RATE MY COMICS

RATE MY COMICS
please. I need feedback and constructive criticism. if u guys can give me good advice an not troll me ill gift u guys somethin on steam.

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please anons

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RATE pl0x

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RATE PLEASE

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BUMPIN

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BUMMMP

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Are you planning to go pro with this OP?

r u srs?
Who is ur audience cause these are incel af.

I'd like to. I currently am living in parents basement but I would feel better if I had a job and income so I could get my own place. being a comic artist is something I am willing to do because I can do it from home and it doesn't require me to be a wage cuck. something I'm strongly against.

Op. This u?
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lol, cuck processes his shortcomings by drawing misogynistic comics.
Art style is cool, but the message is cringe.

if your comic is more than 3 panels and doesn't have a punchline just give up

That's pretty funny dude. I chuckled

>the message is cringe.
why do you say that? These are based upon a lot of collective research I've done over the years. The majority of my comics deal with issues only relevant to 30 year olds and younger. if you're a boomer then these don't apply, I suspect you are.

I thought it was funny

which one? I want to submit the best one to a few newspapers that I've been in contact with over the years for my website and reddit sub.

I am 30. Your "research" was going through reddit posts of incels. Sure, these things happen, but they're rare as fuck.

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honestly gave them all a shot and didnt laugh once, maybe im not your audience but i agree with another commenter its mostly cringe incel shit

Also, you instantly accusing me of being a boomer shows you have no life experience in your own, but only get it from the internet. Nobody will take these seriously.

Nice almost mgtow comics? Honestly gets closer to black pill inceldom than mgtow.

Art style looks familiar too, anyways get out into real life. Life is a lot more than these examples of silopsism.

agreed

OP I think that your comics personally are good but they do need some work cause the humor is okay and I think you should work more on it but other than that I like your comics and are you planning on going mainstream with these comics???

The first 1 got the biggest laugh for me. I like the style and the message, other people here are throwing around the word incel but I think it's poking fun at the hypocritical way a lot of woman are living. I'm in a happy relationship of 10+ years as well, so not a 30 year old virgin covered in cheeto dust.

>a lot of women
You got your info about women from porn, obviously.

thank u
well, the reddit research if from the subs that I am a member of and we don't consider ourselfves as incels. these are reality and based on men like me and our experiences with women of our generation.
once again I don't see how these are what incels are like. incels are people with mental illness and autism.
well then how should I change them so they resonate our generations common problems that define men our age today? should I make the artwork more detailed and add color? I want to stay away from anything stylized. I don't want to create a comic character, I want people to focus on the message because it is so relevant today.

thank u. I appreciate your feedback. I agree that I think the word incel is just a buzzword thrown around to generalize anything negative about men. however, I would like it to not be something that reminds them of that word.

Feels like you're a celebrity and I don't want to mess with it. Seen them here before. Probably major part of normalising what's depicted but maybe not. Definition of the times. Good luck.

>well, the reddit research if from the subs that I am a member of and we don't consider ourselfves as incels. these are reality and based on men like me and our experiences with women of our generation.
If it sounds like an incel forum, acts like an incel forum, it probably is an incel forum. You're taking your views from a small bubble of people who completely think alike.
>once again I don't see how these are what incels are like. incels are people with mental illness and autism.
>well then how should I change them so they resonate our generations common problems that define men our age today? should I make the artwork more detailed and add color? I want to stay away from anything stylized. I don't want to create a comic character, I want people to focus on the message because it is so relevant today.

As I already said, the art style is perfectly fine. It's just the cringy message that won't resonate with the vast majority of people out there.
You even contradict yourself by saying they're supposedly aimed at sub 31yos, but incorporating career guys a lot over 30 in them. This just hasn't happened yet to the generation you aim at.

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I'm this doctor.

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