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any updates Sup Forums?

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I'm going to throw you a bone here.

Wat

Im glad you asked.
>the fuck is this shit?
A general.

>for what?
A Sup Forums comic

>can you be more specific?
In the Terra School District, rules and funding for Murica Elementary are defined by the kids of student council themselves. In following students Hillary and Trump on their mission to become student body president of Murica Elem, readers both young and old will see the political and social issues from their real world adapted to an all-too cute and definately familiar setting. When not at the school, readers will see inter-school struggles at Terra Learning District's conference building, where student council leaders of the other racially-based schools come to battle it out in defense of their own institution's agendas. Such is the world of 'Commander and Cute'

Create content, we will judge later. But the idea is retarded. Maybe you will find better traction with this on >≥>Sup Forums

The last thread got deleted because it was entirely anons trolling Malayfag for shilling his Patreon comic.

Future threads will probably get the same treatment, especially since there is no new content or meaningful discussion.

We're in the middle of detailing all of our characters so please dont call the idea retarded just yet, for the fun hasnt even begun! You can see all the things we're going to be doing for the comic right here in this spreadsheet.

docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18nQiNy1USho4Fv-haPskYdWQ7g8myvmGKfP1L206nrM/htmlview

For now however, id like to post a draft of our first issue coming out next week! Enjoy.

>first panel of the series is of a door sign reading 'Computer Lab', second panel is of the door cracked halfway, revealing a sideview look at a glasses wearing boy sitting in front a computer screen. As if this were a movie the camera is moving closer to him, the third panel showing not just a boy with glasses but a clear blue stream of tears falling down his face. Fourth panel is a close shot of the computer screen with a Youtube logo at the top left of it, the fifth panel is a close enough shot to see the boy is about to press play on a Gary Jules - Mad World video. The sixth panel, taking up the whole next page, is a shot of the boy as if we were the computer itself, seeing him bawl his eyes out, but what makes this page special is the front view of the boy reveals a nametag that says "Jeb". On the upper righthand side of page is a digitallooking chatbubble with music symbols around it which reads "all around me are familiar faces, worn out places, worn out faces". The next page has a top half panel that shows a guac bowl and toy turtle next to the computer's mousepad with a digital chatbubble reading "Bright and early for the daily races". The bottonhalf panel is like the top half but panned a little to the left of the desk where the guac and turtle is still visible on the right but also a gun is revealed next to Jeb's left arm, with a chatbubble reading "Going nowhere, going nowhere"

>after the next few pages cover Jeb's many failures, with every panel having a lyric of the song, Jeb goes up to Trump after the school bell rings, which interrupted his train of thought which were the flashbacks we were seeing as he was listening to the music. In the tophalf panel of the fourth to last page we will see a backside view of Trump walking with his posse down the hallway, Carson and Christie to his left, with a nondigitized chat bubble reading "DONNY!" The bottomhalf panel showing a curious Trump with his eyebrow raised. First panel on the third to last page would be a gun pointed to a sideview head of Trump, the next panel showing an angry Jeb saying "WHO IS THE MESS NOW?!". Third panel of the page is still a sideview of Trump but giving the barrel of Jeb's gun a cold stare, the fourth is a sideview of Trump lowering his gaze with his attention called most likely to the gunman's jeans with a question mark hovering over the bewildered Trump. The next page's tophalf panel is a wideshot sideview of the situation, showing a puddle at the gunman's feet and a yellowspot on his pants with Trump saying "Judging by the smell, i say you" with another Trump chatbubble reading "And is that a watergun?". The bottomhalf panel showing a clearly disturbed and snottynosed waste of life Jeb, eyes wide and streaming with tears. The final page showing a topdown view as if we were a cieling fan, Jeb curled up in a ball in the middle of the hallway and Trump walking away with his posse. A digitized chatbubble on the side reading "I find it kind of funny. I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. I find it hard to tell you. i find it hard to take. When people run in circles it's a very, very......"

>endcover page is of a black background, with white text titled 'COMMANDER AND CUTE' with a digitized chatbubble in the corner reading "mad world........"

Yeb! did nothing wrong

Is this how you losers vent your high school frustrations?

Its called comedy, guy

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and i bet youre the kind of chumps who got bullied so now you find an outlet to become the thing you were always jealous of. pathetic if you ask me

Its called entertainment, guy

I have a deep dark secret love of autistic fan comics on the internet made by edgy 14 year olds.

So I'm fine with this, but keep it off Sup Forums.

/trash/ already nuked our thread. we have no where to go except Sup Forums. If this thread gets deleted too we will have to start sneaking our generals in Sup Forums draw threads. At least until we have stuff to actually post on Sup Forums that warrants taking up space i guess.

It's neither entertaining or comical though

You literally just answered your own question. Fuck off until you have something to show

Alright alright. We both know youre right. But we really do want some writers fo the project. You think you can write humor into a project like this?

This is really cringey, to be honest with you guys.

the product will be great i assure you. You write?

Sure you can. There's rich material to mined out of any setting transposed into a school environment and it's a popular trope right now.

One problem you're facing is that you missed the boat a little bit on the real circus. This year's primary was primo meme material. Emotions were running high especially on Sup Forums, there was a big climactic finish, and now everyone needs a rest. You're not going to get a lot of mileage with Guacbowl Yeb! because we did that already, it's been resolved, and the memetic itch has moved into new pastures.

This is a weird time because we're in a limbo of sorts after the primary but before the general election kicks into gear. That mindspace has been filled with a lot of international stuff, Brexit and the dissolution of the EU, etc.

Now once the general starts, the whole landscape is going to change. Hillary and Trump are going to choose runningmates, there'll be developments in their various policies and scandals, new memes and soundbites will emerge, and very likely everything you created now will be rendered more or less unrecognizable in the context of the narrative. My advice would be to take this time to work out stuff like art direction and maybe do some practice one-offs, but hold off on starting any kind of story arcs until you have a better vantage point on the road to November.

Other things I would take the time to establish now:
>clear allegories of all the major players on the field
Who's who?
>we know Trump and Clinton are running for class president
>is Bernie still floating around, threatening to split the vote?
>is Megyn Kelly around? does she run the school paper, or one of the school papers? do her and Donald have a somewhat tumultuous relationship? do kids tease her about her secret crush?
>Trump's posse of friends likely includes Carson, Christie, who else?
>what do the voter constituencies in the student body look like? are Bernie and Hillary still fighting for the affection of the black kids? do the hispanic kids go to the same school, or do they sneak in from Los Zetas Academia on the other side of town? are they always trying to play futbol on Murica Elem's school pitch and that's why Trump wants the fence?
>are the Jews an element here? who's Soros? maybe a rich parent bankrolling them to screw with the election?
>does Sup Forums or at least the alt-right have a presence, maybe trenchcoat-clad basement kids with fedoras always causing trouble? a chance to poke some fun at ourselves
>Milo/Shapiro and their borderline homoerotic rivalry? maybe potential there, if only because I want to see the art for their child selves, maybe Milo is always rat-tailing Benny in the locker room

These are the kind of questions I'd start asking, the answers will start to develop the shape of your creative process

Fucking hell, i will PAY you to join us in our Discord writing group for the comic. The artists will love you. Itll be literally $10 every month in your paypal to just make a suggestion here or there every now and then. Please consider.

Post your discord name, friend.

yes please do, also dont forget to post the 4 numbers next to your Discord username

your artwork method keeps changing. what gives?

I could try, I don't really have a lot of time these days. What's Discord? I don't have one of those

the big group chat app, mostly for gaming but we use it for business. we would love to have you

already applying your work

Alright why not
boozehorse 9750

Just sent. Welcome aboard m8

Why does she have psoriasis?

why do you have autism?

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS

yo dumbfuck im here earlier than your stupid fucking ass

Anybody here with any writing skills or could suggest interesting stuff for the comic? We need all the good writers we can get. 3 more actually.


$10 every month.

Really? no one?

please save snat and peach

Hay disgusting cunt from Malaysia still posts? Fucking hell. And I thought the chimp outs would be the most disgusting thing I read about today.

You seem to know bantz, you interested in writing our comic? Have Sup Forums knowledge? Etc?

I dunno... Seems pretty gay friendo.

I thought this was a general about global events.

be a fucking aspie somewhere else you dumb abo loving fuck

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MALAY PLS HELP MY WRITERS ARE THREATENING TO QUIT CUZ I DONT HAVE A SCRIPT WRITE SOMETHING NOW DO IT NOW PLEASE HELP

BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY MY FUCKING ARTISTS DO SOMETHING MAN HELP REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

are you serious in making this project possible.
what exactly are you trying to achieve with this?
is this a vanity project?

You want this dude, who can hardly string a sentence together, help you write a comic? Hell, he can hardly pass as an artist. His only purpose is to amuse me with his autistic reactions.

I don't like abos, and I hate Malaysians. They are the niggers of south east Asia. It really is sad how you not only shill on a Mongolian sock puppetry forum, but also think people give a shit about your shitty drawings.

How about making Obama the principle who tries to nail Trump like in Ferris Bueller.

My life means fuck all man i just wanted to give Sup Forums and its future children something to read together and laugh at and shit. What am i doing wrong? I LITERALLY have giftcards to give! Money!

eh look, i tried to help bump your thread and give it more traction considering how it's ignored in the past.

i tried my best not to disturb the drawfags even tho they're kinda of dickish.

i can help you acheive your dream and what not but i only accept payment thru patreon.

Just tell me some sweet words man. Youre the only *chan friend i got. My head is spinning in frustration.

Actual TV writer here. A show you all watch.

The fuck is this?

Antiques roadshow?

HELP

PLEASE ILL PAY YOU $10 EVERY MONTH STARTING WEDNSDAY

Do you have Sup Forums knowledge??

you just replied to me in frustration. why the fuck is that?

Everyone who replied to this thread (except me) is a faggot who is ruining Sup Forums

No, but I cannot disclose the show. You think my (((masters))) would keep me on if they knew I Sup Forums?

I've read these comments and I have no idea what you're attempting.

>Frustration
No. Not really. I remember you being more butt hurt about everythign in the past so I assumed it would set you off. What changed?

Also
>Swastika
>Next to the cross
>Malaysian education

>a show we all watch
You write the media narrative?

Doctor Phill?

Judge Judy?

Those are the only three shows I ever watch.

Fuck this shit Malay im tired of beinf a cuck im gonna walk up back to the group chat and demand they suck it up. Im doing this for us buddy. In your name.

>demand
>suck it up
im not drawing and niether is Snat if you dont have a plot you fucking pissbaby.
Now get off your high horse and learn some leadership skills, you cuck.

It's not an (((agenda))) run show.

Think more like "Deutschland '83" but not that show.

Great numbers wasted on a troll.

Can we include moly and alex jones?

SEE MALAY I TOLD YOU I TOLD YOU

Kek vault muh dude.

Nah but seriously I'm interesting in what's going on here.

Another question. Can we Trump and Hillary the protagonists instead of shillary being the main character in this?

have*

Got a new season of Orange is the New Black to watch guys so ill see you tomorrow. The show isnt as bad as people think it to be.

i think im done

this is disgusting

shit, why would you sell out his character for a shit laugh.

what a fat cunt

life has no meaning anyway

its just your posts to me reeks of absolute hatred and contempt.
posts like that is exactly what id expect from degenerate lowlives like you 2bh
maybe its time youd listen to me and hang yourself m8

im not out of this thread yet
i got way too much autists thats needs a good old malay schooling

Itll never be over for you Malay, but it is for me. nobody liked my idea and the only friends i had other than you are gone. Life is hopeless. I wish you luck. To whoever picks up the project, if anyone does, i hope you give Sup Forums the story it deserves. Im out guys.

oh come on, just because some salty shits dont like what you're doing doesnt mean you have to give up

you didnt see me give up. have some determination dude.

bump

hey squid you still up
come talk to me

I love the hairpin user
This idea could float well desu

>Malaynigger tries to into banter
wew

you said nobody gives a shit about the comics
why are you still replying you 1 week overdue pile of manure?

Are you saying that OP's blood sweet and tears aren't worth it?

I was just out getting measurements for a retaining wall so I only just got around to replying to your mean spirited and unchristian reply.

just kill yourself already
you're too fucking insignificant to exist anyway, lad

shows over i guess. shame about the wasted art and shit

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The irony... I'm not trying to get people to care about me here. You are. It's sad. You draw shitty comics and get buttfrustrated when no one cares. You are just a meme here. If I had a trip I'd certainly be considered far less disgusting that you.

give up malaysian fag no one likes your shitty comics

jesus christ.
Fuck off back to plebbit OP you aspie

actually youre one of the saddest creature ive met.
look at your post and think about it
fucking irrelevant no name pos.

the words from some sheltered uneducated dumbfuck isnt exactly what id call facts
please kill yourself

Kek
I actually really like this page mike, you drew the Jew well

Just pls be kind with Bosnia bro, I like the draw threads a lot

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>BNeing proud of being known on an anonymous website

Fucking hell. This is why no one likes you.

wow. just wow

Yeah I know right? Fucking magical.

wew, Sup Forums drawthreads and comic threads like this always attract the weirdest people
without fail, shit like this always happens. its a shame really

Yeah, it could be so much more, like satire comics or the such like. Instead we have some teen angst version of the current political climate. Not saying it can't be good but...

If you want to talk about weird people, this Malaysian has been at this for at least a few years. He's never put out anything good, he is incredibly rude to his fellow artists, and can't take criticism. He is basically a meme at this point.

and everyone knows me. they dont know you. youre dead, you wont be missed.

please hang yourself already for fucks sake. youre just a fucking fly

>He is basically a meme at this point.
no page on kym about me. which is good, because i want to keep my relevance in this place and this place only

dumbfucks like you is what keeps me alive

Everyone knows you because you are a dumb autistic fuck. Everyone knows you because you are a complete asshole. Everyone that knows you hates you. I would rather be unheard of than universally despised, and also shit at what I do.

You are the lowest kind of tripfag. This is an anonymous fucking website, and you think that deciding to not be anonymous and having people recognize you for being a faggot is a good thing? Way to set the bar higher, malayfaggot. I didn't think you could get any dumber.

You like being roasted?

>No page on kym
>Therefore not a meme

You've been here for years and yet you are still to dumb to not look like a newfag.