I fixed Nu-Wars

Episode IX reveals that Rey is Palpatine's daughter, and The Force has chosen her as a Supreme Being to end all dark side vs light side conflics for eternity. This explains how she is so super-powered.Once she learns her heritage and descent from Palpatine, and frustrated with how powerless and weak the Resistance is, she becomes obssessed with completing the Emperor's work (similar to the Kylo/Vader situation, only happening in reverse) Craving power and status, and realizing that the Light Side path will always limit her power, she will turn to Dark Side and the movie will end with her betrayal of the Resistance in a way that annihilates them. Following that she ascends as a Dark Lord,forcing Kylo out of his position as leader of the First Order and leaving him for dead and plunging the Galaxy into an era of Darkness where she uses her Goddess-tier powers to enslave the Galaxy and crush everyone who resists, fermenting a tyranny that turns the whole Galaxy into a society of slaves who worship her out of fear

Next trilogy will start with a redeemed Ben Solo badly disfigured. Initially demoralized and hiding out in fear and doubt and believed to be dead.But then with the guidance of Anakin and Luke's Force Ghosts becomes revitalized.Scouring the Galaxy to form a school of Grey Jedi from various quirky and interesting troublemaking Force-sensitive outlaws (who turn out to be the Knights of Ren from a misunderstood Snoke prophecy)These knights are descended from Jedi themselves, so we get Qui-gonn and Obi Wan force ghosts interacting with them.In a twist,Rey's vision of them in TFA is actually a vision of them in the future,all dressed as Kylo to confuse her in the Final Battle in which they all die fighting Rey. Ultimately ending with Ben sacrificing himself, near-death after a hopeless duel with Rey, and Rey allows him to kill her once she realizes what shes become in a moment of self-reflection, and they die in each other's arms

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Cool story bro

Some nice ideas here but Disney is too pussy to make Rey evil even though her toy sales and kids hate her regardless of how goody-two shoes shes been. Shes basically the 2018 version of 2005 John Cena, the only way to salvage her character is to make her turn heel, but Disney will insist on handing her victory after victory after victory while portraying her as an angel that can do no wrong

Great, great. Just leave them right there on the floor on your way out.

I dont get it

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yeah no this is just as retarded as disney

everything aside from her being sheevs offspring is shit

etf I want Rey to become evil and bite my dick off now

I'd have her be Sheev's (grand)daughter, and he comes to her as a spooky force ghost but as it turns out Sheev did nothing wrong an the Jewdi were just cheating everyone, because Alderaan was building WMDs and needed to be destroyed to save the galaxy.

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Nah. It’s actually “bold” and interesting. I like it.

Sounds a whole lot better than what I expect will happen. Unfortunately, they don't have the balls to allow something like that. Episode 8 was ruined for me when they took the dramatic, cliffhanger meeting between Rey and Luke at the end of episode 7 and turned it into a cheap laugh in this one. And to top it off it was after a your momma joke. I'm done with the whole series until they fire Kathleen Kennedy and everyone else involved in decision making for SW's.

its star wars OP, no matter what there are gonna be people who hate your pitch. The grey jedi stuff is cool like it was in tlj and the idea of luke guiding a palpatine is a nice ironic twist. You could always make it so that she's a discarded experiment form palpy to create a new anakin.

30 years after RotJ

Rey is 20?

>bold and interesting
in what fucking way, It doesn't add flaws it makes her psychopath.
I swear is disney having such trouble writing stories they use Sup Forums to gauge reaction

>now

yes it was played for cheap laughs but you make it sound like that was the only purpose and you are being willfully ignorant on the significance and the implications that come with him throwing the saber away.

Disney can't make anything decent

RotS novel was line edited by GL himself > New EU books

>Next trilogy
Stopped reading there

>everyone who has opinions or suggestions different than mine is a paid shill

What are you, 9 years old?

>Next trilogy
You fucked up

a sincere and dramatic moment done in by a cheap laugh gesture

don't remind me, $15 for that piece of shit book.
Read it they said. You'll understand what happened they said.
The only thing i understood was that Palpatine had the right idea. If i knew this was what the resistance was fighting for i woulda supported Sheev's 100%

all i understand is that this is painfully written and if you think this is gonna bring anyone into theaters you should get your headchecked

I love it. Thank you for villain Rey. Makes me hard.

yep, has no significance on the plot or lukes characterization for the film. Just complete cheap attempts at laughter.

she's going to put the blue crystal from annikin's saber that exploded and she collected the parts of before leaving snoke's ship into one end of part of her junk staff and put the red crystal that luke found into the end of part of her junk staff to make a double bladed lightsaber with one end having a blue beam and the other end a red beam.

This. I popped a boner. Imagine her in leather pants and thigh-highs making everyone kneel and kiss her boots

That book was great.

TELL THAT TO ZOD'S SNAPPED NECK

kill yourself you willy wonka wobbly woobly xer xim faggot

I dont get it

Worst. Fan fiction. Ever.

Shit like this makes me glad /tv doesn't write movies because op's story is garbage fanfic tier

Nigger how can she be Palpantines daughter? Moe like granddaughter

Make her a force experiment, palpatine and vader tried to create a powerful force user the same way palpatine did with his master, boom, her skill is justified.

its trash, i could write better

Do it then

This is stupid so it will definitely happen

not the same user, but im gonna give it a shot.
>Rey like Anakin would be a scavenger/repairman of old shuttles and ships.
>This will give her the skill level to pilot ships and repair things in general.
>At a young age Rey is able to force push and pull small objects no bigger than a wrench but she's hit a roadblock there and can no longer improve by herself.
>Rey and co are captured she now uses the force to pull the key/card out of a jailers pocket.
>Rey and Finn are chased by Kylo who proceeds to beat Finn bloody.
>Afraid for her friends life for the first time Rey taps into the power of the dark side and ambushes Kylo with a giant Boulder
>Impressed, Kylo offers to train Rey in the ways of the force.
>Recognizing that Kylo is a heartless monster who killed his own father she retreats with Finn when the planet is blowing up.
>She then uses the map to find Luke and offer him the lightsaber.
>As she hands Luke the lightsaber he breaks down crying finally the only remants of his dad is returned to him.
>Rey desires to be taught in the ways of the force and become a jedi from the legends
>Luke explains that being a jedi isn't all its cracked up to be but ultimately relents.
>Luke explains the reason he is on this planet is to find lost force techniques specifically one that is able to cut one off from the force.
>Luke explains how Snoke seduced Ben to the dark side, but that he couldn't bear to kill his own nephew.
>Now Kylo is so strong in the force a duel between them can only result in death for one of them.
>This is why he disappeared for so many years so that he can save his nephew.
>Luke agrees to train Rey the next day.
>Rey demonstrates her force push and pull ability.
>Luke askes her to levitate a boulder
>Rey is unable to and Luke chuckles
>In anger she taps into the dark side and lifts boulder overhead.
>Luke admonishes her and aplogizes cue lecture about the dark side.
>Luke gives yoda/like advice on the object weight is only in your mind

Alot of this is what happened though, its just spelled out more for the audience and just tweaks shit from tfa and tlj and a retread of empire in some aspects. This is literally what i thought ep 8 was gonna be

>Rey lifts the boulder.
>Luke praises her and says she's better than him at his age
>Rocky montage of Luke and Rey practicing the Light saber and the force
>Rey recieves a distress call and must leave
>Although Luke knows both of them aren't ready he knows Leia is in trouble and agrees to help.
>They pack the jedi artifacts/books onto the falcon and fly away.
>Luke hopes the combination of Rey and him can take Kylo alive
>They both fail Kylo has become stronger than ever and luke is old and hasn't been training as much plus Rey is too inexperienced
>They retreat and change plans Luke makes Rey promise to escape alive with leia and the rebellion and don't look back
>Luke tries to buy time by goading another fight with Kylo
>Kylo talks about how he is the master of the force and himself never again will he be chained under Luke/Han/Leias shadow
>Luke points out hes only traded masters and the new one will never love him as he does
>Kylo doesn't need love he has the dark side a power greater than any in the galaxy and with it he will be Darth Vader come again
>Luke points out Anakin only fell to the dark side because of his love for Padme and rejoined the light because of love for Luke.
>Kylo cuts Luke down
>Kylo wants Rey and Leia captured.
>Suddenly luke appears behind Kylo and says their duel isn't over
>Kylo is confused but raises his lightsaber to fight luke again
>In this fight luke just dodges his lightsaber strikes
>Finally Kylo strikes Luke but this time he feels like hes hitting air.
>He moves the light saber around Lukes force ghost
>Luke explains that he will always be watching over Ben before pointing out the resistance has escaped and fading away
>Kylo screams nooooo
>Rey reading the jedi texts before Luke appears and asks if she needs a hand.

no it isn't your lying through your teeth

alot of this is tlj minus the nuance. And the interesting denationalization of luke and the jedi..

serious Sup Forums related question, how do you think her pussy taste like?

no im not, it is very similar. Just small details have been changed but ultimately results in the same characterization and plot outcomes.

Why is she wrapped in a giant red napkin?

>Sing Fair Harvard

bags of sand

Change rey to a white male and give him some character flaws. There much easier.

is disney going too far with halal wardrobe?

I reckon Rey will be the grand daughter of Padme's sister. It will turn out that Padme was actually stronger with the force than Annakin was but her powers weren't discovered because of misogyny. Portman will appear as a ghost at the end of the movie making out with Christensen, also ghost Samuel L will be in that same scene, they'll get fucking everyone in.

Wrong. All Wrong. Terrible Idea. I already have it planned out.

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My money is on the first lightsaber spear/naginata, fitting weapon for a woman.

Actually really good. Explain Snoke tho.