Let's write a real song, b. Recommend lines or whole verses and choruses...

Let's write a real song, b. Recommend lines or whole verses and choruses. I'll pick the best ones and together we will write a legitimate song.

"Oh, well imagine!"

I CHIMED IN

bump for interest

If I pulled blueberries from the ass of a dragon

OP here, serious lyrics would be cool. I know there's some talented fucks on here.

"here we go"

"She asks me, are you happy?"

"My asshole shrivelled up when I saw her food"

"Guess we're both bad at this"

I like this. bad at what though?

"moldy farts under moonlight"

the op wanted real shit, but i guess b is too fucking autistic to play nice.

it's a line that's stuck with me for a while
two people who fell in love but don't know how to love each other "traditionally"

it could apply for other things I guess?

Why do these fiends hide behind the mask of inconceivable betrayals

Why do they lure you into a sense of false prosperity and unbelievable trails

Well here's a believable tale, a holy father's written paradigm. What if i told you that the author was the devil himself?

Paradoxes interchanged, lost like a pair of socks. Truth is pain and unpopular like past geniuses being mocked.

I see it as two people who think they love each other but dont have the first clue where to start. maybe they each carry a lot of baggage or some shit as well. could work as the main line of a chorus

a tad edgy, but good rhyme scheme and phrasing

Going after you would be telling you to betray my trust again

ill amend a little Going after you would ask you to betray the little selfish trust I had in you

You're cute when you're angry,
but you're angry all the time.
You're crying and I want to speak,
But there's nothing in my mind.
I guess that we're both bad at this,
Every day's less hit, more miss,
I guess that we're both bad at this.

what do you think? too stupid?

I thought I would just regret it

Emotions blind us from seeing it all

For some it's hard to admit

Sometimes you need to be a little sentimental

aight aight good good.

Off the tracks, you runaway.
Going after you, would ask you to betray
the little selfish trust i had in you.
everything I've put you through...

blah blah more words

good lines my dude.

Not OP, but the guy who posted the line

I'd say it fits well

Was it just a fad?

Was there something more to be had?

Thanks mate, OP here, I wrote it. I think most people feel this way, but I hate my own lyrics. They always sound fucking terrible.

I like to waste time
Thinking about Einstein
And caral jung
Old kung fu movies I want to see
Pass the hydrator, please
Floating on thin air
Goin to amsterdam in the new year
Top gear there

this would work best for a rap verse i think, I am into rap and that kind of writing, but I don't know how well this would work being sung.

Agreed, It is more fitting to be in a rap.

What's the overrall mood we're going for? Something melancholic? Some upbeat 2000s rock style?

what do you guys think of this ive been working on?

And every goddamn day’s another foot of rope he never planned to use.
If sleep just brings a nightmare called the morning, what is there to lose?
Channel 4, another sobbing wife and child whored out by the news
He holds his lifeline, knuckles white, tonight he’s got to choose.

We never know until it’s too late
He’s standing on a crate of his feelings
And by god, he’s looking to the ceiling
We never know until it’s too late
Scream and cry, let us help
Is it too late to cut him down
When a man falls, and nobody’s around to listen, does he make a sound?

because I take pride in my hobby

I'm getting a melancholic vibe from what people are putting here. Rock is still fine, I prefer alt rock over pop in this case.

Thanks, at least someone reconized it.
Song's brit af.

yo guys post more this is good

333
That's the number to go pee

Hello. My names Terry and I'm a law abider

My name's Jim and I'm a criminal.

another one im working on:

I’m not who you want me to be
But that's okay, because your parents thought the same thing
I’m not who you need me to be
But that’s alright, im taking over anyway

There’s not much time
We let things slip a little farther
There's not much light
Let it get a little darker

I’m an antisocial over-hopeful flash in the pan
A voluntary crash test dummy, don't give a damn
You can call me what you want,
You’ll only fan the flames
I’m an antisocial over-hopeful flash in the pan
A voluntary crash test dummy, don't give a damn
I’m a joke lost in translation
The face of a generation

part 2/2

I’m not who the world needs now
But I’ll do my best, to right your wrongs
I’m not who the world wants now
But so your worst, pretty soon we’ll all be gone

There’s not much time
we let things slip a little farther
There’s no more light
Guess we’ll try a little harder

I’m an antisocial over-hopeful flash in the pan
A voluntary crash test dummy, don't give a damn
You can call me what you want,
You’ll only fan the flames
I’m an antisocial over-hopeful flash in the pan
A voluntary crash test dummy, don't give a damn
I’m a joke lost in translation
The face of a generation

Blow out the candles
Another year closer to death
Are we too far gone
Is this our best?

Is this our best?
Is this our best?

I’m an antisocial over-hopeful flash in the pan
A voluntary crash test dummy, don't give a damn
You can call me what you want,
At least i'm trying
I’m an antisocial over-hopeful flash in the pan
A voluntary crash test dummy, don't give a damn
I’m a joke lost in translation
The face of a generation

Better prove myself

Never tryna waste time and IMprove myself

Better to be tryna fuse the xy with the XXX

Why try with other shit when I should be having sex.....


"Nice guys finish last-Gonna blow you away with my class -None of these females appreciate me man fuckin whoooorra,
Excuse me while I dust off my fedoooora"

Moist ass niggas gonna trip up the triggah
Gonna rack my bags gonna end up a winnah
Going to make some rhymez bout getting the papah
Getting slap happy on some hoes
Damn bitch you needa gimme summo
I like the biggest fattest cock you can find
Nobody can tell me what i got on my mind
(PENIS!)
Gay ass niggas cant step to me
Sucking on toez is what it gatta Sup Forums

Cut my dick into pieces, this is my plastic spork
Suffocation, no peeing

You could make more than 1 song with the things people are posting here

Bape bape bape bape bape

I'm here to
Rape rape rape rape rape

Supreme preme preme preme preme

Sex is just a
Meme meme meme meme meme

And i'm a meme machine

I see the tears behind that laugh
I see the face behind that mask
And all I ever ask of you,
Is to see the boy behind that man

Cause there ain't no telling how the story ends,
When the book is halfway through
So all the tales we tell to fool ourselves
Just might be coming true

And every second spent here, living my hell
Throughout the night and day
Is just another second that I gain
To waste my time away

Oh we're all fags,
Yeah that's right
We're like moths who flutter down into the light

Where type and type away and call the newfag OP gay
But in the end, we're all just trying to hide

Zankoku na tenshi no you ni
Shonen yo, shinwa ni nare...
I'm a real street boston nigga
Aoi kaze ga ima mune no doa wo tataitemo,

I like it

Give me topics and I'll be back in a few min with a verse

real shit nigga

go away shinji why arent you in the fucking robot

Topic: speaking for the people when the tyrant wont listen

OJ Simpson's saggy jail bait booty-hole

Holocaust

Holy shit

I hate my dad
He is bad bad bad
He wants me in the robot
But I just wanna listen to Flowbot

wawa woo big boo boo
me mo haha was nah nah nah
wilky soin bilky coin
nahru qagq qagq loo loo
wee wahh wee wahh
big poo poo

Hey OP, do you have kik or something? I've been looking to collaborate with people.
I go to the local music school and my music could be described as psychedelic dream rock/faraway lush atmospheric acoustic

I'm crying. That basically sums up Sup Forums for me

I am afraid as fuck to give mine away on Sup Forums.

OP, how serious do you want the song to be? An ACTUAL song with meaning or some frantic memefest

Could be both

someone how misses their ex or someone who wants to get a gf and cant, thatll be easy

summer is almost over, what classes you taking?

OP here. Was looking to write a real song and possibly record it. I got some of that, but mostly a memefest.

We'll I have a throwaway one just for Sup Forums. Message me at kik: frozenprincess99

You could save what you think is good and keep it and finish it yourself, or if you make a new thread

Cumming on your tits
These sperms will not yeild

yeah im saving stuff as i go

There's no use in explaining

For the trouble that both of us making

Love needs planning

I know you'd like some help, but I can't be of assistance
I have my own family and I really hope you don't jump the fence
I'm sorry I couldn't be there, to stroke your hair
To be by your side and make sure you understand I care

Fish swim
Birds fly
Daddys yell
Mamas cry

keep posting more lyrics these aren't too bad

-chorus-(sung by a female in a caring voice)
Fuuuck offfff with that shiiiiit,
There's more to life than than just a biiiitch
-chorus-

Seems like you're acting one yourself
Maybe that's why you get pushed aside and spend all your time
Sitting on the shelf crying about getting no cat
Coughing furballs up along the way wishing you had your mouth enveloped on a gat
You say that it's unfair that you try so fucking hard with no return
But who the fuck ever said that pussy something you gotta earn
Spend time on you
You do you
Then you gotta better chance of SOMEONE doing you

honestly, this could be good

Yo yo uhh
Fuck these niggers, they should be behind bars
My flow is nuclear, ask Rutherford, while these monkeys driving Dodge cars
I'm talkin Chargers, I need to get charged with manslaughter
Man I slaughter these niggers like a civil war general, behind bars
Need to remind you the hard R,
Nigger nigger nigger nigger
Their checks getting
Bigger bigger bigger
Cuz they keep takin shits and wont flush uhh
Them lil shits grow older with no jobs either
Chasin welfare checks like it's a gold rush uhh

Saying goodbye. They keep running back to each other

OP here. An alt rock/ melodic hardcore song im working on. 2edgy4me

Throw us the scraps from your plate, we’ll remember
The filth that you give us, it fills up our lungs
Together we’re waiting, our hands clasped in ferver
Our chance to undo what’s been done

We’re hungrier than ever for flesh and for bone
We’ll tear down the boards from the doors of your home
Defect all the soldiers and topple the throne
Good luck, you’re on your own


It’s the end of the reign of the rat king
Steal from us, we’ll show you all that we’ve got
Til you’re bloodied and broken and suffering
Begging will not make us stop

We will climb to the top


Feast on the food that we hunted and gathered
Enjoy every bite cause tonight is your last
Together we’re coming, we’re stronger than ever
Don’t think we’ll forget the past

We’re hungrier than ever for flesh and for bone
We’ll tear down the boards from the doors of your home
Defect all the soldiers and topple the throne
Good luck, you’re on your own


It’s the end of the reign of the rat king
Steal from us, we’ll show you all that we’ve got
Til you’re bloodied and broken and suffering
Begging will not make us stop

We will climb to the top
And the princess is screaming
The knights have all fled
Long live the people
The old king is dead


It’s the end of the reign of the rat king
The end of the reign of the rat king
The end of the reign of the rat king

Here you go, freshly sampled from that whatever the fuck gaming clip


We're going on a trip, to a place called auschwitz
It is showerr time, little Jew steins..
-----
Damn what the FUCK are you doing, little jewsteins
Nose looking like Severus snape mind always looking to find-
Ways to convince us how great that nigger cock is
Giving away white women to abdullah halashalalalliz
Trying to the goys remove power
But you'd be a lot happier if you just took a nice warm shower
You're 4'3 with a gay hat looking kinda odd
Now line up against the wall and face my firing squad

I'm tired of being what you want me to be
Feeling so faithless lost under the surface
I dont know what you're expecting of me
Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
And every second I waste is more than I can take

Jail ain't easy for a guy so sleezy
My bunk mate calls me Bronco
The hell is with this fate
My anus is now loose
But come october I'll be, too.

Waking up, head still hurts
Spinning round and round, memories burst
I shake my shame, release my pain
Too much time, throw it away
Too much time, put it away
Too much time, drink it away
Misery, drowned out by another evening
The mornings obscene
Misery, drowned out by another evening
The mornings obscene

You are what you eat
and niggers can eat shit
Explains the way they look
and why they stink.
i'm hanging all the jews
cemetary's overbooked
ashes to ashes
dirt to dirt
niggers to soil
jews to gold.

This is good.
This is good.
This is good.
If trips these are all in the song.

kill me
one off

Kek'd

I know this is what you wanted.


They say nothing rhymes with orange-
I think that's true now more than ever
We the people will let an oompa loompa assume power never
What the fuck donny I just wanna get a few bills passed
But you prefer filling your time in other ways, with your golf club at full mast
Devoting yourself to shutting down all the fake news
When you're fucking us more than any mainstream media Jews

It's a high school prom a springstein song
A ride in a crown vic
Fire fights in june
Kids sellin crack cocain
It's prison bars
Open carry laws
One nation under DON
It's America

OJ Simpson-
Looks like a simpson
Holding people hostage
Thinking that he's a pimp son

Wannabe nigger that listened to one Kendrick track/10
Also underage b8

Its a Rodney Atkins song you tard.

Doesn't change anything I said or make you any less of a faggot

OP is out. This became memefest2017 and shitty rap.

Nice meme
Your mummy write it 4 u?

More solid gold here:


Gatta be a real ass nigga
Lay some bars on that nigga
Straight up fucking a nigga
Shit I aint fuckin gay nigga

I eat bars like i worked on mars
Drivin on fools in one of eight cars
Shit wreckes your insurance yo
But how else me kids gunna grow

Snappin in to my slim jim
Autofallating my tiny tim
Walk back on my gay ass
Gimme 200 do not pass

Homeless on the street
Sucking on my teet
Paying my taxes
Smoking my grasses

Walk back in this gay ass town
A gay ass nigga
With a gay ass frown

Can't you see that you're smothering me?
Holding too tightly, afraid to lose control
Cause everything that you thought I would be,
Is falling apart, right in front of you

And I know that I may end up failing too
But i know that you were just like me with someone disappointed in you

Yours did
Also underage b8 MODS

OP decided to stick around, this is good shit.

Spread the cheeks
Pink and stink, pink and stink
It's gonna smell like pussy for weeks
Pink and stink, pink and stink

I've been reading books of old, the legenda and the myths
Achilles and his gold, Achilles and his gifts
And spiderman's control, and batman with his fists
But clearly I don't see myself upon that list
She said where'd you wanna go?
How much you wanna risk?
I'm not lookin for somebody with some superhuman gifts
Some superhero, some fairy tale bliss
Just somethin I can turn to somebody I can kiss
I want something just like this

Beautiful street lights, I want to be like you
lighting up the sky
let's light it up tonight

Beautiful street lights, make my dreams come true
come and let it shine tonight
let's light it up tonight

It's my night my highlight
living that livin that high life
like I'm hittin that
hittin that lye lye
all day every
day day night night
the sun goes down
I brings the eve
you can meet me on the street
and we all gon' set it
take my hand and
you won't regret it
I'll spark it off and
then we all gon' get it

I want to make this night
here last forever
just keep the music playing
on and on