Two Hot Blondes Submit to Big Black Cock.
Comic I wrote and drew.
Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback welcome.
Two Hot Blondes Submit to Big Black Cock
Blake Perry
Jace Hernandez
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Nicholas Gomez
Where's the rest
Brody Powell
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Jaxson Gutierrez
the title could use a little work
i have no idea what this could be about
Zachary Clark
posting now. 55 colored pages
Xavier Anderson
lololol
Leo Turner
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John Ramirez
This is a sequel to the Two Hot Blondes series by the artist ThePit, btw
Wyatt Phillips
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Thomas Roberts
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Jordan Sullivan
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Jace Brown
anyone reading?
Matthew Rogers
Yes
Dominic Garcia
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Austin Torres
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Aiden Perry
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Henry Cruz
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Michael Price
Thoughts?
Charles Mitchell
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Jaxson Green
Good so far
William Watson
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Andrew Hill
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Carter Thompson
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James Scott
thanks
Chase Ward
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Nathan Wood
Jerking too it
Ryder Gonzalez
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Colton Long
cool man that's what it's for
Nathaniel Butler
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Camden Sanchez
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Daniel Miller
OP you're a faggot, not gonna get feedback here, just a bunch of cucks fapping and nigger haters calling you a cuck.
Jose Ortiz
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Blake Carter
cool man thanks for reading
Ryder Fisher
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Luke Nelson
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Josiah Evans
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Dominic Brown
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Dylan Gonzalez
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Lucas Cook
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Matthew Green
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Jayden Evans
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Ryder Ortiz
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Joseph Smith
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John Edwards
can i get a bump
Nicholas Johnson
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Grayson Perry
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Brody Carter
Bump
Jaxson Ramirez
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Camden Richardson
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Asher Baker
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Anthony Roberts
"coach black"
the fuck is this shit?
at least pick a black last name like brown, hestings, or taylor
Dylan Garcia
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Michael Brooks
The comic this piece is based on is basically satirical in nature. The coach character is named Black, the principal is named Long. It's a joke and not my OC
Andrew Edwards
>blacks say them instead of dem
Jayden Gonzalez
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Brayden Allen
I remember specifically choosing not to use "dem" because it sounds ridiculous in some cases
Julian Bailey
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Oliver Anderson
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Christopher Roberts
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Gabriel Rivera
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Noah Kelly
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Brody Carter
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Asher Johnson
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Luis Russell
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Daniel Rodriguez
pitch black around the eyes?
tribute to skull paint in africa?
then why did it switch only now?
David Torres
ITT: white nationalists secretly jacking off through angry tears
Cameron Taylor
The drawing looks really good!
Owen Hughes
i really love this type of x-ray persons does, and when is more detailed the better
Jose Ortiz
I'm also a big thepit/johnpersons.com fan. a few things i notice:
>work on female characters having more detailed, vibrant eyes. expressions are very important and very hot, intense eyes and more shading to define jawlines goes a long way
>proportionality: if it's just how you prefer things you do you but imo waists should be smaller and shoulders should be less broad, more in the vein of thepit's art style. the beauty of drawn pr0n is you don't have to concern yourself too much w/ realism, and the broad shoulders/thick midsections give the girls a more 'buff' look (but like i said if that was your intention you do you)
>in a couple blowjob panels you make the girls' lips way too big, keep the lip width the same just increase how wide she opens her mouth
>the dialogue is pretty standard bbc stuff so switching it up from the standard fare mite b cool but let's be real the dialogue is the least important part
this is really good stuff though, i definitely had to look for flaws. keep at it, will save and fap. get good enough and you could make some solid money off commissions and such too.