Sup Forums I am getting married soon and the invitation design was one of my few responsibilities and it isn't turning out well can any kind souls please help me fix this?
Sup Forums I am getting married soon and the invitation design was one of my few responsibilities and it isn't turning...
Camden Flores
Nicholas Gomez
start of the words have too big letters
Isaiah Moore
I just need ideas I can probably do it all myself I'm not a complete novice in photoshop
Alright I'm going to reduce the size on the capitalized letters in the calligraphic font and I want to change the type font entirely but I can't find the perfect fit
Connor Adams
bracket box around the A feels heavy try making vertical brackets smaller and position them farther apart so they dont overlap
spacing is kinda fucked up to arrangement wise try different margins/spacing
why is the ampersand so fucking stupid looking?
bottom is ok i guess
no
stretch brackets or dont make them so bold
there yah go, good luck
Brandon Hughes
Thanks I'm actually going try redoing the entire thing but you have good advice
>why is the ampersand so fucking stupid looking?
place holder
okay now everything is changing and it's super rough thoughts?
Liam Campbell
You can still do a cursive font, but cool it with the loops holy shit, a thicker lined cursive would do you well methinks
Yeah that ampersand is fucked. though try moving it up a bit so it's centered between the two fakey fake names and it might look better
Owen Bailey
That new A...
Xavier Nelson
Shit I have a wax seal with that exact A I was hoping it would work or will I need to change everything?
Noah Bennett
For "Saturday the day of the month" there's a lot of negative space above and below it. Since it looks well centered and just the right size I think it especially needs a thiccer font to give the illusion that it fills up more of that negative space
No I actually think it's pretty good! Just again with all those loopty loops it looks(only a little) out of place to me. If you have a wax seal then that's too lit to give up imo..
Juan Collins
Okay coming back at y'all still need to change the other font but I think this one matches the A better
Henry Reyes
Definitely better. Though did you decrease the space for the saturday or is it just the font? I hate to be so nitpicky about it but now I feel like it's cramped there. However if you like how it looks leave it, because it looks much better now, so the point is almost moot
Henry Wright
May this one be too much?
Lucas Lee
I have been nudging them around a bit I am working fast and loose right now just getting the ideas down I'll be going through with the guides on making everything perfect later
I kinda hate the middle bit now that i see it posted
Thomas Thomas
Any thoughts on background? I am thinking of just getting it printed on nice stock with some texture to it
I'm also excepting marriage advice in this thread we are both about to be 30 and will have been together for five years on the day of our marriage
Hudson White
Whew lad
It certainly is fancy, and tightly packed. However graphically I think it holds up. Because the difference in color provides contrast that serves as its own kind of "space" and it makes even this action packed version look pretty good.
Though if you think it's too much get to pruning, what I like about your design is that it's very flexible with the spacing, though I guess that can be said about many a design...
Matthew Perez
I'm thinking this is better
Tyler Garcia
When it comes to paper I think it's 50% preference, though I do agree, I think a textured stock will fit this style well. I'm always partial to parchment type paper myself, though I think you should 100% get this printed on smooth card stock, textured card stock, a light textured stock and even a glossy photo stock just so you can see and have all of them in front of you, nothing helps more than that.
Parker Cox
Checked. And yeah, it gives your eyes breathing room to take in the info and design. I think the spacing for the two thousand eighteen and the fake place is a bit at odds with the rest though, but it's close, just some slight adjustments I think.
When I was in classes for Graphic Design spacing always got me fucked up
Owen Campbell
I'm certainly not one who should be giving marriage advice, or any relationship advice for that matter. I fuck up all my attempted romances. hopefully we can get some other married bois here.
John Murphy
Just don't "No Children" by The Mountain Goats and it should be well
Hudson Sanders
I just want to thank all the anons in this thread that have helped me I think I have something decent to show her!
I have been coming here since I was a teenager and I knew I could count on you guys when I had nowhere else to turn
My dad is on wife number five there is a reason why I had her wait four years to pop the question
Landon Gray
Get rid of the metrosexual fonts and you'll be good to go
Henry Barnes
I think the final one you posted in here looks great. I would be proud of that.
Blake Johnson
Good shit, smart thinking. Wish I was that self-aware XD.
Glad to help