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No alt rock or post hardcore in sight, it's decent internet rap, if you're a fan of that. Saw this few threads ago, I did like the song, and you're pretty much going in a similar direction with this new demo you have. Just please make the vocals more audible when you post the finished project, and mix the guitars better, they take up more space than they should in the mix. Do check Scrugley out.
I return all love feedback and follows on SC, always
like the chords. bassline doesnt do it for me, but cool stuff dig this. cool vibes. wish it was longer. also btw, dont think thats lavender in that youtube pic. looks like lilac haha beautiful woah this is cool
>Spanish Guitar >Acoustic singer-songwriter >Stoner Rock
I didn't like this at first but once the extra layers came on it started to work for me.
been listening to your stuff for a while dude, love it
you are legit a lyrical genius my guy
super mellow, I could fall asleep to this but in like a good way
those are some phat beetz, if that's still something people say
I like it, little weird but all the best stuff is
Carter Johnson
vocals aren't cutting it imo. do something more emotional with your voice. not sure how to say this nicely, you sound almost comical at times. imitate the things you like. production is nice though. album art is off putting, you should care about your complete aesthetic, makes people approach your music differently. this is nice. what's your background? synths strings are bit much though - like how it occasionally makes the piano sound atonal. i've given you feedback before - still great
- really hypnotic and weird...but you cant stop listening. the art is one of a kind too. sounds so familiar but still really alien. awesome.
- you cut that shit up! and the vocalist has a great performance. keep working with the beats because those drums and cut ups are so killer.
Josiah Watson
How old are you if you dont mind me asking
Gabriel Ramirez
thx man i actually am the vocalist and i also did the cut ups i think ur talking about ? gfbeats provided the fire instrumental
Angel Campbell
>fire instrumental stop speaking like a retard, you retard
Kayden Myers
thx u
Leo Rogers
case in point
Easton Bell
Www.Poopybutterbutt.bandcamp.com
John Watson
>what is irony >when the retard doesnt realize he is actually the retard
Lucas Rodriguez
>This Isn't Spain very flat sounding, i like the aggressiveness of the soloing guitar. you seem to achieve what you're going for, but mainly because i don't really see what you're going for beyond spanish sounding stuff with a cheeky movie sample
>Star of Zion again, seems rather uninspired. i don't get what you're going for with your voice either, it's not impressive as it is - maybe apply an other tactic to achieve whatever feel you're going for? in both these songs you've lacked any productions techniques to achieve any feelings, this leaves it very flat.
if we use the example of nick drakes pink moon: not only his guitar chord progressions and melodies build toward a specific feeling - but also the way he plays the guitar, the way his voice is soft and pained, also his sweet guitar sound in with the airy production (disregarding the lyrics). think of these aspects, and utilize them in your own music to achieve the feelings you're aspiring to create.
lyrically it's very flat. the words don't seem genuine, part is how you express them, but also the words seem unnatural to you - like your singing a cover. write from the heart, something that almost hurts to say, something that's so honest it makes your tummy tingle (or that's how i do it). but somthing that gets you exicted, these seem like just some words.
>Among Reeds this drum sound is amazingly bad - just sound so small - not at all heavy. tune them down, cymbals that cut more kick that goes low. guitar sound's guitar, the riff is okay. would've liked you to fill out the right ear with guitar as well. song doesn't seem finished at all, just lacks anything happening. structurally uniteresting as well, you've got some intensity dynamics going on, but that's about it. the noisy part at 1:30 got me excited though, but it didn't go anywhere.
what I keep wondering is, what inspires you? what are you aspiring to? all of this being said, you make decent music. you're by no means bad. have fun.
Ian Nelson
wew lad got me there upvoted my friend :)
Austin Ross
Are you mocking yourself for not understanding irony? Because whether or not you're sincerely saying it, you're a faggot for saying.
But hey, I'm poopybuttbutt.
Jaxson Reyes
i like this. high-hat's way high pitched though, sounds super robotic, but that's common in bedroom pop stuff.
Jacob Wood
why y'all roasting people tho. can't we give constructive feedback in a kind manner
i try, but i'm bad at it. actually been pissed in general lately, and i wanna be clear that it's not about anyone here. i've been like this with my friends as well. fuck. maybe i'll just not write in these threads for a while. reading back about spanish guitar guy i feel bad about it. i wouldn't want anyone to talk about my music that way. sorry guy. keep on doing you, we're here to have fun and do something we love.
I'm not that guy, I was just reading it and thinking maybe it woulda stung if I was him. On the one hand you left the most comprehensive feedback in the thread, which is great! And can be super helpful. But I think we can leave constructive criticism in a way that leaves everyone feeling good and encouraged as well. Sorry to hear you haven't been feeling well though. I hope things look up for you soon. I know from experience it can be hard to not let those negative emotions impact how we interact with others. It's something I struggle with as well. Wishing you the best.
>new age(?) >electronica >lofi house >synthpop >analog
check it out, love/hate/rate it, will keep posting more feedback later, some reccs down here
Brayden Evans
Yes, I made that after finishing the anime! *weebs unite*
Caleb Brown
20something, why do ye ask
Harsh but fair user, I'll take your criticism on board.
Honestly I know that other user said you were being too hard on people but in a way it's kind of refreshing to just to see someone speak from their heart about what they truly think.
I would love feedback on my latest song, Its my first serious song, bear with the mixing please
Caleb Reyes
Strong recc, saw your music in a previous thread and enjoyed it, has that nice hazy eccojams feel to it, something I could zone out to while writing/working
Nice beat, good flow, a lot of personality in your rhymes and rhythm, user. Fantastic
Seen your music in previous threads, really enjoyed it. Always dig beats like these
This is awesome, really my cup of tea. Some fantastic nifty sound textures going on here. That vocal wailing on Shades Ov Pink reminds me of something I would hear in a Ween track. Ace. Followed.
Reminds me of stuff like Home, hyper-melodic retrowave stuff. Really dig it. Wouldn't be out of place in an old Final Fantasy inn if the franchise took place in a neon tokyo. You have a good ear for melody.
oliverbagshaw.bandcamp.com/album/weeping-willows > new album, it's free > industrial, hip-hop, ambient, downtempo, glitch instrumentals, starts slow and gradually turns into a harsh-on-the-ears jam
Any feedback is appreciated, always trying to improve. Thanks for listening.
Recommended Will return in a bit to listen to you guys and give some proper feedback.
Nolan Wood
FORGOT PICCC
Joseph Ross
Pretty good. A lot better than most soundcloud rappers. Keep it up. Pretty trippy. This is bowling alley music. Having lived in the city, this hits close to home. The production leaves a lot to be desired, but melodically, I can dig it. Really fucking nostalgic. Holy shit
I corrected it to make sure the song transition nicely (out of bandcamp) and to reduce the silences
Pretty good riffs! Do you got a band?
sounds a bit too memenimalistic and not very industrial but it's very sleek and professional and the latter tracks really get your head bobbing. find yourself a decent memerapper to promote your beats.
chilling, strong rec
meh, sounds like semi-decent ambient or DS at best, like babby's first chiptune at worst. Sounds kind of unambitious
Caleb Flores
i like this sound, double track vox sound good that snare is cool and the bass is dope, i liked it fucking really good
>electronic/pop first time really trying to promote a song alot, its on spotify/apple music too
Your production issues are holding you back though.
I would suggest plugging the guitar directly in.
Guitar > DI > Interface
It sounds like you are micing it, and there is a lot of extra noise.
If it were me I would do the above, and then careful subtractive EQ, a little compression like 1.5:1 ratio with a modest attack and fast release, and a splash of reverb.
I'm glad you like it man. I still have a hard time with mixing drums, I know what you mean. Anyway, always love me some power-electronics.
Lucas Adams
I'm the last guy. Thanks, that's actually pretty helpful. I'll work at straying from the standard 4/4 time sig, 120bpm, kick drums and snare percussion.
Dylan Sullivan
Oh, and on another note, I might use Pain and Decay for something, if you don't mind.
Wyatt Allen
sounds like a bad slayer cover
Jonathan Cruz
Feel free, post credits would be nice in the notes of soundcloud or such.
Recs: also Rec but would just like to give my input. you have good sound going, but I would just suggest experimenting with different things so that your tracks don't sound too similar from one another and you have variety. Other than that they're pretty good!
Charles James
this is me
good stuff here Really digging this, will be sharing!