So ive read the rules and dont believe this to be in violation...

so ive read the rules and dont believe this to be in violation.. im asking if you guys could rate/critique this music video that my friend jay and i just made. plz and ty. im looking for some constructive criticism.

youtube.com/watch?v=cUy3_H1r_5o

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youtube.com/watch?v=vNPN9prprgw
soundcloud.com/monarchbeats808
youtu.be/AGidKRUUtLs
twitter.com/NSFWRedditVideo

Post benis.

nope you are breaking the rules enjoy your ban

breaking rules how? ^_-

Sick video , but the song sucks ass.

what exactly was off for u? flow? lyrics?

I'm a music producer. Tell me why I should click the link and evaluate it? I'm currently reworking Beethoven's Op. 27 Mov. 2 Num. 3 into a different genre. It seems more deserving of my time.

I.E What genre is it, is it an original work, is it digital or analogue or a hybrid? Who mixed it, etc. Give me some details instead of asking me to do all the work.

that donut looks so fucking good

the flow is wack , the artist is not familiar with what his voice can actually do. in other words. hes a fucking noob.

check out my shit - youtube.com/watch?v=vNPN9prprgw

Due to your potential hubris, I'm going to evaluate this one instead. Hope you're as good as you're claiming, because I actually understand musical notation and theory. Who made your beat while I listen to it?

yes its original.. genre is rap.

I know right? Looks like silk in food form


OP source for that doughnut?

idk the source old pic

Holy shit. You have no idea how to fucking mix. That shit is clipping every five seconds. Also, no respect for ripping and "spitting" on some other random faggot's beat. In other words: But humble and sit the fuck down. Learn to mix.

Did you make the beat? As a producer who MAKES BEATS I'm sick of you faggots finding a free song and then trashing it with your awful lyrics and lack of any musical skill.

oh god that is not better.

Suck my cock , u loved that shit bitch xD

Nevermind. I gave in and watched it. Your triplet lines are off fucking tempo. Also Hollywood Undead/10. Your mixing is better than the other faggot's, though. So I'll give you that. Your lyrics are trash, though.

Your "flow" is decent. Your understanding of music itself is ass. Deal with it, kid. Also, look up Hard clipping and realize it's bad, dumbass.

trash. respect producers and buy beats. the audio clipping shows that
>a) you don't own the beat
>b) you can't fucking mix.
source: im a producer

yes the artist "Jay" and i made the beat

Listened to a little more. Looks like someone found out how to pitch down. What a groundbreaking effect, faggot.

Thank you. Fucker's dumbass song clips every 2 seconds. Did you hear the part where he just pitch shifted an entire fucking verse down like an idiot? It's almost impressively bad.

>implying i listened to more than 10 seconds of that shit

Beat is good. You guys may have a future. Ditch the Hollywood Undead asthetic. They died quick, and you'll die even faster. At least you fuckers' song doesn't hard clip constantly. Tell your producer he's got a future if he keeps it up.

wow dude you're really good. Do you have iTunes or spotify or somewhere i can get your song?

I fully understand. It's trash. I won't ask you to endure more of it.

Nice trips. Too bad about your taste in music.

Anyone wanna critique my beats?
Been producing for a couple years now.
Open to any criticism I'm willing to learn.
soundcloud.com/monarchbeats808

I'll give it a listen. I've been making music for 20 years and make all my own shit. Be back shortly.

pretty good. Not a producer myself so not much i can really comment on sorry

cheers

i like it.
would listen again/10

Beat is pretty good. I'm not near my studio headphones so I've only got mono channels to hear it, but I like the effects you used to differentiate your 808 hats. Tell me how you did stereo separation on the individual pieces since I can't hear them myself at the moment. Like the melody. Good builds and dropouts. The beat is timed well and you clearly understand some melody/harmony/rythem relations. 7.5+/10.

Oh, and I like your sub bass. I've always been a fan of pairing the sub bass with the kick and having it ring out and carry the basslines. A good example in mainstream shit is Thunder by Imagine Dragons.

Any other rappers on here?

youtu.be/AGidKRUUtLs

I'm not a rapper. I'm a producer. I could give it a listen, but tell my why I should. Did you make the beat?

Thanks. I don't tend to do much stereo separation. Is it something i should be doing? any tips? i separate the reverb from the rest of the sounds and sometimes layer kicks and pan them to each ear. Other than that, not much.

Nah. I only use stereo separation on my melodies, typically, and only if they're flat and centered. A rule of thumb is to have centered kicks, and, like you said, panned or separated hats. Sounds good, man. Keep doing what you're doing.

why are you so conceited

thanks. I'll make a note of that

"Conceited" because I don't listen to every "rapper" who comes on /b asking for an opinion? Hm. That's a funny evaluation. People PAY me for my music. You want me to improve/evaluate your shit for free because you're just so good? Which one of us is conceited here, fuck nuts? I play 20 instruments and have been making music in every genre since I was 6 years old. If you want someone who understands the Dynamics of music production to help/evaluate your shit, maybe make it worth my time or explain why I should when there are THOUSANDS of "rappers" taking free beats off of SoundCloud/Reverb Nation/Wherever and making trash.

give us a name. surely if you're so talented and better than everyone in this thread then one quick google search will find you, no?

why the fuck are you lurking on Sup Forums and replying to this thread then?

also your story sounds like bullshit, go back to jacking off to traps faggot

Nah. That's ok. I'm not here to impress or convince you.

If you're gonna make a music video with black bars on the top and bottom, upload it in 21:9 resolution so us with Ultrawide monitors can enjoy it...

Otherwise, decent vid

clearly. faggot.
keep making up bs stories on Sup Forums about not being a disappointment to your parents

K.

will still have black bars on 16:9 monitors but will look great on 21:9

Popular 21:9 resolutions you could render at:
2560x1080
3440x1440

I think it's pretty average, but I can tell you put a lot of work into it.

One thing that sticks out is the lyrics subject material and the beat go well together.

t. music producer/composer

'I'm not here to >impress'
hold on...
>I play 20 instruments
>making music... since i was 6 years old
>tell me why i should listen to your music
>I'm currently reworking Beethoven's Op. 27 Mov. 2 Num. 3 into a different genre. It seems more deserving of my time.
neckbeard/10

Not my thing but nice video.

My parents are dead. Are you the one who made that trash hardclipping track or something? Did I hurt your fee fees? Quick. Tell me the notes in a key of C# Minor. Hey, what's a half step down tuning for a guitar? Hey, buddy, if you want a Kyoto to be clear in a trap mix, how should you apply your effects and how should you pan and separate it? You know nothing about music, kid. You find beats and say retarded, half-baked "lyrics" over them and then mix them like a retard. Enjoy being a disappointment to YOUR parents, champ.

Like hell you are. Youre sitting on Sup Forums and replying to him and saying hes not deserving of your time. Youre on Sup Forums the place of shitposts, porn and fucked up shit. The place where all productivity dies. Just killyourself, jeez (Am not Op)

>blackface in the very first second of the video

You're pretty much screwed since YouTube is now pretty much run by SJWs including the "YouTube Heroes"

Not all of us are looking for mainstream attention and fame, my man. I've been here off and on for over a decade and come on here when I'm bored. I make music because I love and respect the art of making music. Using dissonant harmonies to imply moods, using volumetric dynamics to evoke emotions, doing unconventional things to surprise the listener. I love music. Teenage rappers just want to be famous, and most lack the talent and drive to do so.

K op listen up it's not bad just make it better by throwing away the whole '' gangsta act'' wear a nice suit instead don't act like a 90's gangster just be a new age high class mothafucker

Not talking about attention grabbing/popularity. Agree with what you're saying tho. I'm just saying that it's kind of stupid to say you don't have time for something when currently youre wasting/passing time on Sup Forums

Oh. Fair enough. But as a musician, I get these requests all the time. I was pleasantly surprised by OPs beat and mixing. If I listened to every fuck face's song who asked me to, I'd never get anything of my own done.

lol you don't change rhythm at all, lmao. you stupid fuck

your mask is gay dude. Use some face paint or some shit. I liked some of your flows gotta keep practicing on pronunciation.

no fuck you

As an actual song: 4/10
Knowing you're a broke amateur: 7/10

Its not bad, once you get a higher production budget I think you have potential. Keep up with it man.