Yuragi Yuuna 70

Late again. Anyways.

[Side] Please look! .....aaaahhhh
70: Yuuna on Ice

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Ah tis the time

[Right] The Yuragi Inn is surprsingly huge
"The lake behind the mountain is frozen over!"

"There was a lake?"
"I found it on the way back from the waterfall with Sagiri-san!"
"You're seriously going to the lake on such a cold morning...!"

"Hey hey! How frozen is it?"
"If we get on, would it break?"
"It looked like it would be okay"
"Huuuh!"

"Then maybe we can go skating!?"

"Whoaaa, it really is frozen!"

"It looks like we can really skate!"

"But the center part looks pretty thin"
"So try not to stray away from the edge"
"Okay!"

"This is the first time I'll be skating!"
"Can you teach me how to do it?
"S...sure"

"Haauaugh!?"

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Fixed a bad TL

"Sagiri-chaaan!?"

"S...sorry, Fuyuzora Kogarashi......!"
"N...no, well, I'm glad you're not hurt"
"To be honest... I was all about training in my childhood"
"So I'm inexperienced in fun things like skating and skiing...!"
"Oh is that so"

"Oh that's fine"
"This is my first time too!"

"Then then, maybe Hibari should try and glide too..."
"H-Hibari!? Be careful, okay!?"

"Whoaaaa!?"

"Y...you're amazing, Hibari!"
"H-Hibari had someone take her skating every year!"

"Yes! Hibari....Hibari is now..."
"Beating Sagiri-chan!!"

"Kogarashi-kun, have you glided around before?"
"Show us!"
"Yeah, I can"

>you will never get you face stuffed and throttled by Sagiri's pantyhose covered puss
It hurts to live sometimes.

"Th...that's!"

"A camel spin!?"
"A triple toe loop!?"
"An Ina Bauer!?"

"Wow woooow!"
"As usual, what the hell are you...!?"
"I was possessed by a prodigy figure skater some time ago..."
"Kogarashi-san, that was amazing!"
"S...so cool...!"

"I...I'll try skating too!"
"Sure! Come on, Yuuna!"

"I..."
"I..."
"I...I can't mooove...!"
"Y-yeah, leave it to me!"

"There aren't any railings here, huh... hold my hands for a bit"
"Wha wha...?"
"Hand!?"
"But like..."

"Nothing to be embarrassed about!"
"That's how he first taught me too"
"I-is that so!"

"O...okay then"

"Pardon me..."

"P...please go ahead"
"Okaay, so first you stand on top the ice!"
"Stick your heels down and spread your toes into a V-shape"

"Oh, you're stable now"
"Then try stepping"
"O...okay"

"I...I see!"
"If Hibari pretended that she couldn't skate, then she could have Kogarash...!"
"But now she can't say she can't skate anymooore!!"

DON'T STOP US NOW

Fabulous.

"Teheheh... I slipped!"
"This is haarrd"

"Hey hey, Sagiri-chan!"
"Let's ask Hibari-chan how to skate together!"
"Uh... Hibari will teach Sagir...?"
"I... I guess"

"Hibari... can you?"

"Th...the... the day has finally come"
"For Hibari to teach Sagiri-chan something..."

"S...sure thing, Hibari'll teach you!"
"Just leave it to her, you two!" [TN: This whole third pronoun thing is annoying]
"Yaaaaay!"

"...hm"
"This is kinda fun once you get the hang of it"

"Sagiri-chan, you're able to skate so quickly!"
"Now Sagiri-chan is..."

"Hibari-chan, I'm glad you taught us!"
"You're really good at skating!"

"Koyuzu-chan...!"

Cheers, user

Sagiri in a chapter without Hibari WHEN?

Never, he'll force Hibari even more now.

>tfw the releases on BT are incomplete and in spanish
why lift

"Hibari-chan, do you wanna be a professional skater?"
"O-ohhh"
"Hibari isn't that good"

"But she really idolizes figure skaters!"
"Hibari would like to skate around in a pretty dress"
"I get you, I so get you!"
"I saw it on TV yesterday!"

"Okay! I can imitate just the dress!"
"Ah... okay!"

"Wah...!"

You're looking in the wrong place.

please enlighten me

"Wooow! Hibari-san, that's amazing!"
"Let's have you guys wear some too!"

"Kogarashi-saaan!"

"Am I actually skating now?"
"Yeeaah"

Delicious Yunna armpit

10/10

"I know that this fabric is skin colored..."
"But when you look at it from a distance, doesn't it look like we're extremely naked...?"
"Ohh, you're worrying too much, Sagiri-chan!"
"It's amazing, Sagiri-san!"

"Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well!"
"You can skate on your own about now, right?"
"Really!?"

"Hm...?"

"H...hey!"
"If you go too far deep..."

"The ice...!!"

Kogarashi was born to make history.

"You guys! Get back quickly!!"

"O-okay!"
"Ukyaaah!?"
"Come on, Hibari!"

"Huh...?"

"W...watch out!!"

Double spread

HIBARI

"Ukyaaah!?"
"Why the hell does this happeeeeen!?"
"I-I'm sorry! I just panicked!"
"I-it's so cooold!"
"T-turn them back to normal now, Koyuzu!!"
[Side] Does this even happen!?
You should have fun skating in a properly maintained rink.
That's one piece of common sense that Koyuzu learned today.
[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?

>New resident intensifies
Anyways colors

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>Oh no! Someone might get hurt by the skates, better remove all their clothing!

I don't know what's going on, but i'm in.

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10/10 would be in his harem

>[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?
Finally.

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Now we wait for TS user again.

Thank you.

hardcore porn like this should be banned from a childrens magazine

I've been working on it. Are you sure you want glide instead of skate here?

I know they used different words for skate and glide in the japanese, but it sounds a bit odd in english.

Let's just go with skate for consistency.

Alright.

>Powerthrusting his face into her vagina
wew lad

Pantyhose are the best.

>[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?

So, Karura or Matora visiting or moving in? I wouldn't think that Karura would move in this quickly as they're getting close to the end of the school year and between school years would be the best time for that.

On the other hand, she had a decent reception at the inn with only Sagiri holding an obvious grudge, and moving now would ensure she'd be at the inn for White Day without her being blatant about fishing for chocolate from Kogarashi.

nice meaty thighs

Is there any place that has the uncensored draws now that bzland is down?

thanks

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I'll go ahead and start posting what I've done so far for checking.

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Talking about oneself in 3rd person sounds really fucking weird in English.

Sorry just got back. I'll check it now

pan 1 bub 1: The lake behind the mountain got frozen!
pan 2 bub 3: You're actually going to the waterfall on such a cold morning...!
pan 4 bub 1: Then can we go skating!?

pan 4 bub 1: This is my first time skating!
pan 4 bub 2: Can you teach me how to do it, Sagiri-san?

pan 3 bub 3: To be honest... all I did was train as a child,

>"Now Sagiri-chan is..."
That makes close to no sense.

Try:
>That's one thing about Sagiri-chan that I really...

>"Hibari-chan, I'm glad you taught us!"
yokatta can mean good in addition to glad, like in the case here. See weblio.jp/content/よかった
>It's thanks to Hibari-chan's awesome teaching!

pan 1 (SFX bubble) (optional): Squeeze
pan 1 bub 3: Stick your heels down and spread your toes wide, so they look like V's.
pan 3 bub 3: But now it's too late to say she can't skaaate!!

pan 3 bub 2: Let's both get Hibari-chan to teach us to skate!

Oh hey, you're late. Might as well help me proofread this thing as you TLC.

>"But she really idolizes figure skaters!"
Please don't use pronouns when Hibari talks about herself. It's really awkward.
>"Hibari would like to skate around in a pretty dress"
Hibari would like to trying skating in a pretty dress too...
>"Okay! I can imitate just the dress!"
I know! If it's just the dress, I can help!

>"Am I actually skating now?"
Am I skating properly?

>"Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well!"
Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well too now!

>"You can skate on your own about now, right?"
You should be able to skate on you own by now too, right?

1) I agree that has to change.
2) I would go with "You're a really good teacher, Hibari-chan" there.

Don't get me started on those pronouns. But consistency must stay consistent, even if it's awkward as fuck

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Still working on the last page.

>Yuuna will never sit on your face
Why live?

Wondering why 池 was translated to lake instead of pond?
Also, this is 滝行: ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/滝行 Remember how Yuuna was training under the waterfall to get a better grasp of her esp?
Therefore:
>"I found it on the way back from the waterfall with Sagiri-san!"
Sagiri-san and I noticed it on our way back from meditating under the waterfall.
"I'm amazed you'd go to the waterfall on such a cold morning...!

>"So try not to stray away from the edge"
"stay" "away" seems redundant.
- So try not to stray too far from the shore.

>"To be honest... I was all about training in my childhood"
>"So I'm inexperienced in fun things like skating and skiing...!"
To be honest... I've trained day in and day out since childhood.
And I don't have experience with leisure activities like skating or skiing...

>"Kogarashi-kun, have you glided around before?"
You've skated before right, Kogarashi-kun?
>"Yeah, I can"
Sure.

>"Okaay, so first you stand on top the ice!"
Alright, let's start with standing on the ice!
>"Then try stepping"
Then let's try taking a step.
>"But now she can't say she can't skate anymooore!!"
But it's too late for Hibari to say she can't skate!!

>"Uh... Hibari will teach Sagir...?"
Uh... Hibari teaching Sagiri-chan...?
>"Th...the... the day has finally come"
>"For Hibari to teach Sagiri-chan something..."
C-can't believe the day would come...
where Hibari would be teaching Sagiri-chan...
>"Hibari... can you?"
Hibari... Would you mind?
>"Just leave it to her, you two!" [TN: This whole third pronoun thing is annoying]
Just replace pronoun with her name whenever possible... Consistency means sticking to doing it poorly.

>It's amazing, Sagiri-san!