Harsh criticism edition
I don't want to see any nice comments. If someone's track is derivative dogshit you better call them out on it. If someone posts experimental wankery you better call them out on it.
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Connor Taylor
>using soundcloud
you better kys before it's too late
Matthew Adams
>lo-fi funk
>psychedelic
>comfy synths
>sampling
Jaxson Brooks
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>Underground Beat
>Dilla
Ian Green
way to long and the mixing is ass, cut it in half and try again
Noah Scott
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>acoustic something
Go for it, I guess?
Leo Lewis
>art pop, bedroom pop, synthpop, noise, house, twee, zolo
Chase Howard
1 min and 30 seconds of the same shit over and over again
real nice user
Chase Perry
Tyler Sullivan
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>punk rock
>bedroom recording
>booze music
Landon Perez
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It's comedy, bro. I don't really care about the song quality that much.
Just so everyone knows, I'm only really looking for opinions on the comedic value.
Also, here is my comedy podcast first episode:
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Samuel James
wait why did you quote me
William Kelly
is there a reason your 'best' work is 3 years old? what happened?
Gavin Bennett
I'm not actually sure, Sup Forums kinda just did that...
Jacob Perry
Band broke up. Well, more like the drummer quit and we've had no luck with getting anything else concrete recorded.
Adam Hill
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>Lil Peep Type Beat
>Guitar Trap Beat
>Sad Trap
>Better Than Most Of Yall So Called "Producers"
Anthony Stewart
NEW SONG
You will love
Will return all likes, comments, follows, and feedback
SYNTHWAVE
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James Ross
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>ambient
>house / techno
>psychedelic electronics
Our first EP, Subconscious Concepts, is out and ready for listening! A synth-laden journey through the depths of sound. New conceptual EP is being produced as we speak! Thanks for all of the support.
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fuck a criticism, i give hope
We Know Different People has a fantastic laid back vibe and when that synth kicks in, it really takes off. Great sampling as well. But I feel like it could use some better drums for sure. They're just very uninteresting.
Stationary Static has better drums and the panning on the guitar is pleasant. It just lacks a true progression. It's very middle of the road in terms of what it makes me feel.
The Mindless Flight of a Murderous Bird is the most hard-hitting rhythm out of all of these. Great mixing.
On the Brink of Thinking is nice. Could use vocals to bring greater meaning to the track. But the guitar riff is beautiful and the way you play with rhythm and intermingling those guitars is fantastic.
Jason Lewis
Like a shitty hotline miami rip and the dialogue at the beginning is nothing but hot air so that's pretty nice. Then out of the blue you get hit by a waft of drunk singing. Thanks for sharing, really.
Ryan Cooper
activate your fucking windows you daft cunt and maybe grow a pair
Hudson Allen
This is honestly some of the best feedback ever. I love it.
Justin Long
Would it kill you to make a track that has any meaning? I mean just what the fuck are you trying to say with all this? Why are you and your mutt friend hiding behind a lampshade? Why do you type with so many exclamation marks?
So many questions, but really just fucking kys.
Elijah Thomas
>Thanks for all of the support.
???
What support? Thanks for shitting up Sup Forums. Do you even browse Sup Forums?
Gavin Adams
Oh sweet my stuff is weeb shit perfect shit on me pls before i release it
Christian Ross
Mixing is awful, lower the treble and let's be honest here, that distorted vocal shit adds nothing to the track at all. In fact is takes away a lot.
I mean just why the fuck did you do that? At the very least pull a Burial and add some fire crackling if you're gonna be a faggot.
Nathan Lewis
lmao u mad
Colton Sanchez
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>alternative
Go wild peeps
Isaac Lee
nice reddit spacing
Evan Baker
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new song,
Here’s a link to my stuff on Spotify too
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>bedroom pop
>FFO: Starry cat, Rex Orange County, Bulldog eyes
I’ve become a fan, keep it up this is great punk.
Luis Brooks
love you guys thanks for all the support
Carson Young
underage detected
Wyatt Thompson
lol best advice ive ever gotten tyty
Andrew Murphy
>doesn't even answer a single question
are you a robot?
Jack Mitchell
>FACT
Jesus, do ME a favor buddy. Tell me what the fuck this """fact""" is you're talking about because I don't get it.
Also would it kill you to speak more clearly?
Kayden Miller
got a new tune
James Robinson
dog... problems? what?
Christopher Davis
no need to answer when the questions are really fucking dumb. but if youre truly curious, meaning comes with time and experience. Cant expect me to shit out a fucking Picasso on my first try. the lampshades are obviously pointless. i like using emotion when i type!!!??!?!?!??!!
Jose Clark
Yeah that's just what I like to see. An ugly baby and a fat midwestern cunt.
>what's the point in dreaming when all your hope is gone
yeah, if that was my family I'd feel the same. Low energy and forgettable.
Nathan Mitchell
oh so you're fake and illiterate. Great combo!!!@@!!!!@@!!!!!!!!
Christopher Peterson
awful
Dylan Jackson
henlo its faggot. What aspect of the mixing is terrible? aside from treble, is anything too loud/soft/conflicting?
Aaron Davis
>meaning comes with time and experience
What a typical high-brow brainlet meme answer. That basically tells me that your track is pointless along with being garbage.
Ryan Rodriguez
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heres my track, some minimal lyrics for the first time for me
>trip hop
>downtempo
>track has no deeper meaning
>go burn me friends
harsh criticizm edition ok here we go, ive reviewed some of you guys before, this time ive got only bad words to say
you cant sing for shit and the mixing is horrible with that weird white noise
way too overloaded at times, like 3 different bands playing a song at the same time
sounds like you went out of ideas after the first one
you should def work on your rhythm on the guitar, from times to times its out of time
damn that voice hit me out of nowhere, way too loud and close, get some distance
mixing is weird, the guitar is too loud and distracts from the singing which is the main part of the song
drums not loud enough, vocals off beat in the end
lil peep/trap with out hi hat rolls? youre a disgrace to humanity
too much compression, pretty much killed all dynamics
i feel like... the best is yet to come
the vocals need some eqing they sound painful
Chase Miller
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heeeeeeey fuck me up
Brandon Bell
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>robot groove
Ian Lopez
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lay it on me faggots
Lucas Mitchell
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kill my self confidence
Xavier Carter
first of all never fucking namefag
the vocals and the track just don't fit. if you don't understand this then you need to
1. go to youtube and type in robert johnson complete
2. listen to that playlist in the background of whatever gay shit you do all day
3. after a week is over listen to your soulless track and you will understand
Jordan Hughes
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new video on a synth long drive song. check out the soundcloud in the descripton
Chase Moore
literate enough to see you have nothing to offer, just sad spiteful words
"typical high-brow brainlet meme answer" is a phrase only a disgusting, pimple-ridden mountain dew chugger would say unironically. congrats, you played yourself.
Caleb Myers
your voice makes it sound like a frankjavcee video making fun of whatever shitty genre this is supposed to be
Xavier Baker
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I REMADE A SKRILLEX SONG
IM ORIGINAL
PLS
Luke Torres
sounds like some shit a 6th grader would make using Garageband loops
Jeremiah Cruz
>resorts to ad hom
There's nothing dumb about asking what you're trying to say with your piece of "art". You then give us a fake ass "luve u guys
Julian Turner
>that much nonconstructive criticism
>that track
>mfw
>INB4: reee you post something here's my soundcloud page soundcloud.com
Nicholas Bell
David King
weird rap
Wyatt White
>water sounds
>wooooooooo woooooo
>genetic note progression
>nigger beats
>lyrics that offer nothing
Ryan Robinson
Nothing like ambient mom dropping me off at school sounds to start off an album. Unless you have more to offer I'm gonna stop at that.
Austin Wood
...was expecting more about the music but okay, will endeavour to record more high energy work in future
Isaac Ward
Weird is one way to put it, bad is another. Is there any point to that little dialogue? Please let me know.
Blake Torres
nice man
i really like that track keep on
David Walker
the music speaks for itself. it's an exploration and reflection of the human subconscious through sound. damn, you just really suck.
Colton Howard
I mean just put yourself in the listeners shoes. They open the link and the first thing they see is that... don't set yourself up for failure Pops.
Levi Murphy
thats the sex pistols my man
and hey, we're trying some things out, no wrong in that
Parker James
Noted and changed
Alexander Carter
>the music speaks for itself
it really does
Leo Baker
i mean i like robert johnson but im not trying to make delta blues. ill give it a shot while im sucking off other men thou.
>inb4 missing the point
im curious thou, what makes it "soulless"? do you just not like the genre and is edm souless by nature? or are there other artist that do what im doing correctly?
this sounds like you used the default fl drum patches that you get when you first load up. Its a little too long, and the bass is super overbearing at 1:40 ish, and not in a good way, especially with those squarish plucks. Also the riser that happens before the "drop is v loud.
Ooooooh im actually a fan of uk hip hop/rap. but in the spirit of this thread; oh look a rap song about bitches and money weeeee. You have a great flow but please write about something else. Some of the lower hats sound weird too but thats minor.
Easton Sanchez
you lost me. is there a point to this convo besides your vague shit talking?
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>experimental
>kinda plunderphonics
>post-industrial?
>jazz influenced
give it to me, i kinda need it
John Adams
lol forgot to upload the cover art
Lucas Wilson
My shittalking is anything but vague. I asked those questions for a reason and all I got was an uppity mutt. I'm still hopeful about some answers besides 2deep4u though, we'll just have to see.
Jaxson Gonzalez
I can picture you dragging the vocals onto a pirated daw, fucking around with the distortion, and calling it a day. I don't feel anything when I'm listening to this.
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Nolan Perez
LMFAO U CLEARLY NEVER HEARD A PEEP SONG
IM BETTER THAN YOU AND IM NOT EVEN TRYING
Nathan Richardson
i answered all of your questions and i completely regret wasting my time doing so. But hey, I tried. If you aint a fan, i cant blame you. I'm only going to get better from here. Good luck, i'm gonna go have a life now ;) have fun
James Miller
I will just continue reviewing stuff, since i have nothing else to do:
"took like 20 minutes max" and sounds like it. liked the part at 2:02 when the drums finally ended
for starters, way too long. some interesting parts, but it sounds like your just dicking around with some knobs honestly and not making one coherent song
dont really like the voice, i agree with narcos 1:23- what the fuck is your problem.. it sounds like youre trying hard to sound edgy
got nothing bad to say, ur dumb
you make really good music dude!
bassline gets pretty repetitive on "wonder", mix it up a little more
calling it weird yourself doesnt make it better.Beat feels empty
Brandon Diaz
You have a wimpy voice, like at least yell or something. Listening to this track I picture a scrawny teen hunched over a cheap mic from guitar center. 1:50 onward is salvageable except the screaming is distorted in a cheap way. I just don't see how you think that's acceptable and I'd be embarrassed to show my peers this track.
Jaxson Hughes
That passive aggressive attitude is going to get you nowhere in life.
Dylan Davis
>tfw the best track in the thread is by a hobo singing about eating rotten meat
Henry Lewis
now this is truly some harsh criticism
Jason Reyes
I see what you mean, to be fair I don't show many people my music. I'm still in early stages of attempting anything at all.
Kevin Morris
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Just finished today let it rip
Connor Lee
Mason Price
This is inlistenable
And not if the good way
Make this shit interesting at the least and you'll probably get better.
Probably.
Carter Ramirez
This shit has to sound like blown out speakers at max volume underwater cos othetwise you'll just end up sounding like this
Bentley Foster
how can I make it more interesting?
Elijah James
Well that's st least reassuring.
Hoping you quit that is.
Jk user just make it at the least creatively something and I think you'll have, maybe self satisfaction
Asher Mitchell
Idk that's why you gotta be creative with it, think about how it would engage someone
Unless you're going for drab mellow background noise
Thomas Reyes
>to be fair I don't show many people my music
you should, even if you don't like it. it's the only way to truly get better
Daniel Clark
This comment is not me, maybe there was confusion
Still, thanks for the feedback.
Anthony Anderson
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>Noise
>Gang-stalking videos
Nolan Watson
Forgot to say
>experimental
>techno
>ambient
>idk tried to be as much as an outsider as possible
Xavier Price
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>tech house
>fucking roast me
Zachary Russell
if only you werent such a shitty singer
Thomas Peterson
Just cause there's noise doesn't mean it's art dipshit.
Or that it's interesting in the slightest
Dominic Garcia
Four on the floor
Fucking groundbreaking dude
Other than that, sounds, alright?
Owen Reyes
Thanks bro