black metal, it's some weird athiest emo shit

dying of laughter desu

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>weird atheist emo shit
you literally just described black metal

>weird athiest emo shit
so black metal right?

its sung midtone shrieking, like devildriver?

I guess until we finish the demo nobody really knows?

devildriver is more like a light growl, not a shriek
youtube.com/watch?v=JHRhm_fBJuQ
these are shrieks

hly fuck fa m fucking EPIC

Ok, got ya. It's light growls with some screams thrown in here and there for variety