Posting a superheroine porn comic I wrote and drew

Posting a superheroine porn comic I wrote and drew.

Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback appreciated.

Again I'm posting this for free, but I expect feedback in exchange!

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Anybody reading? Bump would be appreciated

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bump, keep it up!

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thanks!

posting on Sup Forums and Sup Forums at the same time?

I'll give my thoughts when the full thing gets posted. So far, it's pretty good.

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Any plans to color it?

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Probably not. Very time-consuming. Just doing the backgrounds and shading for this one was quite a bit of time

Where is the tittyfucking

You can't have huge tits without titfucking

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Shit you're right. Well, there will be sequels. There will be plenty of tittyfucking to be had in future chapters. Anal, too. Everything.

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So far, not a big fan of the dialogue during the sex. Like, I get people say shit, but this seems sorta forced and lacking purpose.

The art is great though.

Can you post everything (and future chapters) on other websites? dis gun be gud

And we'll add a little insult to injury with the last page of this chapter.

Thoughts? Shall I post more of my work? I have DC and Marvel characters

any particular examples? i tried to keep this one fairly light on dialogue during sex actually

all my work is at benchleyfan01.imgur.com

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Thanks, ill keep an eye out for it

These pages sorta highlight the core of it. The sort of generic porn shit. I think the text bubbles on top of each other is part of it...they might land better outside of bubbles.

I mean, the art is solid, it carries the intent of the dialogue. We don't necessarily need text to show the chick is into it. And stuff like blowjob noise wouldn't need to be bubbled.

You are showing us already, no need to tell at the same time.

OK, thank you, that's very helpful to know.

Ty user i came

thanks, what panel/page?

That said, I'm not your target audience, so take that with a grain of salt...not particularly into male-dom type stuff...and usually don't read porn comics

Why is every dick uncut
This is murica damnit

the satyr's clearly isn't

you write under one alias and draw under another?

No, it's not my story. It's adapted from another author's work

Its good keep drawing bruh

This 1 i came

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keep those comments comin!!

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The art is pretty good, but some of the poses are a little stiff, and maybe you can arrange the balloons a little differently, other that, good work for what it is

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this stupid bitch had no idea what she was in for

outwitted and outplayed, now raped by a teenager. how humiliating

Ms. Americana's body could use a slight redesign to up the sex appeal specifically the waist an her thighs

how embarrassing. how shameful

how so?

his mutant pheromones are warping her brain but she's too stupid to know it

the chemicals in his secretions will key into her desire and pleasure centers, turning her lust up to 11 easily

he slaps her, underlining his contempt for her as he uses her body as a sex object, nothing more

The immediate shift in character kills it for me. I get that you and the reader get off on turning powerful women into weeping messes, but the immediate defeat and tears are just so boring. I want to see an actual power struggle. Frost is a heavy hitter, and having her just give up so fast is a waste, even without powers. Some kicking and screaming would be nice, maybe restraints breaking and things getting forceful...I don't know.

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bump for gud

I see the tears here as almost involuntarily -- she's been slapped, hard, twice in quick succession. That kind of trauma would draw tears out in anyone. I think she continues to show resistance through her dialogue for quite a while after that

Each arcing rope of cum delivers a payload of highly concentrated chemicals that will begin to addict Emma almost instantly.

Overproduction of sexual fluids is a helpful side effect of his powers -- quantity and volume go a long way when delivering such potent pheromones

The result is a pronounced change in priorities for Emma Frost -- she is now permanently, and thoroughly, addicted to this boy's sexual fluids, bonded to him like a baby bird to its mother. There is nothing she won't do or say for more of his cream

She feasts on it, the excess adorning her lovely face

He grins as he remembers her haughty, uptight introduction from earlier. Her demand that he call her Miss Frost, never Emma. Now, it didn't matter what he called her -- whore, slut, slave, bitch, dog -- only that SHE called HIM "Master."

She felt compelled to obey his every command, her submission now complete

She knelt and sucked dutifully, like a good girl

His good girl. He owned her. He owned her. He OWNED her. The thought permeated through her mind as she debased herself for his pleasure.

I came reading your comics, I have a rape fetish and this pleases it

Emma cursed her own weakness and foolishness as she blew him, bringing to bear years of studied sexual technique and expertise on this... petulant boy. Someone she barely knew, had only met that day.

Thanks, what pages or panels did it for you?

CHeeks ballooning with his load, Emma struggles to swallow the vast contents of his orgasm, that sweet nectar, her life, her everything

He throws her aside like a toy as more cum runs down her face. No man has ever treated her this way. No man ever could. But he took her and made her his. There's no going back now.

A last humiliation as he sends her away, a reminder of her new status as second-class citizen, the destiny she now embraces, her future life as a whore and concubine. She is nothing to him, means nothing. He does not think of her as an equal, and she realizes with a sickening finality as she scurries from his presence that neither doe she. She knows her place.

hey pegasus. just wanted to say i'm a big fan f your work.

i particularly liked the way you draw women with their hair in a bun (emma from the phoenix one) idk why

also anal

any chance you might ever do dvp? or a mother daughter getting fucked together type situation?

again, thanks man, like the new comic too.

what's dvp?

double vaginal

>Sup Forums tard with talent
Yeeeeah,i'm guessing you don't come on Sup Forums very often,first time visiting here?
Still,very good art,tits are a little too big and low/seemingly saggy.
Everything else is near perfect,amazing work,Sup Forumsro.
Have you considered doing art for an actual company? Drawing porn comics is a waste because you have a talent for so much more.

oh dayum. well i'd say there's a very good likelihood of mother/daughter, as multiple members of the Delta City SUperheroine Squad have daughter/sidekick characters. Glad you dig the bun look, I'll take that into consideration for future character designs.

oh fugg. nice. sidekick too? cuz that ticks so many boxes for me. god bless you m80

>I wrote and drew
>I wrote

you REALLY need to redo this chicks face in this panel

There's thick cum on her face,mate.

Doesnt mean she gotta look like she has downsyndrome