Hey all, posting some comics I've been working on in my free time...

Hey all, posting some comics I've been working on in my free time. Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback appreciated.

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Your comics are depressing and unpleasant. Would it kill you to make something where people actually ENJOY sex for fuck's sake?

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Oh it's that midget with a rape fetish again


Have you learned to draw yet, or still just tracing over the work of actual artists?

Um I think you'll find she enjoys it very much

>Any and all feedback appreciated.

You're a joke. Go trace more

just flattered you know me desu

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What is this? I thought it was going to be not porn. Why not post this where it's allowed like /i/

Haven't seen this in a while still tracing I see

>front pussy
dropped

>first two images are even kind of interesting
>interesting enough to check the third one
>it's gonna be porn, right?
>yup it's porn
big tits do nothing for me. 100% flaccid.

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This.

The pencils are pretty good. Why didn't you ink them?

Also, enjoy your ban for posting porn in the wrong /.co/

WEW

what is wew

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>if she rolls her eyes and starts salivating it will be just like in my japanese anime

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Where'd you learn how to draw?

No but seriously, any feedback is welcome. Even if you're just jackin it

From American comic books

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You traced? And for how long?

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No, I didn't trace. I just got my sense of anatomy, pacing, layout, etc from superhero comics. I never traced.

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You're pretty good. Do you have a blog or something?

See I'd say they're both enjoying it quite a bit here

benchleyfan01.imgur.com

That's the end of that chapter. Anyone still reading?

How long have you been drawing? You did all these in printing paper?

this thread reminds me of that christian girl comic on /aco/ where she was fucking a satanist guy and then she died

Could use some clean up but it looks nice for what it is and she carries some nice plump to her. Not really feeling the OC but that's just me.

Now posting the Mary Jane chapter

The one with lasers?
Also OP, won't you get banned for this?

You're still here you sad cunt? Get a fucking scanner already

Why are you not feeling the OC? Explain

I've been drawing for more than 20 years. These were all done on sketchbook paper.

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>lasers
i don't remember lasers but one of the main colors used in the comic was pink, the girl looked like a hippy christian, and when she started getting fucked anally she frreaked out and broke her neck or something.
the guy fucking her had powers

Any tips for drawing?

Study anatomy. Read a lot of comics. Draw from life. Draw what you see, not what you think you see

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>Draw what you see, not what you think you see
>draws extremely big cocks

Thanks man, also like your comic. Can you do other than bimbos?

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Sure, I can, it's just not what I post here.

not that user but the fact that the main character is obviously an author self-insert is really cringey and takes away from whatever enjoyment people who enjoy giant balloon tits might otherwise get from the story.

The attitude and how he gets away with everything. I enjoy the scenes, just not seeing him. I'm imaging Doom or Magneto hell even Mr.Sinister in his place.

I really liked your first couple comics, they were porn but with a story of darkseid taking over the world
Maybe try to incorporate more story elements, that would be my only request

I suppose that's kind of what I'm going for. These comics should have the feel of like a Punisher Kills the Marvel Universe or Deadpool Kills the Marvel Universe story, where it's unsettling how he just takes them all out

you gotta stop rendering the top lip like that. That line doesn't exist in real life so the viewer's brain tends to interpret it as a mustache. You can worry about rendering details like that when you're coloring.

>they were porn but with a story of darkseid taking over the world
I miss the Darkseid stories, they never continued after starfire and that's sad.

I like these better.

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thanks. yeah hopefully turning the women into sex slaves is a more creative outlet than just killing them. seems like a waste

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Well you've got to know that's not everyone's bag. I get how some people like that but its just not compelling for me, there is no element of risk or danger to what he's doing.

Yup. She-Hulk when? Also Sue.

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No disrespect in mind, but whats the point of having different women if you're gonna draw them with the exact same body type?

I have a She-Hulk/Black Widow chapter. I can post next

uh, they have different personalities, man

also don't blame me for the way the comic characters are drawn. i'm not going any further than frank cho or adam hughes

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>i'm not going any further than frank cho or adam hughes
Atleast you have taste in style.

any thoughts on the dialogue or plotting?

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I think it's cooler if you just make them want cock subconsciously and they at first seem reluctant but then he whips out the cock and they just can't help themselves.

The plot is basically the same as the last one.
Guy controls bimbo. I hope you can do something better, man.

that's a great idea. i dig that.

Reminds me of the tracing guy that posted in this board before, but it has been so long for me to actually remember the complete style. anyways its the same fucking mind control shit with the other guy

I mean that's kind of the running thread of the entire story. He figures out how to ensnare and enslave every woman in the Marvel Universe and then one by one he fucks them for all they're worth

The OC talks too much for my liking, I'm not here to see him. I do like your paneling and you have a nice sense of flow to the action. Also this so much

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>Literal porn dump
>up for over an hour

sasuga mods

oh thanks, do you have any examples of either a) good paneling/pacing or b) narrator talking too much? Would be helpful, thanks

Moving on to Black Widow / She-Hulk

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keep those comments coming! I'm posting this for free, so i expect feedback!! ;)

Here , he's taking up like a third of the page with a bunch of low grade taunts. Don't be afraid to let the blow job do more of the talking.

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very good point. fair. thank you.

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I've seen you shilling in literally every semi-related subreddit and Sup Forums board asking for feedback, just kill yourself at this point