Are these lyrics any good or just cringe

Are these lyrics any good or just cringe
Feel free to post your own lyrics for feedback ITT as well

I just don't think it's right
to feel uncomf'terble all the time
to feel trapped in a prison
that's composed of my own skin

So many years wasted
All this time gone, and where
A young man's youth, wasted
A total state of disrepair

Dirty hoodie and a distant stare
Pondering how I ended up here
Hands in pockets, a distant stare
Wondering why I have grey hair

As if it wasn't obvious
As if I deserved the best

As if it wasn't fucking obvious

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stop caring what other people think of your art

This OP.

u cant tell me what to do

stripped of individuality, world of duality
cure-less malady, embrace insanity
mindless urbanity, culture of vanity
when did we lose the humanity?

literally linkin park tier edge shit
""""art""""

Too much rhyming tbf

it's rap

Most rappers dont rhyme every other word tho

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