KND The Fall

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Mushi: Oh wow, the arctic base! It's been a while

Mushi: So many memories, and I don't even have my camera with me

2: How the hell did she get here so fast?!

5: We aren't ready!

2: Activate the security protocol!

86: That's...

1: The security protocol

4: What's going on?!

Ashley: Is this supposed to be normal?

I was actually just about to start translation again, glad to see that you haven't given up M8.

Sincerely yours, tablet user.

Mushi: Shit...who the hell sealed the base?

And I only have one explosive spike ...

Hmph! Luckily this place is falling apart

Bumpin

So, no translated pages?

4: How the hell did she know we were here?!

2:I don't know, she's using the maintainence lines to get around the base

4: Where are you headed now?

2: Wally!

4: What's wrong?

2: She's headed towards the hangar bay!

4: Kuki...

3: What's going on?

3: I'll send him a memo

Mushi : I thought so

Mushi: This explains a lot

Mushi: Hey again little sis

3: Mushi, please stop this...

Mushi: Sshh! Don't talk!

I sincerely hope that we can somehow recruit a photoshop user to put all the translations into proper comic form.

It'll be a little jarring, scince there are about 3-4 different tl anons doing it, but I believe that we can make it something to consider the likes of were-ed and tails gets trolled.

Mushi: You know what? I had a revenge and hate speech planned, like when a Disney villain sings a song about their macabre plans, but...

Mushi: Seeing you like this, I realized it wasn't necessary

Mushi: You aren't even half of what you used to be; weak, weeping, dependent...

Mushi: I've already surpassed you

Mushi:
But quiet, you can still be of help, I will use you as a damsel in danger to have all your little group of friends at my mercy

Mushi: And then I will break a couple of things ..

Well If I was the one to kickstart this insanity here may as well go and do some of it

Mushi: And as for you little sister, don't worry

Mushi: I will return you home and erase me from the memory of the whole family

Mushi: They'll forget they ever had an extra daughter

Mushi: And at last they could be the perfect family they've always wanted

Mushi: Simple, no?

Mushi: Cooperate, it's the best thing the great Number 3 can do

Mushi: Only a ghost of her former self


Mushi:

3: I know...

Will try to do the original batch that I upload here for now

3: Hey girls!

3: My name is Kuki! Could I play with you

Girl A: Why are you so dirty

3: Eh... I was playing in the trees

Girl B: Sorry, we're going the beatuy salo at the new shopping mall

Girl B: And anyways, aren't you a little old to be playing with rainbow monkeys?

3: I didn't understand it, despite being the same age as them...

Kuki's dad: Your grades have greatly improved kuki

Kuki's dad: I knew you should have stay away from that gang of friends you used to meet

Teacher: We expect much more from your daughter

3: Actually, I was alone, so I dedicated myself to studying

3:And things only got worse

86: Tell me what happened

5: I made a stupid mistake...

3: Abby?

5: I... I think I slept with Wally

86: What?!

5: I know! It was stupid of me! We were drunk and who knows what else

5: We promised to forget about it

3: I never had anything serious with Will, but then I realized how much they had grown

3: I was frustrated, I was poisoned in silent jealousy and finally decided that I had to change

3: I adapted and chaged into how I assumed a girl should be

Girl A: Wow, you hair is beautiful! What's you name?

3: Me? I'm...Kuki

Girl A: Would you like to go out with us?

Girl B: Do you have an email account?

Girl C: Will you go to the lake with us later?

3: Ehh?

3: It was so exciting to have people to talk to again

3: Enough! Hahaha

3: Overtime, I met a lot of new people and thought that I would never be lonely again

3: And finally, I felt ready to get serious with Wally

3: But instead, Wally began to move away, even more than before

3: Not only him, but everyone else

Girl A: Did you see that weird kid?

Girl B: Anyway, do you want to go to the mall?

3: It didn't matter how many people I knew

3: I still felt alone

Shouldn't it be older sister?

3:Who am I supposed to be? What am I supposed to do know?

Young 3: Do you remember what we did with Mushi when she behaved badly?

3: Eh?

Young 3: We gave her a pat and we sent her to her room

Young 3: Quiet, just remember how we used to be and find the way ...

3:It's true... I'm not like that

Mushi: Eh?

3: Mushi... you've been very bad

Mushi: Aaah?!

3: You're going to stop all this and you'll clean up this mess!

Mushi: You! How dare you!

And that's the end of Chapter 16. I'm headed to bed, so if anyone wants to do the last three chapters, go ahead

To be honest, Spanish isn't my first language. I knew a bit from high school, but I used Google translate to help me out with some of it. Hermanita came out as little sister for some reason

Alright, I'll take a gander at it now.

...

N3:need to avoid getting hit directly as much as possible.

N3:that suit adds more power to her attacks

N3:I can only hurt her

N3:in the parts without armor.

FUCK

>mfw I'm spending my tuesday night reading a fan work of KND
Also anyone got a link to the EEnE one that's apparently good also?

>Images during a storytime
C'mon man.

user who did the translated pages in the past thread. Started cleaning chapter 16 but had to go, only "completed" page I have is this one (apologies for posting an image during a storytime). Also I did this as a hobby with paint.net so I might not complete them in a long time. If someone with better photoshop skills can do it, it'd be great, no real need to know Spanish beforehand since the OP is already doing that part.

She calls her "hermanita", the sufix "ita" is used in Spanish to denote tiny or younger things. In this context, Mushi speaks to Kuki derogatively, so it's kind of used well, not really a literal translation for this one.

I swear to god this title page makes the comic look more like fucking Naruto than KND

I will try to do the intial batch I uploaded, ironically I happen to also use paint.net, shit is good/simple than mess with fucking Gimp specially that takes 5ever to fucking launch

That's great, I have some work done already on 16 and 17, 15 I corrected some errors when posted in the last thread and updated. I'll try to help you with 16 to 19 and will post or put up a link for download when you dump the original batch of 1-14 iirc in the future.

Bumpin the thread here

KND the Fall?
>KND falls apart after Father won. His victory only happened due to a greater cataclysm engulfing the world but that's another story.
>Twenty years later. Father is now one of five big dogs ruling over what's left of humanity. He's pretty small time compared to the nasty scientists, sadistic generals, and greedy executives running things, but they all enjoy tormenting children so he's tolerated.
>Being a kid is utter shit now. Like Victorian factory worker levels of shite.
>In the slums and outskirts of decayed suburbs, people report getting attacked by grotesque thirty year old hobos wearing ill fitting clothes, wielding makeshift weaponry scrapped together from house wear appliances and garbage.
>They end up kidnapping children.
>One kid eventually escapes and tells a grim story of miserable manchildren desperately holding onto what remains of their youth as it slowly decays and turns to ash.
>Of fat greasy men playing with toys, crone women playing with dolls, speaking of their eternal hatred for 'adults.'

What, is there another fanfic with the same name?

>and somewhere, a boy looks down into himself, and realizes that he has nothing
>that he is nothing
>zilch, nada...
>Zero

Bumping, hopefully you niggas will post the rest.

Bumparino

I'll be available to translate in ~5 hours but I'll just bump for now.

I'll try to do the Chapters I've translated last thread once I've got time. I'll work backwards from Chapter 14, so if you feel like going beyond your batch, L S, we can meet in the middle.

Imagining Hinata as Kuki is so absurd, I wish there was a cross-media drawthread I could r/ that on.

Maybe if I go to Sup Forums and ask for her in a ragged green long-sleeved sweater?

>I'll send him a memo
Memo is actually a nickname for Guillermo, numbuh 2's name in the Spanish dub.

>"I'll call Hoagie"

Just a few pages, since my professor's late.

Mushi: Don't get brave on me now!
Mushi: This changes nothing!

Mushi: You're really irritating me now!

N3: I won't let you do any more harm, Mushi.

N2: Mushi is going crazy!

N2: Something is interfering with the Base controls.

N2: Wait a minute...

N2: Damnit Kuki!
N5: What is it?!

N2: Tell Wally to hurry.

TL: It literally says Mushi is losing control, but the next sentence also mentions controls and I thought that didn't flow very well.

Mushi: Surrender, damnit!

N3: I told you... I won't let you hurt any more people.

Mushi: Then forgive me,

Mushi: But this'll leave a mark!

N3: ...No

N3: You'll have to forgive me.

Mushi: What did... you do?!

N3: Stop...you...

Mushi (thinking): I need to get out of here

N3: No...

N3: No... I won't let you

Mushi: Let go!

N3: Mushi...

N3: Stop...

TL: the artist fucked up the color for the top speech bubble

N5: Oxygen levels and air pressure are dropping dramatically.

N5: Kuki won't hold out much longer!

N2: Tell Wally to open the hangar door manually, it will break the seal and levels should stabilise.

N2: I'll deal with Mushi for now
N5: What?!

N2: I need you to take over the Base controls and keep Rachel safe.

N2: If my brother is mixed up in all of this, that makes me partly responsible too.

N5: No, you can't go by yourself! Wait for the other guys and...

N2: Trust me,

N2: I've got a plan

Lecture sucks so I'll just keep trickling these out

N4: I'm at the hangar!
N5: Open the gate.

N4: I can see her!

N4: Kuki!

N4: Kuki! Are you alright?

N3: Yeah... I think so.

Mushi: Damn you... I'll blow you into a thousand pieces!

Mushi: I don't have time for this

>tfw I'm starting to learn Spanish through translating these

N3: My head!
N4: You should've waited for us, Kuki! You put yourself in a lot of danger!

N3: Hmm, so now you're worried about me.

N4: What?! Of course I'm worried about you!

N3: I thought that you were too busy with Ashley.
N4: What does she have to do with anything?
N3: I don't know, you tell me.
N4: Are you kidding me?

N3: We'll discuss it when we're done with this, deal?

N4: Deal.

N4: Let's go stop your sister.

Mushi: How the hell do I get to the ventilation system?

TL: Another confusingly coloured speech bubble.

N2: Some things never change, do they?

Mushi: No...

Mushi: They don't.

N2: Would you like to play a game? Just like old times?

Mushi: Marco Polo? Sure... why not.

TL: It says 'hide and seek', but the next image looks more like Marco Polo.

CHAPTER END

I'll continue when I get home

Chapter 18: Fire and Snow

Mushi: People without a purpose are always the easiest to manipulate.

Tommy: I can't believe you!

Tommy: You turned down an offer from Mandark Corp?

N2: Got a problem with that?

N2: I don't want anything that has to do with those companies.
Tommy: But with your potential, you could help change the world!

N2: That's your dream, not mine.

N2: I want to do something more low key, like repairing and selling cars.

Tommy: You have no idea of what you're throwing away. The Red Queen taught us that we should use our skills to help the world.

N2: The Red Queen isn't around anymore, Tommy.

Tommy: Then I'll have to show you the way.

Mushi: It didn't take too long to convince him.

Mushi: Angry kids are usually very proud, very stubborn.

Mushi: The kid just needed a guide, a person he could believe in.

Mushi: He placed his faith in me and I became his new queen.

Mushi: Now tell me,
Mushi: How do you feel, now that you know that you're baby brother is working for me?

N2: I had already figured that out, and you're trying to fill some gigantic shoes there.

Mushi: Oh yeah?

N2: Yeah. And I can also deduce that it was him who saved your mind from being wiped.

N2: And if I'm honest, I doubt you being 'his queen' is the only reason he's been helping you.
N2: My brother did always have a soft spot for troubled girls.

Mushi: I guess he inherited that from you, or have you already forgotten about Lincoln?
N2: Ouch!

TL: It's unclear how sure numbuh 2 was about his hunch in the first speech bubble, but I decided to make him 100% sure for max smugness.

Mushi: I must admit, your brother is an idiot, but he's also quite interesting.

Mushi: With my guidance and his potential, he might even surpass you one day.
N2: Could be.

N2: But you're wrong about one thing...

N2: He doesn't need your help.

N2 (thinking): I promise I won't point a gun at someone ever again.

TL: 2 literally says he won't ever *raise* a gun at someone again, but I decide to change it to 'point' to emphasize his loophole

N2: But I'll need you to help me out by raising the pressure levels in the vents when I meet with Mushi.
N2: Trust me, we'll get out of this mess before dawn.

Mushi: Ridiculous! A little steam won't protect you.

Mushi: Your gun won't be effective against my new armor either.

N2: I knew that already.

Mushi: My armor... feels heavy.

N2: Abby! Cut the pressure!

N5: I've lost control of the Base!

N5: Nothing is responding!

N2: So he's here with you.

N2: And he knows you're immune to heat.

Tommy: Are you okay, Mushi?
Mushi: My suit has shut off, it feels really heavy.

Tommy: My brother must've used a very strong electrical pulse.

Tommy: You'll have to take it off.

Mushi: Damnit.

Mushi: Now what I do?

Tommy: Keep descending until you see a shuttle.

Tommy: The package is moving as I expected.

N86: I'm not receiving any communication, what's going on?

N86: Anyway, let's stick to the plan and get Rachel out of here.

N1: Rachel, wait!

N1: I... just want to apologise for all the trouble I've caused you.

N1: I never thought joining the Galactic Kids meant so much to you.

Rachel: It's not your fault.

Rachel: I mostly hate myself.

Rachel: On top of that, this curse doesn't help my negative feelings any.

Rachel: Don't get too close to me, I can't promise I won't suddenly kill you.

TL: Rachel literally says "a lot of my hate is directed at myself" but I thought that sounded unnatural.

Also, text bubble colour suddenly lost all meaning in that last page.

N1: Sweet Christmas! I get it already, hahaha... haha

N86: Strap in, guys, we're leaving the Base.

N86: Let's trust the others to take care of the rest.

N86: We'll hide out in the Submarine Base

TL: N1 says 'dear Nanita!' but that's a Spanish thing so I've changed it to something more universal.

Mushi: Let's finish this!

Mushi: Tommy! I've got her! Prepare the rest.

Tommy: Understood.

Tommy: You hear that? We're almost done,

Tommy: Father...

CHAPTER END

Next up is the final chapter (released up to now, that is). I was thinking, should I wait for busier hours before finishing? I'm taking a break regardless, so whomever is reading this can give their thoughts.

If I wasn't mobile posting right now. I would begin editing the past pages to show English text rather than Spanish. Yet, I'm at work.

I would honestly.

It seems like there's several people planning to do that, it'd be a shame if they were doubling up on all the work.

IWhen is the next chapter gonna be out by the way?

Does the author have a consistent schedule?

Mexican here
Hermanita does mean little sis, but as you know already she's saying it to mock kuki

The author has a decently succesful patreon, so we can expect regular updates, but he also has multiple running series, including porn stuff. Those might take priority for him, who knows.

The last three chapters came out in late october, late november, and mid january respectively.

That doesn't sound too bad

Honestly, I kinda enjoy the comic so far. The only thing I would change would be to get rid of the PPG and Dexter characters, since they feel forced in

>Including porn stuff
S...sauce?

I'm thinking of doing the last chapter from 22.00 - 23.00 Paris time, which should be 15.00 - 16.00 Miami time and then NA can bump it into the real peak hours (1.00 - 6.00 Paris time).

Guy's called Accel Art

I didn't pay these patreon messages much heed, but it seems like there's three chapters left.


>Thanks for the wait, as you will have noticed, this chapter took more than a month, this was due to the fact I took a little week long vacation, I sincerely felt very tired of drawing every day and wanted to spend the holidays with my family and friends.

>The chapters will probably take longer to get out now because they are the last chapters, I don't want to limit them to only 15 pages, since I want the chapters to be conclusive enough to finish this adventure well.

>Now only a final exhibition chapter, a closing chapter for the characters and the finale are left.

turns out editing these pages is a pain in the ass

It is and its worse if you have limited time for working

Yeah, doing chapter 15 was a lot time consuming than I expected, It got faster now since I got used to my layering and text format for many pages at a time instead of going one by one.
Chapter 16 is 4 pages from being done and then I'll start doing 17 when I get back from work.

Phew, chapter 14 done.
E-mail me ([email protected]) whenever you finish a chapter, I'll add it to the mega.

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Chapter 9: Maturation and Guilt

Maturation and sacrifice, that is

Rachel: I remember the day I thought it was all over.

Rachel: We've beaten you at last.

Rachel: They'll be coming for you soon.

Father: Oh yeah? And what are they going to do?

Father: Lock me up? You know that wouldn't last for long.

Rachel: I know, that's why I thought of something better.

Rachel: We'll just wipe your memory.

>missed chance for ugandan knuckles meme