I drew my first comic. Thoughts?

I drew my first comic. Thoughts?

Also, I might draw more and post them on my tumblr @omgsuperpuft

Here's the second comic I drew the next day.

Still better than anything Marvel is putting out.

bumping for more feedback

bump

last bump before I let the thread die and I post elsewhere

Can you really not go four seconds without bitching about Marvel in completely unrelated threads

he does this often?

Not one guy, just endless obsessed Marvelfags

Not bad man. Keep doing more and hit the drawfag threads.

thanks. I'll try to do that!

pretty funny

Good work, I liked the first one, but the dots in the lettering are distracting.

If your art is going to look like that, your writing needs to be better. "Lol I saw gross picture" is not a very good punchline. Punchline comics get by on shit art, so if you're funny it can work. Right now I don't think you're funny.

thanks for the constructive criticism! I'll definitely try and work on my artwork and writing.

I haven't drawn anything since high school though and that's been years ago so I just kinda got excited about this :)

this is the funniest comic in history

are you being sarcastic? because I definitely wouldn't go that far

normally i would advise you go to /how is your webcomic/ but Peroid-Fetish-Shit-Storm-Causing Man just arrived

I'm only half kidding. To be fair webcomics are 99% abysmally unfunny. The fact that this made me at least crack a smirk is an accomplishment

What's the TLDR explanation of this? Sorry I don't really frequent Sup Forums to often so I'm not really on the up and up

Well I appreciate that. I'm happy I helped you smile, if only a little!