SOUNCLOUD: Good Criticisms Edition

[Hunter Sanchez]

Share all of your music here and I'll be sticking in for a while to provide what I hope to be decent and helpful critiques on some Sup Forums-made shit. You do the same. Ignore "Recs"

[Jacob Gutierrez]

A weirder, slower track on my newly released debut EP

>experimental, pop, rock, electronic, psych, noise, post-rock, acoustic

soundcloud.com/emptyangels/your-horror-still-wants-me

[Colton Morales]

m.youtube.com/watch?v=og5HlW3WbD0

[Christian Baker]

New track guys!

soundcloud.com/petuni-e/youre-my-quicksand

>downtempo/lo-fi/comfy

Returning any feedback on Soundcloud

[Jaxon Sanchez]

>Industrial Hip-Hop/Sound Collage

soundcloud.com/sun-at-midnight/shades-ov-pink

>WIP

soundcloud.com/sun-at-midnight/out-from-the-dark-movement-i-comp/s-r4ANl

Vocals are done really well, love all of the synth-work, will give the full EP a listen, I really like what I'm hearing here.

[Robert Thomas]

soundcloud.com/waynewalkermusic/mortal
>post punk
>electro drums
>new coming soon

[Easton Gray]

Working on some new stuff, but for now have a link

soundcloud.com/from_downtown

>boombap
>phonk
>etc

I love this, the vocal performance and synth work are especially good
The midtrack climax is fuckin phenomenal

I really appreciate your sound, it's a lot more adventurous than the usual lofi hiphop tracks floating around
New track reminds me of Portishead / Red Snapper / the usual 90s triphop bands

[Nolan Richardson]

Not a soundcloud
youtube.com/watch?v=mCBXD3tCSUk&index=10&list=PLhW-jtKip9eIoqz6WgnqbTOvh7DW3A8pT

[Logan Long]

soundcloud.com/thatemus/you-may-enter

>wave

New wave tune, working more on improving the mix. Thanks for checking it out!

Recs:

The variety of work you put out is awesome, between rattled and smoke pt.2 alone.
Really awesome work with sampling, check this out!
Beautiful strings!

[Cameron Gutierrez]

soundcloud.com/weareapartment9/fade-out-produced-by-charlie

> synthpop

[Camden Parker]

soundcloud.com/kyo-the-cook/out-in-the-dark

>Gloomy vibes
>Trap beat

soundcloud.com/kyo-the-cook/amnesia

>Lo-fi hiphop
>sampled

[Wyatt Carter]

pleasancehouse.bandcamp.com/
soundcloud.com/pleasancehouse

>atmospheric folktronica

The new album, "Orbiter", is out now. Thank you so much for listening!

Here's some download codes:
eg8w-edbt
8unc-ucs7
2p99-35dr
pleasancehouse.bandcamp.com/yum

I'm enjoying this. Very very cool sound, very good production. Some of the sounds in "Your Horror Still Wants Me" are orgasmic.

[Gavin Fisher]

Me

Already commented on this in the bandcamp thread. Just keep playing
Having those genres listed isn't a good sign for me, as they aren't necessarily my favorite thing to willingly listen to, so I might not be the best person to be taking any critique from. I enjoy the interesting sound that starts chirping and whizzing about a minute in. I like the glide on that synth that happens during that section as well. I dig that it has a few layers to keep my attention on, for me it could probably use more, as it's instrumental music and maybe I'm just too ADD lol. Track doesn't overstay welcome though.
Wish I knew what was sampled and what wasn't. Always is more impressive to know that something was primarily designed from scratch. Crazy shit though, I love me some noise. When the drums kicked in, first impression was that they sound cheap and don't fit the crazy ass sounds of the what else is going on. Yeah, listening further, they sound like a cheap Alesis electronic kit. But I like that the track is constantly changing, a lot of nice modulation to what's going on. I feel like the reverb might be pushing some important aspects to the background. Crazy visceral shit though, I like this a lot. Folloooowwww
Man I feel like this gets hefty fun at house shows, a lot of the hip young folk would really jive to this. Really like the inclusion of the EP. Clearly talented and understands what you're doing. Great filtered stereo guitar solo. And then the subsequent section after it. Super fun stuff. No doubt that this could go somewhere as long as you keep going and improving. Especially with the general sound production value, recording, mixing and mastering. Really Good.

[Kevin Diaz]

rex

first project in over 4 yrs is out now my breddas
heres one of the heavier tracks on the album

soundcloud.com/nathanoriginal/farewell-to-you?in=nathanoriginal/sets/come-in-were-closed

>cloud trap
>chill hop

ʳ ᵃ ʷ ˢ ᵃ ᵘ ᶜ ᵉ

[Adrian Jones]

check out my new album
soundcloud.com/hate-child/sets/limbo

>electronic/alternative
>psychedelic
>piano
>synths
>avantgarde?
>i dont really know what genre

also check out my ep from a while back if you want. it's a little bit trippier/wonkier
soundcloud.com/hate-child/sets/observation-perspective
>electronic/trip-hop
>synths
>piano
>dark
>psychedelic/weird

working on what i think is a better album coming soon

recs/feedback:
this is really cool, man. if i had criticism i would say work on tightening up the pitch of the vocals a little, but in general the vocals are pretty nice.

nice beats as always. just keep it up, i dig every track you put out so far. the strings are really nice.

always good

your beat tape is really cool, keep it up.

[Luke Diaz]

soundcloud.com/dnvnt/knxw
new coming soon

[Juan Garcia]

soundcloud.com/cato-i/shoelace-xx/s-iHQ7g

>white folk RnB, alt electronica

[Adrian Sullivan]

Myself again

Not sure how to give helpful insight for this, as I'm not too knowledgeable on the inner workings of what's going on here, so maybe just take my perspective like that. Seems to be primarily sample based, just with your own minimalistic and overly compressed drums on top. The compression works well for it, but this seems kind of low effort on my end. Maybe a filter on one of the samples here and there. Easy to listen to regardless! Not like your samples and self-produced sounds clash or anything.
As I said to the last lo-fi/downtempo/chill artist, this isn't my forte. But the drums are pretty cheap. I personally feel that the crash that introduces the drums should be a sizzle ride but that's just my preference. This is minimalistic in a way that does not help itself as it's not too compelling in anyway but it doesn't overstay it's welcome. Could use maybe les ambient pads, ones that are thicker to provide more meat and backbone to the track. I feel like it could be more involved in general. Seems like everyone and their mother is making lo-fi, but there's no doubt that you can keep moving forward with this sound and improve on it and make something of your own. But right now I'm not seeing anything that makes it stand out.
Listening to So New. Really interesting. I like the different time signatures! Super refreshing to have an interesting culmination of sounds compliment each other pretty well. Kind of reminds me of Sweet Trip. There's a lot going on that's keeping me interested. A really pleasing voice. Damn, if this is getting played live there's no doubt that this is taking off, just gotta push HEAVY. This deserves some good praise, definitely following. Great structure and beautiful progressions. So many nice little things going on. The sampling of the lead voice that keeps that rhythm going oanned to the right, I really like that, been wanting to get into vocal sampling a lot more. This is progressive

[Landon Richardson]

EVERYONE LISTEN TO THIS

[Liam Rivera]

lovely track.
the sounds coming and going in the background made for a nice trip.
amazing voice and arrangement overall.

great use of dissonance on the melody.
i could do it without the beats tho.

this is the first time i've seen sound collage stuff arranged in a interesting way.
and repeating, visceral noises have a special place in my heart.

soundcloud.com/loomingend/midnight-fate

>post-rockish
>contemporary
>drone
>ambient
>noise-y

[Henry Davis]

soundcloud.com/thekingvogner/try-aap-ferg-to-the-lil-uzi-vert

Roast me

Yes I know my mastering is shit but IDC IM AN ARTIST

[Kayden Barnes]

y

[William Flores]

Nah you're right. Aside from some sample chopping and reverb I don't generally get too in depth with effects / filters. I'll see what I can experiment with though, thanks for the feedback man!

[Charles White]

i dig

[Bentley Taylor]

soundcloud.com/slave-beaver-revolt/the-surfin-road

>punk rock
>bedroom recording
>booze music

[Caleb Hughes]

its raps forgot to add

[Brandon Smith]

soundcloud.com/hermit000/recluse

>rap
>dark & edgy
>emo
>black/doom metal vibes

RECC

[Henry Diaz]

youtube.com/watch?v=wHq5yB8d-c8

>hip hop
>old school / boom bap

first music vid, any feedback appreciated

[Xavier Jones]

ない 404 not found 見つけた - Nectar in a Sieve
404notfound.bandcamp.com/releases

>inspired by GY!BE
>solo piano layered on to speeches from child abusers, There Will Be Blood, button poetry, and more
>coherent theme throughout album

dig it

I wish you put a little more arhythm in your beats, I guess that's called trap? lol idk I really like Hella, I've just been into arhythmic trap (but not glitch?)

[Dominic Evans]

soundcloud.com/mhug21/robot-launcher-pjm170
>Ambient
>Electronic

[Liam Young]

soundcloud.com/lazy-eyelids
>

[Ethan Taylor]

Man, thanks for the very in depth analysis and praise. I appreciate it a lot! I seriously seriously love your music too, seriously when the second half hits in 'Horror' I'm blown away.
Thanks! Hopefully people do!
The song is good, beat and melody is dope, flow is nice. Good job with this man. Honest criticism on the video itself though - stylistically it isn't amazing, the lighting isn't too good and it shouldn't have been done in 60 fps. Not that I'm any sort of filmmaker myself but changing these two things would make future vids way more professional looking. Keep it up!

-Pleasance House

[Jordan Gonzalez]

nickboston.bandcamp.com/album/irving-lowes-hideaway-lights

>lo-fi
>experimental pop/rock/folk shit

[Blake Powell]

yo i dig this alot. just followed you [sadtuna]

[Adam Robinson]

goddamn i love this shit man. followed

[David Butler]

Just made this today. Will return any feedback as well!

soundcloud.com/iamzazen/oliver-heldens-shaun-frank-shades-of-grey-zazen-remix-concept

[Logan Carter]

Fucking around with Push
youtube.com/watch?v=R2ooXxI9VqE

[Ryan Williams]

soundcloud.com/prettyoverpowered/doom-jazz

>alternative

RECS:

[Liam Scott]

soundcloud.com/amongjupiter

>Ambient lo fi
>New age beets
>Hypnotic warmth

+Abraxas winter catalog now available for listening+

[Samuel Adams]

soundcloud.com/saxoncasi/sets/new-tracks

[Xavier Howard]

soundcloud.com/user671884646

do me in op

[Josiah Brown]

soundcloud.com/assassinateronaldreagan/aletheia
>lo-fi (because of course it is), alt-rock, post-punky type thingy. all at once generic, underwhelming, and endearing.
i also make other types of shit.
pretty alright. productions a little clean for my taste.
i like one hunnit one hunnit. good work. you got a good thing going on here.

[Angel Perry]

My music is real good because I'm a nice guy

soundcloud.com/kill-everyone/professor-catface-meowmers
>post-hardcore
>crabcore

Pink Floyd cover:
soundcloud.com/kill-everyone/in-the-flesh-demo

[Jace Ortiz]

soundcloud.com/mulfactor/la-recette
youtube.com/watch?v=cXt0Ux_n_ys

> somewhat hip-hop beat
> horror movie
> chopped vintage recipe

In the flesh is great, the heavy sound fits very well, and the singing is on point (I had some doubt that you used an acapella recording of Waters). Do The Trial now plz. and while I'm here, I too did a pink floyd cover last day woop woop soundcloud.com/mulfactor/celestial-beat-pink-floyd-cover

Your link is broken

So good. Is this track on soundcloud somewhere? (I wan't to add it to my work playlist)

[Josiah Myers]

>soundcloud.com/assassinateronaldreagan/aletheia

thanks, glad you liked (irving lowe). you ever listen to tobin sprout - carnival boy? if not, after listening to your track, i highly recommend

[Jackson Hill]

lofi rap... flows...

soundcloud.com/milespowers/blue-hydrangea?in=milespowers/sets/lofi

also peep my last project the FIFTY SIX LP. new track w/ RYCE and Late Scott this wednesday

soundcloud.com/milespowers/sets/fifty-six-lp

recs

[Ian Thomas]

hhhhhhh may as well since no one seems to really care abt my music
ssiimm.bandcamp.com/album/themarcher
[spoiler] also uhh pls buy so i can afford to pay the guy doing art for my next single [/spoiler]

[Hunter Brooks]

thanks bud. I appreciate it. No acapella rips here. I can waters and gilmour on command. The trial is still in early demo form. There's still a lot of work that needs done as far as keys/strings go. It's gonna be heavy as fuck tho

[Adam Flores]

im enjoying it a good deal

[Joshua Turner]

>you ever listen to tobin sprout - carnival boy?
nah, but thanks for the rec. i'm diggin it.

[Zachary Scott]

youtube.com/watch?v=jYpImSsIkK4

[Jack Turner]

> The trial is still in early demo form. There's still a lot of work that needs done as far as keys/strings go. It's gonna be heavy as fuck tho
Awesome!

[Levi Green]

>soundcloud.com/kill-everyone/in-the-flesh-demo

no prob. he's the george harrison of Guided By Voices

[David Stewart]

youtube.com/watch?v=jYpImSsIkK4

[Lucas Clark]

message me on soundcloud and I'll let you hear the trial

[Levi Gutierrez]

soundcloud.com/cwc-874336631/houdini-prod-big-bart

[Isaac Thomas]

did you know george harrison was a wilbury?
soundcloud.com/kill-everyone/tweeter-and-the-monkey-man-traveling-wilburys-cover

[Easton Williams]

fuck you

[Isaac Jones]

soundcloud.com/tutenkhamenbeats/mystery-beat

>trap
>beats

[Luke Campbell]

soundcloud.com/soberblu/favorite-song

>cloud rap emo lofi ig

[Hudson Gonzalez]

NEW SONG

soundcloud.com/poodge

>Comfy
>Vocals
>Synths
>Foley

Leaving feedback on pages

[Daniel Howard]

>Avant garde
>Noise trap
soundcloud.com/user-150649624

follow for a follow, comment for a comment
gonna run down the whole thread, hope someone can appreciate my noise

[Julian Davis]

soundcloud.com/ydoubler/antisocial-prod-by-penacho

YDoubleR - ANTISOCIAL (Prod. By Penacho)

>Rap
>Hip-hop
>New Wave
>Alternative

[Ethan Cooper]

Crudd, wrong link.
soundcloud.com/user-150649624/ya-dont-wanna-listen

[Leo Anderson]

soundcloud.com/shandicatunes
>janglepop
>guitars
>mellow and chill
>sad boi

Just released a cheeky little music video.
youtube.com/watch?v=CMGHPXYh7dI&feature=youtu.be

recc

[Charles Nguyen]

soundcloud.com/ibhssa/the-haunted

>progressive
>down tempo
>electronic

[Jackson Harris]

imitatingsound.bandcamp.com/album/let-it-be-permanent

>black metal
>abrasive

[Benjamin Robinson]

Holy, this is good! I would try and find a female voice to sing over it

Great stuff, reminds me of Parker & Lily

youtu.be/iIowNiZSgbY

>guitar music
>alternative rock

[Colton Hall]

youtube.com/watch?v=ILLb2oWUK0Q

[Lincoln Sanchez]

This is fucking amazing
Glad there's something on Soundcloud besides generic lofi trash beats

[Nolan Murphy]

youtube.com/watch?v=LPRgwpz3Q6s

>Post-rock
>Ambient
>Blending digital with analogue

Returning feedback

nice chords and lead line, song has a kind of REM vibe to it. Vocals are cool. Production is very smooth and professional. Very enjoyable

[Cooper Jenkins]

soundcloud.com/perceptionz-architekt/u-dont-know-me

>>Experimental Hip-Hop

[Luis Scott]

>flashy art rap over a flying Lotus instrumental

soundcloud.com/90sneptune/metro-pcs

full album here

neptheprince.bandcamp.com/album/space-of-culture

[Benjamin Gonzalez]

toanteam.bandcamp.com/album/a-voyage-16-17

>DIY rock music with flashes of post-rock, math-rock

i'm assuming these are drum loops? Would probably sound a lot more dynamic and interesting with a "real drummer" tb h.

after googling, looks like you guys are from Italy? How is the "scene" over there? I'm always interested in music scenes outside of the us

I feel like this track might need something more - nice playing and production but the nylon guitar gets a bit tiresome after almost 4 minutes. maybe some kind of low bass component, or vocals?

[Tyler Wood]

soundcloud.com/borthman

>laidback
>guitar
>bedroom indie

[Andrew Edwards]

soundcloud.com/chrislakebitch/bitch-move-prod-chris-lake

>trap rap
>ignant

[Dylan Rodriguez]

rec this fucken hard, listened to it all night balling my eyes out

this is intense man

[Sebastian Hughes]

soundcloud.com/freddie-floyd/soyboy-prod-oc

>hip hop and rap
>trap

I got a music video too:

youtube.com/watch?v=Dq-e42IFCL0

Any and all support is appreciated.
I return all feedback.

[Luis Campbell]

soundcloud.com/p_urbxn/ecstasy

Newly released track, would really appreciate some feedback on this!

>EDM
>Dance
>Trap
>beats

recs

[Hunter Allen]

i need feedback
soundcloud.com/user-372645803/music-001

[Luis Scott]

thanks! i love parker & lily. loving your stuff as well. good luck.

-n

[Chase Johnson]

All the track are the exact same my friend

[Daniel Stewart]

soundcloud.com/user-234449172/226a

>electronic
>industriel
>experimental

[Jack Ortiz]

...

[Ayden Ramirez]

soundcloud.com/user-422667902

Autistic melodies

soundcloud.com/user-422667902

[Jackson Martinez]

youtube.com/watch?v=maKs-ftRHjI
comfy music box
sad bg music

[Henry Phillips]

soundcloud.com/zolton-2/solar-flarefuller-step-prod-origami

Play this if you aren’t having too good of a day

[Jason Clark]

Why doesn't Soundcloud accept MIDI files? Is there any site that does?

[Joshua Brooks]

midi files aren't audio files

just use audacity and record the file playing through whatever you use to play it and then upload that

[Leo Collins]

Thanks, before I couldn't get that to work for some reason, but I have a new computer and it worked this time.

So what's the rule about posting Midi here anyway? I write my songs in Guitar Pro before I record them, so they're more works in progress/rough drafts than real songs.

[Oliver Fisher]

sosia.bandcamp.com/

>ambient
>processed and unprocessed guitar
>drone at times

The vibe here is quite nice, maybe go also for some drumless, you might make some really good stuff happen

I think you need more identity to your music, it's a good base tho, try to work on soundscapes and such

The WIP one is interesting, never listened to the genre but you got me Intrigued

[Justin Nelson]

so you listened to all of them?

[Jackson Rodriguez]

not enough feedback

[Connor Carter]

soundcloud.com/myn323
>electronic
>bounce
>dubstep
>bassline

[William Cruz]

soundcloud.com/kujo-kong/sick-inventions
brutal honesty preferred

[Brandon Russell]

why

[Jason Cruz]

new track
soundcloud.com/will-collis-760721274/the-day-it-rained-forever

garbage triphop from a garbage person

[Dominic Perry]

soundcloud.com/al-ley-way/frogs-and-flies

>alternative rock
>dreamy
>lo-fi
>metalcore

[James Powell]

soundcloud.com/dope-fiend-empire/x_lord_darko_x-feat-cribabi-cutyourselfwithmybrokenheart

soundcloud.com/dope-fiend-empire/x_lord_darko_x-feat-cribabi-cutyourselfwithmybrokenheart

soundcloud.com/dope-fiend-empire/x_lord_darko_x-feat-cribabi-cutyourselfwithmybrokenheart

SCREAMO TRAP EMO

RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK AND COMMENTS ON SOUNDCLOUD....

[Liam Jenkins]

heyyyy thereeee its nixie
just dropped some new stuff, I'd love to get some feedback trap influenced beats
>sadboi
>twinkly emo influences
>heartbreak
As always, the reccs