/hyw/ - How's Your Webcomic? #388

Dracula Tits™ Edition

Welcome to our humble thread of How's Your Webcomic! Come here to show us your progress and also your ideas. Come with your doubts in need of an answer. Come to see Dracula Tits (COMING SOON™)!

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Other urls found in this thread:

artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
quickposes.com/pages/timed
senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
shutterstock.com/
pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
tumblr.com/theme/39018
pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV
docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#
discord.gg/rXMbdqP
youtube.com/watch?v=Pb5oIIPO62g
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf
chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/
blambot.com/
cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf
miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/
mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics
youtube.com/results?search_query=how to draw comics
youtube.com/watch?v=38AYeNGjqg0
youtube.com/watch?v=Utizq_vU1kY
youtube.com/watch?v=_nlFJ1npS80
capeworldcomics.com/
ggz.thecomicseries.com/
tapastic.com/episode/623701
webtoons.com/en/challenge/ggz/introductions/viewer?title_no=66734&episode_no=1
theduckwebcomics.com/GGZ/
gothgrillz.tumblr.com/
youtube.com/watch?v=RLSAdVLpHPc&feature=youtu.be
youtube.com/watch?v=kga2soqvMF0
youtube.com/watch?v=nxbV3RsyQwI
twitter.com/SFWRedditGifs

Scrub Authors GOODIE Bag
Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:
>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
calligraphr.com

>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
quickposes.com/pages/timed

>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: shutterstock.com/

>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ (surprisingly not a typo)

>Links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV
>Contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

>DISCORD CHAT going on:
discord.gg/rXMbdqP

>Wise words from John Cleese:
youtube.com/watch?v=Pb5oIIPO62g

>Invisible Ink:
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf

>Paper Wings
chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/

>Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
blambot.com/

>Writing Resources:
cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf

>Guide to promoting your comic:
miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/

>Comics for makin' comics!
mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics

youtube.com/results?search_query=how to draw comics

Readying our first collection.

if only I was as good at comic as I was at making suggest

Can I just say how quaint it is that you have a brand identity in this day and age? Seeing that at the top left corner is just cozy I tell you what.

Thanks. What a nice thing to read, is this the actual /hyw/ thread?

QUICK,

Post a monologue.

Either one you've used or one you just came up with.

OK SO HYW'S OFFICIAL CHALLENGE #2!!!!
>Theme: Dracula tits
>Genre (options):
>heist
>college
>family sitcom
>Deadline: 07/27
GOOD LUCK!

>Dracula Tits

I have no idea where to even begin

>Small birds that drink blood? Oh, I think I could come up with something...

God damnit user. You've made my day.

>Tonight's production was going to be entitled "Vampire Tits", but for some reason the sponsors had an objection. Frankly, I think I should be the one to complain, as it's my toes being stepped on.
>We shall now go to commercial. Hopefully the sponsors don't make a boob of themselves.

>I must inform you that the raven-haired temptress you just saw was eventually caught and brought to justice. She was ultimately sentenced to have a stake put through her chest. The executioner had no trouble hitting such a large target. Fortunately, she's perfectly comfortable in her new home, a roomy size-12 coffin.
>We hope you've enjoyed tonight's play. I put a great deal of my own blood into it, and if it fails to please, I'm afraid it'll be my neck.

Page 1. Just posting to give context for page 2, which is what I really wanna discuss.

>what you must do
>have a trip/name
Wow, these threads have fallen even lower than I imagined possible.

Page 2.
I feel I made some improvements between this and the last page. The anatomy is a bit better and the backgrounds have a bit more going on.
I'm not so good at drawing complete circles so I've been using the default photoshop speech bubble shape. Are there any (free) alternatives for lettering and boxing my text?
How's the dialogue? How's the composition?

Dr.daylight: "Although they are very human like my children a pure machine and cant grow into adults on their own, so every year for their birthday i adjust their height by an inch and remodel their face and body to properly resemble their age. But if I was to ever die no one would be around able to do this for them, The would never age or die and look like children forever but mentally be adults because I designed their consciousness to mimic and grow at the same wave lengths a human would so right now they dont just look like children they are children and they are mentally learning and growing everyday same as any human. So you see Meteor Wheels, thats why im teaching you my young robot daughter everything I know encase anything ever happens to me, because im old..."

how that for a drawn out monologue? did i win? lol

real dialogue from my meteor random project!

is just so we can vote for some actual name instead of just saying "user #46"

it's a good thing we have you here to show us the error of our ways, anonymous stranger.
ooh cool robo helmet
I feel like there's something about your text overall that I don't like, but this is good stuff.

this is strictly a hardcore scifi story about robots that look like humans but it could very possibly become reality one day.... spooky stuff yall....

this is how close we are to that reality as of 2017

this is "The child-like humanoid robot iCub" he has a mind of his own, and is naturally curious, he can walk around on his own and pick random shit up and inspect it in sort of a playful manner, will post an example of him picking up a ball and checking in out in a fascinated captivated sort of way...

>Why am I so "hung up" on morality? Why should I care? Why don't I just relax?
>Think for a moment, about everything in life that bothers you. Every little thing you would change if you could, but you can't, because "that's just the way it is."
>Every one of those things is your fault, because you give no thought to right and wrong. Instead you breeze through life mindlessly pursuing selfish desires.
>If you don't bother doing something about the few things you are in control of, how can you complain about the parts you can't control?

how's that*

heres an example, death of all mankind by the hands of robots when?

humans are dangerous because they are a naturaully evil and warring race, very territorial and possesive of objects both physical and metaphysical, like thats MY STORY or MY IDEA, or thats MY LAND, MY HOUSE, MY WOMAN, MY KIDS, MY MONEY, etc, etc, so you see how we can go to war and kill each other so easy, its what makes us human, HEY I LIKE WHAT THAT GUY HAS, I THINK ILL KILL HIM AND TAKE IT FROM THEM, that how a human thinks, why would you give that same amount of free will and thought process to a robot? STOP TRYING TO MAKE ROBOTS LIKE HUMANS, THEY WILL KILL US ALL ONE DAY!

Robots: "HEY THIS IS A NICE PLANET THE HUMANS HAVE, THINK WE WILL JUST KILL THEM ALL AND TAKE IT, ITS OUR PLANET NOW! MWAHAHAHAHA!"

MAYBE NOT MWAHAHAHA, BUT SOME OTHER EVIL ROBOTIC LAUGH OF SOME KIND! MARK MY WORDS!

lol

humans are dangerous because they are a naturally* evil and warring race, very territorial and possessive* of objects both physical and

>fixed

Welp no better time than the present, but I'll start my webcomic now.
The idea? Just make something I plan to update daily, so the art will be inconsistent, but the intention is to give me a reason to be drawing every day, or at least every other day. So I can improve.
I barely have a script, so I'll be pretty much making up as I go. So here we go

dont believe me? you should, native americans dont even exist anymore, halfbreed tribes do, but no full bloods, never met one and never seen one on live tv, completely wiped out and every bit of land taken by foreigners!

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and I'll be posting tomorrow

also in the early HYW i tried doing a native american webcomic about a mayan girl, it only lasted one page before i scrapped it, but i think i just hyped myself up into doing a native american story about native american mythology, because no one has ever really done it before, there have been tons of native american animations and stories but none that focus on native american gods and goddesses like you see with thor or hurcules, so im gonna do, im gonna be the first to do it. i havent done any research on it yet but im going to fucking do it!

as far as i know, without doing ANY research yet, is native americans worshiped giant birds and dragons and shit, thats why they wore feathers in there head because its how they worshiped there giant bird gods, like vikings wore horned helmets to worship Loki and go into battle with the luck of loki and they drew runes on there swords and hammers because thor had runes on his hammer and odin had runes on his spear.... think about it!

and a character sketch I made before, you know post it while i'm at it

also in the early HYW threads when HYW first started*

woops, or well you know what i meant by early HYW, i meant in older threads because ive been in HYW since the beginning ya know? lol...

Is your protagonist gonna be mortal or one of those gods?

although i love drawing females and would love to do a webcomic about a native american goddess i dont think their has ever been a successful book, comic book, movie, or tv show, or animated tv show about a goddess, i think wonder woman comes close but she is a fictional goddess made up by marvel, so... doesnt count...

>fictional goddess made up by marvel

god, or demi god, like thor or Hercules or jesus christ, because its never been done before with native american mythology

also please no body steal my idea, please. i want to be the first person to ever do this. thanks!

even zues has had some movies that are just about zues!

i just hope there are some good stories like the greek one where zues gives his bastard demi god child a sword and shield and he goes off and kills madusa and and a titan of the seas named karken! i really hope there is an awesome native american story like that and i dont have to make one up using real native gods or demi gods...

motherfucker am i wrong?

>"People, people. Please, lend me your time and silence. I know what you're thinking. Why should we listen to those who would look to subjugate us? Well I'll tell you that we do not come to enslave, but to liberate. We do not come to plunder wealth, but to give it. Your Leaders have spent the last year demonizing our cause and yet they've done nothing but sit in their towers and grow fat while you sit in the gutters and starve. Good people, I will not pretend that our ascension to power was not filled with mistakes. But I assure you that together we can build a world free of poverty. Free of petty fighting over land and resources. Free of the binds that the Gods so willingly place on those they say they love. Stand with me my brothers and Sisters. For this will be the day that you will tell your children and their children as the day the Empire was reborn. That today was the day that The Union delivered it's promise to all mankind. That this was the day that we finally became free."

Too late, my idea now bitch

kraken*

youtube.com/watch?v=38AYeNGjqg0

and the dudes name was Perseus, fucking forgot, lol

>no one has ever really done it before
there's a few mexican comics where aztec gods and monsters appear, but it's usually comedic

How's it going HYW?

I'm having a hard time choosing a free site where to get my webcomic published once I actually get some pages done, mostly because I don't like many of the options. At this rate I may decide to use Tapas if ony because it's easier to use and everyone has mirrors there anyway. I have shit investment skills so I have no money to use immediately on a wordpress.org site.
Also use Facebook for the Spanish version because of the spic audience.

There aren't any great options, but right now you have to ask yourself what you dislike most
>not being able to change your layout
>the same, plus blocks NSFW for people without accounts
>both of those, plus has a built-in comments system that requires an account

or just
>can't put alt-text on comics and administration appears to have dwindled down to a single person
because I'm still tolerant of that... for now. Someday comicgenesis is going to die and i'll be fucked, but that day isn't today. That said, I'm starting to warm up to 'tags' and kind of want to use them

Well I don't think I may have too much NSFW if at all, but yeah I guess I may appreciate anybody being able to comment. Alt-text is nice flavor but I may be able to live without it for now.

One friend has been insisting that I just use Tumblr, and although I hate their archive system, the use of tags and reblog system may not be so bad. That and I have seen some webcomics there using Disqus which is a bit more friendly in the comment regard.

yeah disqus is best. does it cost money or something?
tumblr does seem like it gets better as people modify it, but in the end you still have that shitty archive page

>yeah disqus is best. does it cost money or something?

Just went to look, seems they have some prices out there but you can get a free basic set.
And now I also just realize some of the publicity I saw above disqus on some sites was disqus' own doing. Well the more you know.

Thinkin of printing out my comic when I have enough content and selling it at my LCS, eastman and laird style y'know?

Just to clarify, do you mean those 3 genres are optional if someone doesn't know where to start or are those the only 3 genre options to pick from?

Those 3 genres are the options you can take for your comic (a family sticom with dracula tits for example)
These challenges are about creativity and flexibility of concepts though so you are free to play with any of it as you wish.

if you do it, i'm proud of you

Sounds like a plan! Remember to have your pages at 300 dpi so it looks nice and >quality

alright yall im about to ink in a record a new page!

this is just the bottom half of the page, get hype!

oh, and whenever characters get high in this story i draw them all loose and shaky and give them bloodshot red eyes!

anyway im going to build up to it before i start on it by posting the 2 newest pages i made in the last thread! should only take me about an hour start to finish so im in no hurry, lol

page 45 video: youtube.com/watch?v=Utizq_vU1kY

page 46 video: youtube.com/watch?v=_nlFJ1npS80

i regret nothing

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guys, question:

if one were to start a webcomic (single strip comedy) right now, what would be the best option for hosting? Tapastic, tumblr...?

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and here we go, wip 1, ive got a really good feeling about this one yall! lol

Capeworldcomics.com just updated.
capeworldcomics.com/

Hope you guys like caveman mythology!

As usual I appreciate any comments and criticism.

bump

so many spelling errors that one wonders whether it's intentional

page doesn't make a shred of sense - why does her dialog continue to the right of her sighing? How do I read this?

I don't understand why the tall girl would react like this, or why sighing girl would talk like that in short cryptic sentences when explaining something that is obviously crucial info. I cannot imagine a conversation between two real human beings going even remotely similar to this

almost done, just needs some word balloons, the stoner girl is rashta and her black boyfriend is lil kang, real name king Johnson. lol

>pretending like you wasn't in the last thread and know exactly why the page is like that

yeah ok, role play and play dumb some more user.

>"it's so rare to be alone, someone's always watching"

>" we're never alone cameras are everywhere"

>"lots of cameras everywhere like we're never alone"

"It's like we're never alone because there's cameras everywhere"

"Ok shut the fuck up now"

....

"I won't have political stuff but I'll make it racist!"

Bones you really dont have any idea what you want with this comic huh? Why didn't you just look back at what made the first chapter neat? your showing a real lack of integrity with these recent page, my boy.

tried for hours to achieve 100% manga emulation. Still feels lacking.

Suggestions?

its done, i hope yall like it! video coming soon/later on today!

*you can read it on:

-comic fury: ggz.thecomicseries.com/
-taptastic: tapastic.com/episode/623701
-linewebtoons: webtoons.com/en/challenge/ggz/introductions/viewer?title_no=66734&episode_no=1
-the duck webcomics: theduckwebcomics.com/GGZ/
-tumblr: gothgrillz.tumblr.com/

>racist!

racism? what!? where!?

It's your funeral but man atleast be consistent with the themes if your gonna wing it, especially this type of comic.

that was literally my first comment ever on this whole board. Do what you want with that advice.

A big part of manga is paneling. Even if you added more detail and screentones, It's best if you stuck with the basics of perspective and anatomy for now and worked on more dynamic angles.

Big talk coming from coldfusion posting as anonymous. Why don't you always leave your trip on?

Bones can't be racist though, he's Hispanic.

I've finished the next page. Sorry for the shitty pic, can't use the scanner right now.

I just found this today, if I follow this advice, will it help me out with my drawings for my webcomic you think?

All of them

This looks good so far, i like your character designs, what size paper are you using? Do you have more pages posted somewhere?

you have a tutorial in front of you and you're literally so retarded you have to ask if you should follow it? fucking incredible

I just wanted a second opinion

Uh well it's normal advice.

>Mastery level gets more pornographic as it goes up.

Nsio knows to much.

Thats why I wanted a second opinion on this tutorial, But I'll probably end up folliwing it to see if its for me, plus Loomis and other stuff people on Sup Forums have recomended.

WE

VIDEO: youtube.com/watch?v=RLSAdVLpHPc&feature=youtu.be

all urban weed rap music, enjoy.

WUZ

Is Taptastic compatible with one page strips?
Or you need to make a gorillion page chapters?

KANGZ

NEVER FORGET: youtube.com/watch?v=kga2soqvMF0

MAD LOVE AND RESPECT, NEVER LET THE WHITE MAN KEEP THE BLACK MAN DOWN, AFFERMATIVE ACTION, FIST HELD HIGH, SAY IT LOUD, IM DARK BROWN AND IM PROUD, AND REMEMBER YOUNG BLOOD, ALWAYS DO THE RIGHT THING!

tfw when im not even black: youtube.com/watch?v=nxbV3RsyQwI

ARE THE CRYSTAL

literally tears in my eyes, mods pls ban me i cant keep getting away with shit XDDD

Is there anything I should be concerned about regarding Hiveworks? There was a thread about dead webcomics last night, and someone said that one of the webcomics there wasn't updating because of problems between the creator and Hiveworks.

you might want to check the last thread, there was a conversation about hiveworks last night but as I was reading the exchange I decided to butt in and the user with the hiveworks know-how got mad because he thought I had been trolling him the entire time.

Also there was this thread on Sup Forums even if it was shortlived

METH

>Is Taptastic compatible with one page strips?
Yes

>Or you need to make a gorillion page chapters?
No.

>there was a conversation about hiveworks last night but as I was reading the exchange I decided to butt in and the user with the hiveworks know-how got mad because he thought I had been trolling him the entire time.

Did I miss something there? I read all the conversation in the last thread and it was all fairly civilized

It was, I only showed up when the conversation was over I did't even quote any of them. I just mentioned the hijab in the hiveworks faq

Great, thank you so much user. I'll read both of those threads. I just really don't want to get myself (and my comic- it's my baby!) involved in something like Hiveworks if other artists have run into concerning issues with them.

Oh the comment about "voting Trump"? I think the user was mad because he thought you were bones (who doesn't hide that he is a Trump supporter and is pretty much a troll) I didn't think it was because of the hiveworks deal. At least I understood it that way, was kinda late.

Hiveworks doesn't look too bad all things considered, if anything the only concern is that if you already had your webcomic being hosted somewhere (that is, tapas and others) and you get accepted, you have to pretty much DELET THIS so the new site (which is a brand new website done by hiveworks).

Sakana used to be hosted on Smackjeeves iirc and once they got accepted on HW they did that.

It may be an issue if you care about spamming your comic everywhere but desu hiveworks gets a lot of traffic so I don't think it's a huge problem.

Thanks. I draw on an A3 size, it's big enough for drawing detailed stuff and do perspectives without becoming crowded.

This is the seventh page of the comic i've started, you can read the rest here: loosecannons.net

>There was a thread about dead webcomics last night

Do you have the link to the archived thread by any chance?