How would you fix this movie?

How would you fix this movie?

more titties and beer

Delete movie

More fat white guys and beta white guys galore also you guys like very young girls your sisters and So I would include lolly incest to meet your demographics also women don't say anything and just stand in the background looking cute

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for serious, cut the bullshit dialogue, make the whole thing a quiet contemplative affair. nobody needed/wanted forest whitaker doing that fucking cringe fan-fiction speech shit

erase it from existence, spend the money on something else
it didn't need to be made, it contributed nothing

Have a storm trooper on a door gun shooting rebels.

>so that's why they call you Jyn Arso

Have Jyn live.

Cut out a ton of characters, then flesh those characters out so we care about them when they die. You could even keep all the fanservice scenes!

Also, either write Tarkin out, or recast him if his role is so essential. Or, if you have to make him CGI only, shoot the scenes so that he's always in shadow or seen from a distance. Same with Leia: she could have been shot from behind in the finale of the film and it arguably would have had greater impact, but nope, we had to have our cake and eat it too.

Basically: remove most of the characters, and avoid CGI human faces.

More character development and make it darker

It's already pretty dark, friend.

Start the movie out by showing the empire's perspective of the rebels, and have the story be about what made bunny and or her dad defect to the rebels.

Also, remove Saw Gerrera altogether. That whole story arc is nonsense. Does anyone know if that was because of the re-shoots?

I'd bump it a notch to make it a proper depressing war story

Make it about Galen becoming disillusioned with the Empire. Actually show the Empire committing atrocities and being the 1984 style police state everyone talks about it being. Essentially everything that happened between ROTS and the opening scene of the movie.

He had a much larger and expanded role before the reshoots

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Wrong

Id change around the ties and lead ins to ANH, make it a new superweapon the resistance has uncovered being constructed by the remants of the empire, and then call it "the force awakens."

She's my favorite character out of all this new stuff.

>nobody needed/wanted forest whitaker doing that fucking cringe fan-fiction speech shit
It might have worked if he was a character and not a plot convenience.

Me too but her story is finished

could always use more titties.

Make it a heist movie as well as a war movie. Make it so the whole plot is about a team of rebels stealing the death star plans Mission Impossible style but more soldiery and less spy. Remove all the shit about Jyn's Dad, Forrest Whittaker and them assembling a suicide squad because that's all boring as fuck, barely makes any sense and lasts most of the movie.

>Make it a heist movie as well as a war movie

Already been done bro.

Btw fuck Rockstar for making cable car un-rideable in gta V, I wanted to be like Clint Eastwood goddammit

>Make it a heist movie as well as a war movie.
>Kelly's Heroes IN SPAAAAACE!
I'd watch it.

no sound in space and almost a complete re-cast

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>fuck Rockstar for making cable car un-rideable in gta V
I know, right.

Needs more race mixing desu.
No way I can concentrate and watch a 120 minute movie without any white girls getting BLACKED

More character development in the first act

There's zero fucking fun in riding inside the damn thing

gyn show her pusy

>no sound in space
Thats not star wars though. In the original script it was stated that there are speakers in the cockpits and turrets that converted sensor information into audio cues to create a situational awareness. So a TIE fighter doesn't really have that awesome scream, thats just how the computers interpret the sounds.

>Star Wars
>any story ever finishing

She'll be back with amnesia and also a Sith.

the entire rain planet scene could have been cut.

>original script it was stated that there are speakers in the cockpits and turrets that converted sensor information into audio cues to create a situational awareness.
lol consider suicide

Thanks for the rec anons

I think the movies presume you've seen the older ones in which case you should already know that the empire is despotic and they shouldn't waste time showing troopers waxing civies for ten minutes.

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It was still better than TFA

Both of those movies are so fucking great.

this movie is not as good as the concept
not bad tho

I liked it though.

Nah the tone is fine. If you made the characters a little stronger you'd give more of a shit about them, and it would FEEL more bittersweet and satisfying.