Storytime of /ourgirl/'s webcomic

Storytime of /ourgirl/'s webcomic

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shgg-comic.tumblr.com/post/169894707456/chapter-1-warm-summer-air-cover-art-and-cast-info
steeckykees.tumblr.com/
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that's all for now, dorks

So is this this three lesbians?

tall one is a dude
...I think....

lol this comic sucks

Nothing suggests that, I'm gonna assume girl until proven otherwise.

I'm mostly assuming from

How can you fuck up a premise like this? Half of the comics are shit.

What's bad about it?

I like it

I thought so too at first but their chest is conveniently obscured and the speech bubble could be saying "nice pussy" for all we know. I think it's deliberate that it's not so obvious.

I noticed the artist avoided using pronouns with the character, so I'm pretty sure they're either nonbinary, or that level of goth where you cant tell if they're a man or a woman.

I'm with this guy. I see goth, I become content. I am simple man.

Pan is that you

It's not even remotely amusing.

Not either of those anons, nor Pan, but I sort of like it because it reminds me of the South Park goth bits.
Not delivered as entertainingly, but all the same sometimes I like to see character types and subcultures upfront that are usually just wallpaper or token members of an ensemble.

Only thing I find odd is we're introduced to "Merken" and "Kocha" first as the comic pair, but "Mote" seems the most fleshed out even though she's introduced like a third wheel. We're shown she has a job, has opinions on music, browses the internet and has views on that, and has opinions about her associates, what a curve ball.You're expecting me to make innuendo about her being more "developed" because of her breasts, but no. Of course, I sort of just did, so maybe?

Confirmed non-binary here:

shgg-comic.tumblr.com/post/169894707456/chapter-1-warm-summer-air-cover-art-and-cast-info

All the characters are distinct and emotive, I can see myself enjoying this.

To the author: Do you plan on telling a story with these characters or do you just want to play house with them?

Well, nothing's perfect, I suppose.

I hate these non-binary types because they usually think that since they're not the epitome of whatever gender they are, and that the standards are so fucking rigid, that they have to be some special snowflake option.

You can be androgynous and still be a boy or a girl, for fucks sake.

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JFC just tell me if they were born with a pussy or a dick

Guys I like this comic but don't ever fucking storytime a /hyw/ comic or make a seperate thread for it in general it literally never goes well ever.

My money is firmly on Penis.
I'm interested in how they handle their new demon trap.

True, but what's the fun in making good decisions

Huh, its refreshing to see a female character being a bitch and getting punished for it for the sense of comedy. Actually its refreshing for any type of character. Really if we look at this, isnt that a formula in making a good comedic comic?

Is gud comic. I laughed.

Same here, a person says stupid shit for the sake of comedy, they get punished comically.

Well now men can complain about "why are all the male characters women make are stupid tall and skinny?" You'll see
How jumbled people get when something unintentional is considered intentional by way of victimization.

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It's a chick.

We don’t actually know what they are

artist/author?

>the screen

t. crab in a bucket

this thread has gone pretty great and I don't doubt these are gonna be regular threads as long as someone keeps posting the author's new pages.

stop trying to drag people down into your circlejerk.

Hey, I like these! They don't feel like any other 'comedy' webcomics, and it's kinda refreshing to see a gal write herself as the butt of the joke.

She indeed is /ourgirl/.

>tfw no big schnoz goth gf

one of the best comics /hyw/ has to offer.

I still can't decide if fringe goth is a guy.

This is shit, take it back!

Just about everything gives me an erection. And so does this. I wish I had that one SPC item that makes whatever you type in the searchbar. I would do nothing but look up and post rule 34 of everything.

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>More like top of the sharts
Oh i am laffin'

>That's a nice p-

What else could it be but penis?

That’s a nice p-air of X chromosomes you’ve got there.

It’s not too much of leap.

Pussy?

I think it is exactly remotely amusing.

These are pretty cute

So she's a thin female Ronnie?

HA nice.

They got a site for these or just their Tumblr?

Feels like it's best suited for an audience of edgy older-teen wannabe-witch blogger girls, not my demographic.
That said, it wasn't until the "Merken Moves Out" one that I realized their skin is normal tone.

Good character design does not a good comic make.

The characters aren't distinct enough in voice, the writing is stiff without feeling intentionally so, and it's minimalist and static at once. It doesn't really have anything going for it besides the designs in either the literary or visual fields. It's basically a half step above Owlturd; not quite the exact same joke forever, but a comic formatted for writing over art with bland writing.

Porn pls

>goth horny asshole pansexual edgy girl, also allegedly "charismatic and extroverted"
>hipster lolita fashion weeb who's also insecure
>aloof lanky enby who's a jack-of-all-trades cool guy/enby
>and now a super trap demon twink who's also really gay and likes dressing as a girl

We need one more card to complete the Gen-Zed-Goth-as-Fuck-Straight-From-Tumblr royal flush. Who's it going to be? My money's on a goofy hybrid pet that recites nihilistic philosophy, is obsessed with some quirky foreign food, and pisses on the couch just so the rest of the house can sit in it.

I like it!

>shit ton of sand s.a.

This is Sup Forums.

>Work on a webcomic for over 2 years, planning and building character personalities
>Pay out of pocket for artist because I'm confident in my work
>Post 3 pages a week and get good feedback from the 40-ish people that read my shit
>Goth tits and awful punchlines
>INSTANT FUCKING CLASSIC 10/10 HAHA I LOVE THIS SHIT SO MUCH

I don't even care anymore, man. Sex sells I guess

Your writing probably isn't great, honestly. You probably also don't coordinate interesting page layouts with your artist and aren't appealing to a sustainable demographic or advertising properly.

I know it's a wash since people will heckle you for being salty, but I'd like to see your comic for myself. I could be wrong. It could be great.

>Your writing probably isn't great, honestly
Neither is this goth comic. The only appeal here is the T&A, which confuses me even more because there's more than enough porn on the internet as it is to fill a billion lifetimes.

>but I'd like to see your comic for myself.
Nope. I'm just going to get shitcanned for even challenging people's view on this comic

>Calling a vagina a pussy

Are you 12?

I feel like it's right up that goth chicks alley to call a vagina a pussy

I went on above earlier about being more interested in odd ball dynamics than anything else, but due to feeling slighted after choosing to pay money for an artist and choosing to wander into a thread about another comic you're clearly chosen to dug into that trench and there's no explaining to you no conflict is here.

Your hyperbole is also telling, there was something like 35 posters here, some of them received this negatively, some neutrally but were curious about some offhand thing like the lampstand's gender, some received it positively but not remotely with any enthusiasm about its quality. In comparison you say you have 40 or so dedicated readers giving good feedback frequently, so I'm not sure why you're worrying about the few crumbs around someone else's plate.

I'm not even disagreeing with you, just pointing to areas that could explain your lack of recognition.

And it's really a shame you approached it like this. If you'd posted a page of your work and said "People really love OP's comic, but I can't seem to get any feedback on my own work. Am I doing something wrong -- aside from not having a bunch of sexy goth girls?" you could habe subtly dissed OP while advertising yourself, allowing you to anonymously vent as "another user" by replying to yourself and keeping out some details.

I really do want to read it; if you've put two years into it then it has to be worth a glance.

I'm actually just shitposting. The comic itself isn't anything special, but I was hoping to get a rise out of someone.

I don't have a comic.

Well, sorry I guess. I only felt pity.
Moreso now.

It's alright.
Reading this thread I can see ambiguous gender of smoking skeleton goth can be used to the writers advantage for jokes.

What makes her /ourgirl/

It's okay. I know you're the author or a friend of the author who posted this here so you could troll your friend with our weird comments so here goes.

Can you draw the titty goth swallowing the mean goth whole, while she's barefoot and taking a dump? Also please be my gf.

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>Haha wow yeah so surprising
Except for the fact that they post on /hyw/ on a daily basis.

Gen Z aren't goth. That's more of a GenX/early millennial thing.

>he doesn't hang out with neogoths

Long nose?

I'm not going to read your webcomic drew

same thing is why some "genderfluid" people think that "i'm a girl when i wear a dress and i'm a guy when i wear pants!" it's really fucking backwards.

These are funny. I like the art style and trashy roommates sharing a house.

>gender is a social construct and isn't REEEEEEEEEEEEEal
>pants make me a guy today XD
>dresses make me a girl today XD

What the fuck is that in the first panel?

A succubus odd-jobber from a webcomic that gets too many threads here.

I REALLY like the art for these.

dewd I actively refuse to look at your works because you shill this badly

This is nice

I never have seen this comic or a thread for it though.

So how does one even become a goth girl

Step 1: Be a girl

They pop up from time to time. They're the threads with "discuss the comic!" in the OP.

steeckykees.tumblr.com/
shgg-comic.tumblr.com/

i thought it was cute, will be keeping my eye on this. thanks op

I like it.