Ok, so I wasn't clear enough for you pussies in the last thread. Let me fix that, this is gonna be just like a regular music share thread but you are only allowed to give absolutely negative feedback. No saying anything positive to soften the blow of your criticism, just straight up be as nasty as you can because that's how you make great music. So go one faggot, post your music.
/negative feedback/
Caleb Nelson
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wavelength2.bandcamp.com
clyp.it
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saturdaynightmonkeys.bandcamp.com
thepablocollective.bandcamp.com
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coreymeehan.bandcamp.com
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clyp.it
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twitter.com
Aiden Gomez
you go first :3
Joseph Baker
soundcloud.com
come at me
Kevin Powell
youtube.com
fuck me up senpais
Jace Walker
Aiden Baker
LMAOO u just put some piano notes behind some marble hornets distorted screaming sound this isnt music
and then theres a minute of silence u uncreative fuck
Blake Johnson
Noah Mitchell
what are midi dynamics
Jordan Perez
really surprises me that there can be such low effort garbage thats posted on mu that passes for music
"durr if i make enough random sounds in a short amount of time thats music amirite"
Matthew Torres
shit on me
liarboy.bandcamp.com
Wyatt Thompson
Bully the duck out of us moo
Brody Morris
Elijah Collins
Bard type of song: soundcloud.com
Spooky type of song: soundcloud.com
>Dungeon Synth
>Fun song names
>Some fantasy bard type songs
>Some spooky songs with odd time signatures and changes
Negative (you)s pls.
Tyler Johnson
Ryan Kelly
Here’s the hook/bridge of an unfinished song I’m gonna post soon
Gabriel Ramirez
This is the most boring thing I’ve heard on Sup Forums. It’s just a beginner guitarist fucking around with variations on the same riff over and over again. I don’t know what to say to this. It’s incredjbly boring.
John Parker
Fucking rape me.
Juan Allen
>fuck it
>fuck me
Lincoln Young
Chase Ward
your voice is boring m8. you can't just say words on beat and call it rapping. especially for a hook, the way you rap needs to be novel and sticky.
Jonathan James
too much fx in the beat. everything just sounds muddy and shitty.especially in the bass. that bassline sounds gross.
Adam Bennett
>soundcloud.com
pointless, sounds like you just learned how to sample. you need to add some interest in there. right now you just have some tinny drumkit and generic piano sample looping indefinitely. add some fills and humanize the drums. maybe add some atmospheric effects in the background. add a bassline.
i've made plenty of beats like this too and they're a fun way to spend an hour. but its not really interesting music. you don't need to reinvent the wheel but like think about if what you're making has any points of interest outside of the main loop. if the answer is no then there's work to do.
Connor Wright
fuck me up
soundcloud.com
saturdaynightmonkeys.bandcamp.com
>psychedelic
>psychedelic rock
Lincoln Lopez
thepablocollective.bandcamp.com
just fuck our shit up
brutally boring
violence will light the way is just a modified melody from redbone, no dynamics
dude tame impala vocals
Nathan Rogers
youtube.com
break my songwriting ego
Connor Miller
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Not my tempo
Grayson Campbell
I wrote this for the >reddit cypher lol what do u guys think
soundcloud.com
Isaac Hill
soundcloud.com/sleepyrandy
sleepyrandy.bandcamp.com
not exactly in time practise with a metronome
actually shitty
too retro its been done before
does not lend itself well to insults, try harder dickhead.
get better mixing and mastering. . . try in the studio that way u get more attempts for good timing..
damn... this is cool.. but nobody would fuckin ever buy this.
Nathan Price
richter.bandcamp.com
nasty
Colton Lee
www.soundcloud.com/lilzibo/fuck-weaboos
Tyler Moore
Okay that's officially the worst thing since AIDS
Julian James
Elaborate
Angel Harris
>Hurr durr that s how you make gr8 music hurr strong men hurr real men
Daniel Peterson
John Gray
Terrible lyrics, clearly ironic but not even remotely new, seems like it's just some guy projecting for a few minutes.
Instrumentals are simple and basic.
Samuel Bennett
Bump
Leo Cooper
The consensus seems to be that this is boring beyond belief, and I completely agree.
Adrian Ortiz
soundcloud.com
>lofi beats
>boom bap
Tell me how generic I am daddy, hurt me
Nicholas Baker
Shit on my lame weeb picture too
Chase Harris
bretty generic desu
Eli Gutierrez
Nigga you clearly have no idea what you are talking about on instrumentals, i sampled a beautiful piece on fuck weaboos, the lyric might not be good but the beat is fire
Angel Green
I urge you to reconsider
Noah Carter
>lofi
>beats
Dominic Lee
Would talk shit but there's no link
Jack Cruz
not recognising the genius of level 5 music is kind of lame you know
Adrian Lopez
Did someone call for twelve tone spyro music?
Alexander Cook
coreymeehan.bandcamp.com
Fuck my generic shit dream pop up
>Don't actually know what genre to call myself because I don't know enough
>Music
Literally just sounds like when the dentist puts the sucking machine in your mouth during a cleaning and it keeps moving around
Asher Allen
hey guise your all good dont let some randumb neckbeard wizard tell you otherwise xoxo
Carson Reed
soundcloud.com
soundcloud.com
soundcloud.com
tell me what i already know
Owen Roberts
youtube.com
(and please, I know the sounds used are crap(, not necessarily why tho))
Sebastian Miller
you start the song off with interesting pitch collisions and then just go durrr grunge tonal.
Same with rythmic variations after the intro and around 00:49, but then you seem to pull on the leitmotiv rhythm in random ways without any apparent thought
I quite like it tbqh, still pretty underwhelming and repetitive compared to what it could have been obv
Cameron Peterson
ill let you pick the song
soundcloud.com
Connor Hernandez
me
Swell, bleh barcarolle arpeggio with classic filler second tone of minor scale. False resolutions on plagal to land on reversed initial chord, when stumped just throw in chords based on accumulations of fourths rather than thirds. Literally only striking rhythm is the tingadings in third minute, and that's saying something, they make me notice that, oh yeah, he's been playing a three over two cell ballad rhythm all this fucking time, wait has he?
Eh, not bad, I wouldn't pay for it mind
Jason Nelson
I have no idea what any of this means ahaha
Lucas Martin
rip my band up we make generic fucking rock alternative punk pussy music :)
John Butler
>soundcloud.com
Your profile as a whole is just fucking lazy fr.
Henry Rivera
give me your best shot
Austin King
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH FAGGOTS I KNOW I MAKE GOOD MUSIC SO WUSSUP
Josiah Bennett
whut
Jayden Adams
How the fuck do you spend so much time mixing your music and not even bother tuning your voice? Sounds like you recorded this at 4am with your parents next door
Lucas Foster
Its just uninteresting. the music itself is accurate to the genre at best but you dont even bother putting in album art and half of it is covers.
Brandon Green
its not an album and yes they are covers its not even a critic
Luke Mitchell
>soundcloud.com
rhyming over with over lol
Justin Young
bitch that aint even the best bars stop cherry picking
Jacob Lewis
>posts in a criticism thread and cant take criticism
Dude even if its a single make it interesting not just a photo of your face
Robert Collins
im gonna regret this
Lincoln Morris
>soundcloud.com
Was waiting patiently for "WHEN SHE WAS JUST A GIIIIRRLLL SHE EXPECTED THE WOOORLLD" to kick in, was disappointed
Colton Johnson
that pic of my face is interesting
Alexander Butler
RATE MY LIVE SHOW. I GOT ABOUT 10 STACKS FOR THIS SHOW
Aiden Phillips
ITT ppl who cry when criticised lmao please someone rip my shit into threads i wanna improve
soundcloud.com
needs a voice over it
Benjamin Turner
No you didn't.
Nicholas Russell
yes i did bitch
Angel Cooper
>soundcloud.com
mix is muddy as fuck, bass is way too loud, guitars have no definition, mic them closer to the center. kick is thumpy and weak, cut 200-400 and boost sub80 thin, mic your snare better, or include a bottom snare mic, or eq some high mids into it and pray
Isaiah Perez
what you think of this mix
soundcloud.com
Jaxson Price
You guys wanna hear some shit?
Peep this, my ninjas:
soundcloud.com
I used to get told that I suck and should kill myself. Now I get ignored. I miss the roasting.
Logan Butler
>soundcloud.com
the bass is slightly too loud and the drums except the kick are too quiet, also tighten up your playing when you double track
Owen Nelson
Jaxson White
thats the tightest i could get
Isaiah Scott
To quote Twisted Sister, "If that's your best, your best won't do."
Austin Baker
i fuckin chuckled when the lead kicked in
also if you use massive you should probably kill yourself
Levi Morgan
Why did you chuckle? Because it was that bad, or because it caught you off guard?
And I do use Massive. What soft-synths do you recommend? I wanna always accept criticism.
Jayden Gray
My beat. soundcloud.com
Jesus fucking Christ. Just look at the wave forms of your songs. Absolute loud shit. If everything is loud, nothing is. Tone it down.
Incredibly boring pop sounding shit. Get an original sound.
Fuck your cat and fuck this song. It is incredibly safe. Do something different for once in your life.
You actually think this is good? I hate the way the vocals are mixed with the beat. Too muddy and low.
Tyler Lewis
Matthew Brooks
am i unable to record metal music and other genres that require very precise timing?
Christopher Adams
youtube.com
youtube.com
youtube.com
Here's three different styles. Can someone tell me which sucks worst?
Michael Ramirez
just keep trying, and practice with a metronome
Cameron Williams
i practiced with a metronome the entire year
Lincoln Richardson
>math rock
>it's in 4/4
Elijah Wright
a "chill" trap beat i'm making for a friend
just fuck me up guys, i'm so stuck
clyp.it
Thomas Ortiz
lmao it's shit but it's a hundred times better than your out of time guitar strumming you faget
Lucas Gray
if you're not just an untalented hack, it could be your recording equipment. check if there's any latency that's fucking up your timing. even 10ms of latency while recording is enough to fuck up your timing, especially on a metal track
Tyler Ward
your visual aesthetic gave me cancer and your ideas of dynamics gave me herpes
Thomas Fisher
what's wrong with massive? and don't tell me some bullshit reason like "durr it's used by so and so artists for so and so tracks"
Serum is basically a spiritual successor to Massive with a vastly improved GUI and workflow.
Steve's anti-piracy measures are annoying as fuck but hey it's his intellectual property so whatever. if you have quick access to the keygen it's not too annoying. otherwise if you're not a poorfag like me then just buy it ($189)
FM8 is considered a solid choice for FM synthesis, and The Mangle is good for granular synthesis. I don't use other types of synth at the moment so this is all i can recommend
Robert Collins
>last 7 posts are me
why do threads die as soon as i join them
Angel Evans
Charles Hernandez
bump
Isaac Reyes
Bump as well
Christopher Flores
Carter Miller
Is there anything in here that isn't chill beats? I don't want to wade through crap that's been done to death..