This is my first ever song -

this is my first ever song -
is it shit?

soundcloud.com/plutoniclaconic/vorpal

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soundcloud.com/djwavesmith
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Can't seem to make it play.
I love Scott Pilgrim though, so I automatically love the song.
Great job, dude.

cool anime pic,cool song and a girl being banged,i think i fell in love with this thread

holy fuck someone listened to my god damn piece of shit fucking song this is awesome!

not bad, user

yea it was actually pretty good,i liked how you lined up the vocals and sound effects,you did very well for your first song dude

What is the fuck is this? What genre would you even call this? The instrument doesn't even sound like it's staying in whatever fever dream Key you chose. The lyrics aren't yours. There's no buildup or chorus. I'm flabbergasted, man. Here's my page: soundcloud.com/djwavesmith

Scott Pilgrim, my fav Asian Grill, and good music truly do make for an awesome thread. Nice job user.

I do like the voice, though. I'm not trying to be harsh. I just literally don't understand your music.

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Haha! Epic comeback, user! You sure trolled me!

No really. How the fuck is saying a short story over off-time, out-of-key instruments music?

OP here god that made me laugh

I dont know what genre it is, i was going to cut up the poem into samples and repeat and shit like the kids do these days but I thought fuck that, itl ruin this sweet ass poem , so I kinda left it.

Ill call the genre lithop

I have no idea how to make a voice sample match a key sorry

>What is the fuck is this? What genre would you even call this?

^^ this honestly

I fuckin like it though, good shit user.

here are some lyrics for your next song:

puttin' back my dipstick
they thought i was autistic
but i just checkin' oil
cause I'm Popeye Doyle

now fuck you all you democrats
you tawt you saw a puddy tat
but in reality you be illin'
like a psycho fuckin' villain

today, today, today gon' be the day
when we round up all you faggots and make all of you pay
today, today, today gon' be the day
when we kill degenerates and the gov't says "OK!"

repeat to fade
good luck singing user

I like it, and the Christopher Lee reading of Jabberwock fits in well.

well spotted compadre

oh god the only 2 followers I have were spam accounts fml

Don't let him out. Please
Don't don't let him Seize
All of my mind

I. I can't even find...

*music cuts*

*beat kicks in*

hi there kids
do you know who I am
I'm the kind of fucker
who makes your daddy go *BLAM*

in the face with my pistol
an hit him with the butt
Across the face look at you cry
Watch me shoot him in the eye

And blast his brains all over the wall
I want to watch your tears slip and fall
I want to watch your mind bend and break
as I show your sister what it feels when I rape

I'm angry. Nah I'm just playin
Are you really belivin' what I'm sayin
I'm going to break this whole world on my knee
On second thought, I'm gonna tie it down and take a pee

Cont... - read my lyrics plz

So once more I do ask you
Do you know who I am
Do you know what I'm here to do
Do you know my plan

Its big and its fun
for me, its about the one
That beautiful girl who rocked your world
Well I'm going to make her choke and hurl

I'm like the joker, we'll put a smile on her face
Just so I can see that those tears won't go to waste

You fuckers locked him up
You put him in a pen
Do you realize what that did to me, are you my friends?

You must be, cause you made
don't worry, I'm nice to my friends
But fair is fair,

Now I gotta put you all in pens

A padded room with walls
so I can watch your mind slip and fall
into a million pieces
I'll feast on them

Your pain is my flame
Your mind is my goal
And my job isn't done while it is whole
You're all going insane
That's the name of game
Just don't forget my name

Its Victor.

wtf

just a bit negative for my taste but thank you for the effort

Victor is about as closed to the antichrist as any normal human could realistically come

... so its supposed to be dark