Tfw finished my first tv pilot

>tfw finished my first tv pilot
Feels good my man

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Comfy feeling!
Wrote the first two episodes of a comfy sitcom about summer camp last year for film school
What's your pilot about?

I shilled my idea on Sup Forums a couple of weeks ago. The plot of the whole series is about everyone above the age of 16 dissapearing(i know this has been done before) and it focuses on a small town.
The pilot is about the kids trying to organize themselves and rounding up the younger ones who can't survive by themselves. It ends with the power being cut because there is no one to operate the power plants.
>inb4 fuck off with this gay YA shit
I don't want it to nesecarily have that target audience. There will be gore and serious topics like rape, what kind of society the remaining people build, religion and other deep reddit stuff.

Hey sounds cool man. I don't think YA has to be necessarily bad. Ya heard of the french comics "Seuls" from Gazzotti? It's about six kids in a world where everyone else dissapeared, and they meet some kind of cult build around this Aryan Chad. Near the end it turns into some Lost bullshit, but the first ones are really cool.
Are you planning to write a second episode?

Sounds comfy. Do you still have it?

I hope its an animated show. Consider the current events before doing a show with child actors that includes rape

My friend gave me one of those comics when i was 12 for my birthday. I still remember that there was like a ghost/monster who was only visible in mirrors. That shit terrified me back then.
I dunno. I will have to get motivation somehow, but i probably will because it's a comfy thing to do during the winter.

I did, but it's written in dutch.

The jury also gave me a real crappy score so I might not be the genius I thought I was.
I started writing for an edgy teen drama, so all ended well

H-heh o-of course it's animated...
But GoT did it too, i think..

Hope you're Jewish otherwise you're about to waste several years of your life for nothing.

Well I can just send it in for a competition under the name of shlomo goldbergstein.

Well is the rape and gore really necessary? (For when you'll hypotheticalIy sell it) I think the whole lord of the flies kinda society can be interesting and fucked up and interesting enough. Care to share it user? I'm really interested in writing and reading screenplays etc.

I won't steal it, I promise

I would but I'm sort of a brainlet when it comes to sharing this stuff. Should i dump it on pastebin?

I'm a fellow brainlet as well my friend. Wouldn't like anons ripping into my stuff as well, so I really don't know how'd you best handle this situation

Here ya go. Pls no stealerone.
Aslo this is only a draft don't judge too hard
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Hey, thanks man!
I'm gonna start reading it right away! Hope the thread won't be dead by that time.

which one did you watch OP

Keeing this thread alive

Just read it, enjoyed it but like to make some remarks. Hope I don't sound like some smug ass.

But I feel like the start of the episode should be stronger/ more spectacular. Like, I'm just shooting ideas. Why not start with a real big fire in the school? Just something to grab our attention.

And I feel like "the trapped" baby, could come earlier 'cause to me it feels like the clearest and most important drive of the episode. Maybe the search for the axe could take longer? And during that search they meet some characters and you can do some worldbuilding?

Again, I really don't wanna pretend like I'm some kind of know it all. Just had some ideas/thoughts and wanted to share them with you.

Thanks for sharing your screenplay btw
My jewish friends loved it

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Thanks, dude. Will improove on this stuff.

Make sure to sneak in lots of Sup Forums references, like someone calls a tall actor a "big guy" and he growls "for you".

That's great man. Have fun writing!

We really should have more of this kind of threads instead of star wars shitposting desu

My idea of a distopian future where men and women are at war was rejected.

Congrats senpai, is it good?

It’s probably so shit, even Netflix wouldn’t air it

not to worry Amazon will

Finished my pilot as well back in September.

Almost done season 1 (just fisnhed ep 5 of 8).

Like your plot, sounds like The Leftovers. Mine's a noir detective show. It's high school based but I wrote it specifically as a fuck you to shitty "Teen Mystery Drama's". It's dark and really fucked up and bitch and a half to write but it's been alot of comfy fun.

Shit tier bait. Underage probably at this point. You're lucky I'm bored right now and even acknowledging your existence. I have 2 hot babes ready for a threesome just waiting for me in a few hours. What will you be doing? Enjoying shit tier kino? Or how about posting a rare pepe? No, you'll be posting here whilst I'm fucking two beautiful chicks I'll grin and remember the faggot who thought that he had big dick cause he liked writitng.
>"oh fuck user you're so hot and big"
>"so hot"
>"I'm gonna LITERALLY CUM"
Then when both of there c-cupped breasts lie upon my chest, the brunette will whisper
>"play some kino user"
The Blonde chuckles
>"yes user you always pick the best KINO"
Then I'll get up, start my film reel, and play the best film ever created....
Batman V Superman

THERE HE IS

>tfw GF got accepted for a BLACKED trial run

get out cuck