Yuragi Yuuna 70

1) I agree that has to change.
2) I would go with "You're a really good teacher, Hibari-chan" there.

Don't get me started on those pronouns. But consistency must stay consistent, even if it's awkward as fuck

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Still working on the last page.

>Yuuna will never sit on your face
Why live?

Wondering why 池 was translated to lake instead of pond?
Also, this is 滝行: ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/滝行 Remember how Yuuna was training under the waterfall to get a better grasp of her esp?
Therefore:
>"I found it on the way back from the waterfall with Sagiri-san!"
Sagiri-san and I noticed it on our way back from meditating under the waterfall.
"I'm amazed you'd go to the waterfall on such a cold morning...!

>"So try not to stray away from the edge"
"stay" "away" seems redundant.
- So try not to stray too far from the shore.

>"To be honest... I was all about training in my childhood"
>"So I'm inexperienced in fun things like skating and skiing...!"
To be honest... I've trained day in and day out since childhood.
And I don't have experience with leisure activities like skating or skiing...

>"Kogarashi-kun, have you glided around before?"
You've skated before right, Kogarashi-kun?
>"Yeah, I can"
Sure.

>"Okaay, so first you stand on top the ice!"
Alright, let's start with standing on the ice!
>"Then try stepping"
Then let's try taking a step.
>"But now she can't say she can't skate anymooore!!"
But it's too late for Hibari to say she can't skate!!

>"Uh... Hibari will teach Sagir...?"
Uh... Hibari teaching Sagiri-chan...?
>"Th...the... the day has finally come"
>"For Hibari to teach Sagiri-chan something..."
C-can't believe the day would come...
where Hibari would be teaching Sagiri-chan...
>"Hibari... can you?"
Hibari... Would you mind?
>"Just leave it to her, you two!" [TN: This whole third pronoun thing is annoying]
Just replace pronoun with her name whenever possible... Consistency means sticking to doing it poorly.

>It's amazing, Sagiri-san!