How do I write good melodies?

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I came up with this. Is this a good enough motif to build a piece?

of course you would. Would she make out with you though? hmmm makes you think

she would have no choice if you know what I mean

Oh, do you play woodwind? You might not have the same octave range as me

I like it user

yes.. her nose is big, but calming... i look at her and i'm in awe of her beauty... but she is too confident for me.. too confident

her nose is cute, fuck you

"big, but calming... i look at her and i'm in awe of her beauty" you fucking mongol

Just take a pen and shove it up your ass

I already assume by these questions that you're thinking more of fame and money than actually dedicating yourself to the creation of good music, in which case don't, because your music will be shit just like the rest of the sea of shit music that we live in today.