Post your screenplays, and let's see what you've got.
Keep the criticism polite and constructive, my dudes.
Screenplay Thread
Cooper Jones
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Eli Smith
nice try sony
Noah Ward
FADE IN
Evan Robinson
I like where this is going.
Ian Bennett
Ext. Pepe's Mansion - Evening
Landon Smith
Fuck, does someone have that scrrnplay about the two guys swapping bodies with the dog?
I really need a laugh
Oliver Perez
A jeep roars ahead, bouncing harshly over the long cobble stone drive way toward the mansion in the foggy distance.
INT. JEEP - MOVING - SAME
Sebastian Robinson
A roughed up Pepe is at the wheel. He's losing blood from his brokeen lip.
>PEPE (watching in the rear mirror)
>Just shut the fuck up, you peepeepoopoo head
Luis Howard
fpbp
Jack Hughes
This was 4 years ago. Holy shit.
Wyatt Harris
This was supposed to be serious, but reading this page made me laugh hard.
Oliver Foster
Why did I do this?
Ryder Nelson
omg, there's more.
Elijah James
>transformer
>bandage
excuse me?
Kayden Russell
why does he start talking like that?
Mason Barnes
I don't post those anymore since it was confirmed people do actually lurk here for ideas. Another good thing ruined. Just take Keit-ai and go!
Julian Smith
I would love to see someone rip off this. It would make me laugh hard.
Adam Thomas
Formatting is horrible. Everything is... Horrible.
But, all I can say is... Keep at it.
Levi Green
I know you guys are working on stuff. You can't hide it forever.
Isaac Reyes
Why was this written on a Windows 98?
Christopher Lee
Gonna post my fucking retard shit that I did in the previous thread since it's been an inordinate amount of time since I actually wrote something.
The context here would be that Scott sold the car to Michael and has inadvertently thrown him to the wolves since now he has a kidnapped girl in the back of his car. I can't explain why he's lying on the hood just yet.
Oliver Scott
Fucking gay.
Michael Scott wrote better screenplays.
Adam Morris
Keep going, I'm interested. Ignore the trolls.
Lucas Martin
Can't keep it in your drawer forever, Sup Forums.
Anthony Scott
Got any confirmation to back that up? Not that I don't believe you.
Zachary Morris
It was all over Sup Forums last weekend that there really are writers here. There was a sticky. And there have been hints for a long time. Not really a huge leap.
Jaxson Reyes
...
Leo Torres
English isn't my native language, I just translated the first page for show.
William Brooks
You could compress the descriptions to a few brief sentences. I like the dialogue. It feels natural.
Brandon Phillips
Right, I figure nuances in verbal and nonverbal behavior are more like the director's/actor's issue and not screenwriter's. Thanks
Gabriel Fisher
Bump
Kayden Ross
Hhehehehhehhhehheh
That's all I wrote. Sorry.
Michael Cox
To be fair whoever posted Keit-Ai spammed the ever-loving fuck out of it to the point where it became expected in every /swg/. Killed them for a good while.
Lincoln Gonzalez
I wonder what people think of this old piece of shit now.
Cooper Parker
bimp
Cooper Phillips
Watch it, Chrissy
Brayden Collins
fucking kek